打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more concise and fluent: state your preference clearly in the topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh, um), correct small grammar errors (e.g. "a notes" → "notes"), and use one or two specific supporting reasons linked with connectors (for example, "because" or "while"). Keep to 2–3 sentences to be natural and effective.

範例: I usually prefer typing, especially for long essays, because it’s easier to edit and I can save a backup. However, I sometimes handwrite brief notes when I need to remember something quickly or prefer a paper copy.

建議: Clarify and correct grammar and phrasing, use one clear topic sentence and then a concise reason. Remove redundancy ("I have to" repeated) and fix role description ("working as a camera" is incorrect). Use linking words like "so" or "because" appropriately and limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I usually type on a desktop keyboard every day because my job requires me to enter experimental data into a computer system. After finishing experiments, I type the results directly into the database.

建議: Use past tense consistently and make the answer slightly more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence (when you learned) and then give one specific supporting detail (what method or situation). Avoid repeating phrases and use linking words such as "for example" appropriately.

範例: I learned to type in primary school during computer classes. For example, we practiced touch-typing and learned to switch keyboard settings to type different languages like Chinese.

建議: Make the response clearer and error-free: give a direct topic sentence (how you improve), follow with two concrete methods (regular practice, specific exercises, online lessons, typing tests), avoid unclear fragments and filler, and correct grammar ("teach" → "taught", "a foreign languages" → "a foreign language"). Keep to 2–3 coherent sentences.

範例: I improve my typing mainly through frequent practice and timed typing tests. I also use online typing programs and practice switching keyboard settings so I can type accurately in different languages.

× If I'm writing a notes, uh, for myself.

✓ If I'm writing notes for myself.

The noun 'notes' should be plural without the article 'a'. The phrase 'a notes' is ungrammatical because 'a' requires a singular noun. Remove 'a' and use the plural 'notes'. Suggestion: Use 'a note' for a single item or 'notes' for multiple items (no 'a').

× I often type on a desktop keyboard in a daily life basis.

✓ I often type on a desktop keyboard on a daily basis.

The idiom is 'on a daily basis', not 'in a daily life basis'. 'Daily' functions as an adverb within the fixed phrase. Replace 'in a daily life basis' with 'on a daily basis'. Suggestion: Use common collocations: 'on a daily basis' or simply 'daily'.

× I am now working as a camera and I have to enter a lot of experimental data into the computer system.

✓ I am now working as a cameraman and I have to enter a lot of experimental data into the computer system.

The word 'camera' is a device; the intended meaning is the job role. Use the noun for the person, such as 'cameraman' or 'camera operator'. Choose gender-neutral 'camera operator' if preferred. Suggestion: Use job-title noun when referring to a person's profession.

× So I have after completing the experiments I have to type the values of the data into computer.

✓ After completing the experiments, I have to type the data values into the computer.

The original sentence repeats 'I have' and misorders phrases. Move the time clause 'After completing the experiments' to the front, remove the extra 'I have', and use the article 'the' before 'computer'. Also 'values of the data' is more naturally 'data values' or just 'the data'. Suggestion: Keep clauses in logical order and avoid repetition.

× I remember that when I was studying for the computer classes, I have to learn how to type different languages with different keyboard settings.

✓ I remember that when I was studying computer classes, I had to learn how to type in different languages with different keyboard settings.

The time reference is in the past ('when I was studying'), so the obligation verb should be in past tense 'had to' rather than present 'have to'. Also use 'type in different languages'. Suggestion: Keep past reference consistent: use past tense for obligations/events in the past.

× For example, if I have to type Chinese, I have to change my keyboard setting and type.

✓ For example, if I have to type Chinese, I have to change my keyboard settings and type.

Use the plural 'keyboard settings' because multiple settings may be involved; 'setting' singular sounds unnatural here. Also the second 'type' is vague but acceptable; consider 'and then type' or 'and type in Chinese'. Suggestion: Use plural for 'settings' and provide clearer verb phrases: 'and then type in Chinese'.

× Frequent practice is a key factor to improve how to type, just like speaking a foreign languages.

✓ Frequent practice is a key factor in improving typing, just like speaking a foreign language.

Use the gerund phrase 'in improving typing' (or 'to improve one's typing'). 'A foreign languages' is incorrect: use singular 'a foreign language' or plural without 'a' (e.g., 'foreign languages'). Suggestion: Match article with noun number and prefer gerund after 'in'.

× I remember once I taught by my teachers how to type.

✓ I remember once being taught by my teachers how to type.

The original lacks the correct passive construction. Use 'being taught' to form the passive of 'I was taught'. 'I taught by my teachers' is active and ungrammatical here. Suggestion: Use 'I was taught' or 'being taught' for passive past actions.

× I frequently practice how to type in different keyboard settings and I have a charge uh which display on my uh.

✓ I frequently practice typing in different keyboard settings, and I have a charger that displays on my ...

The phrase 'I have a charge which display on my' is ungrammatical and incomplete. Likely intended 'charger' and 'which displays on my [device]'. Also 'practice how to type' is better as 'practice typing'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'which displays'. Suggestion: Complete the sentence with the device name and use correct noun ('charger') and verb agreement.