打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời khá tự nhiên nhưng lặp từ và thiếu cụ thể. Cần có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ (ví dụ 'the feeling it brings' xuất hiện hai lần), sử dụng liên từ để mở rộng ý và đưa ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: cảm giác kiểm soát chữ viết, tốc độ sáng tạo, hoặc trường hợp sử dụng). Giữ độ dài tối đa 3-4 câu ngắn gọn.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and controlled. For example, when I write notes by hand I remember information better and can arrange ideas freely. Also, handwriting helps me slow down and think more carefully.

建議: Câu trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp ý, từ vựng chưa chính xác ('more lighter' sai, 'it don't' sai). Cần câu chủ đề ngắn, nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: kích thước, độ êm, tiện lợi khi di chuyển), dùng liên từ để nối ý và sửa ngữ pháp. Giữ 2-3 câu rõ ràng.

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it is more compact and comfortable. The keys are softer and the laptop is easier to carry, so I don't get hand strain as I sometimes do with a desktop keyboard.

建議: Ý chính có nhưng cấu trúc thì thiếu chính xác và dài dòng. Sửa thì và mạo từ, tránh câu ghép vụn. Nên nói rõ thời điểm, hoàn cảnh học và nhận xét hiện tại (ví dụ: 'I learned at six in school IT classes; now I'm slower than peers'), thêm từ nối để mạch lạc.

範例: I learned to type when I was six in an IT class at school. However, I feel that my typing speed is slower than my classmates, so I try to practice more.

建議: Câu trả lời mơ hồ và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, trật tự từ lộn xộn. Cần nói rõ phương pháp cụ thể (ví dụ: luyện gõ qua phần mềm, thực hành với bài tập tốc độ, viết văn bản trong khoảng thời gian nhất định), dùng liên từ để cấu trúc ý và giữ 2-3 câu ngắn gọn.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day using online typing programs that track speed and accuracy. During summer holidays I set aside one hour daily to do timed exercises and copy texts to build consistency.

× Not only we write, but also we can feel the way we do it and the way we create the words on the paper.

✓ Not only do we write, but we can also feel the way we do it and the way we create words on the paper.

Use of inverted auxiliary 'do' is required in negative/emphatic constructions with 'Not only' before the subject; word order should be 'Not only do we...'. Also 'the words' can be simplified to 'words' for general meaning. Suggestion: Use correct subject-auxiliary inversion after 'Not only' and avoid unnecessary definite article.

× I usually type on laptop keyboard because I don't like the feeling the desktop brings.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I don't like the feeling a desktop brings.

Countable nouns like 'laptop keyboard' and 'desktop' require an article. Use 'a laptop keyboard' and 'a desktop'. Suggestion: Use 'a' for singular countable nouns when speaking generally.

× I feel like the keyboard of a laptop is more lighter.

✓ I feel like the keyboard of a laptop is lighter.

Use of comparative 'more lighter' is redundant because 'lighter' already expresses comparison. Either use 'lighter' or 'more light' (but 'more light' is uncommon). Suggestion: Use single comparative form ('lighter').

× It's lighter and it don't bring any hurt to me.

✓ It's lighter and it doesn't hurt me.

'It' requires singular verb form 'doesn't' not 'don't'. Also 'bring any hurt to me' is unnatural; use 'hurt me'. Suggestion: Ensure correct subject-verb agreement and choose natural verb phrase.

× I've learned it when I was six years old when I have to take the IT class and at my school,

✓ I learned it when I was six years old when I had to take an IT class at my school,

Mixing present perfect ('I've learned') with past time expression 'when I was six' is incorrect; use simple past 'learned'. Also 'have to take' should be past 'had to take'. Use article 'an' before 'IT class'. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently for past events and include proper articles.

× but now I don't get along with this because I feel like I've type a little bit slower than other people.

✓ but now I don't get along with it because I feel like I type a little bit slower than other people.

Use 'get along with it' (pronoun 'it' not 'this') and present perfect 'I've type' is incorrect; use simple present 'I type' for a general statement about current ability. Suggestion: Use correct pronoun and appropriate tense for ongoing habits.

× Just do it every day and I frequently I'll in my summer holiday I start to typing each every day and each hour to improve my typing skills.

✓ I just practice every day. In my summer holiday I frequently start typing every day and every hour to improve my typing skills.

Original sentence is fragmented and contains awkward modal/auxiliary placement ('I'll in my summer holiday I start to typing') and incorrect infinitive/gerund forms ('start to typing'). Use 'practice' or 'type' and 'start typing'. Also 'each every day' is redundant; use 'every day' and 'every hour'. Suggestion: Break into clear sentences, use correct word order, and use gerund after 'start'.