打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and polite, avoid slang/self-deprecation, give a clear topic sentence and one supporting reason with a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use a better vocabulary choice (e.g., ‘messy’ instead of ‘sucks’).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting tends to be messy and hard to read. For example, when I take notes quickly, typed text is clearer and easier to organize.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like ‘register’ and repetitive language. Use precise verbs (e.g., ‘enter data’, ‘search for results’).

範例: I type on a desktop keyboard every day, mainly at work. For instance, I usually enter data into our database and search for results online, so I need to type accurately and quickly.

建議: Give a concise topic sentence stating when you learned, then add a brief supporting detail about the class or context. Avoid hesitations and repetition; use correct past tense and clear phrasing.

範例: I learned to type when I was in grade school because we had a computer class. In that course, we practiced basic typing exercises and learned proper finger placement.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence about your main method for improvement, then give a specific example of practice using linking words. Avoid vague descriptions and improve grammar and word choice (e.g., ‘typing games’ or the game name ‘TypeRacer’).

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day using online typing games. For example, I play a game like TypeRacer in my free time, which helps me increase speed and accuracy because I compete against others and repeat challenging passages.

× I prefer typing because my handwritten handwriting sucks.

✓ I prefer typing because my handwriting is bad.

The phrase 'handwritten handwriting' is redundant and awkward. Use the noun 'handwriting' and an appropriate adjective 'bad' or 'poor'. Also avoid informal slang 'sucks' in formal speech. Suggestion: 'my handwriting is bad' or 'my handwriting is poor.'

× I don't have a laptop, so I type every day in the desktop, specially at work.

✓ I don't have a laptop, so I type on the desktop every day, especially at work.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'desktop' for using a device. 'In the desktop' is incorrect. Also 'specially' is often misused; 'especially' is correct for emphasizing 'at work.' Place time expression 'every day' in a natural position: after the verb or after the object.

× I register patiently, find the results and everything and register it.

✓ I register items carefully, find the results, and record them.

'Register patiently' is awkward; 'patiently' is an adverb but 'register' usually takes an object. 'Register it' is unclear. Use clearer verbs: 'register items' or 'record them.' Ensure plural agreement between 'items' and 'them.' 'Carefully' is a better adverb than 'patiently' for accuracy.

× I learned typing on a keyboard during during grade grade days.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard during my grade school days.

Use the correct infinitive 'to type' after 'learned.' Remove duplicated words 'during during grade grade.' 'Grade school days' is clearer than 'grade days.' Include 'my' for natural phrasing.

× I mean grade school because I have a subject that focuses focused on the computer.

✓ I mean grade school because I had a subject that focused on computers.

Maintain past tense consistency: 'I learned' (past), so 'I had' and 'focused' should be past. Use 'focused on computers' (plural) for the general subject matter. Remove unnecessary present tense 'have' and incorrect form 'focuses focused.'

× I improve my typing by typing by practicing it every day.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day.

Avoid repetition 'typing by practicing' and unnecessary pronoun 'it.' Use 'practicing' as a gerund after 'by.' The present simple 'improve' is fine for habitual action.

× Sometimes when I have a free time I search on the desktop that have a fast typing like the shark maybe the name of the game and you follow the name that is given to type.

✓ Sometimes when I have free time, I look on the desktop for a fast-typing game, maybe called 'The Shark,' and follow the prompts to type.

Do not use 'a free time'—use 'free time' without an article. Use 'look on' or 'search on the desktop for' rather than 'search on the desktop that have.' Match verb agreement: 'game that has fast typing' or 'a fast-typing game.' Clarify phrasing: 'maybe called' for uncertain name, and 'follow the prompts to type' is clearer than 'follow the name that is given to type.' Use commas to separate clauses.