打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct grammar and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons using linking words, and finish with a brief example. Fix errors like "more easier" → "easier" and unclear phrases such as "there are always not in my phone."

範例: I prefer typing because it’s neater and more convenient. For example, I can store notes on my phone and find them quickly, whereas I often misplace notebooks, so handwriting feels less reliable.

建議: Use consistent tense, a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details linked logically. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I type' not 'I typed'; 'desktop keyboards are' not 'desktop keyboard are'). Avoid unnecessary repetition like 'I love them both' without explanation.

範例: I type on a desktop keyboard every day because my laptop keyboard is broken. The desktop keyboard is more mechanical and noisy, which I like for typing accuracy, but I also appreciate the laptop for portability.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear reason with correct grammar. Avoid contradictory or fragmented statements. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' properly. Replace awkward phrasing ('nor I needed') with natural expressions.

範例: I never formally learned touch-typing because my job only requires basic typing. Therefore, I never took lessons — I type using a self-taught, informal method that meets my needs.

建議: Answer directly and provide a concise explanation with one or two supporting details. Avoid hesitations ('uh') and redundant phrases. If you truly don’t improve it, explain why and give an example; otherwise state a small practice method you use.

範例: I don't actively try to improve my typing because my job doesn't require high speed. Instead, I focus on accuracy by proofreading my messages and occasionally practicing with short online drills when I have time.

× I prefer typing because my handwriting isn't the best in the world, so typing is more convenient, more easier and it's easy for me to get back to it because I never lost it because there are always not in my phone. But if I hand write something I tend to lose it because I don't usually know where I put the notebook, so not my.

✓ I prefer typing because my handwriting isn't the best, so typing is more convenient and easier, and it's easy for me to access because I never lose it since it is always on my phone. But if I handwrite something I tend to lose it because I don't usually know where I put the notebook.

Errors: redundant comparative 'more easier' (use 'easier'), awkward phrasing 'get back to it' and tense 'never lost it' (should be present 'lose it'), incorrect negative word order 'there are always not in my phone' (should be 'it is always on my phone'), 'hand write' should be 'handwrite'. Suggestion: use correct comparative forms (either 'more convenient' or 'easier' but not both stacked), maintain present tense for habitual actions, and use clear subject references ('it' or 'it is on my phone').

× I typed on a desktop keyboard every day because my laptop keyboard broke the other day so I had to use a separate keyboard and they were both fine. But the desktop keyboard are more mechanical and more noisy. I love them both.

✓ I type on a desktop keyboard every day because my laptop keyboard broke the other day, so I have had to use a separate keyboard and both have been fine. But the desktop keyboards are more mechanical and noisier. I love them both.

Errors: tense inconsistency—'typed on a desktop keyboard every day' should be present 'type' for habitual action; mixing past event with habitual behavior requires present perfect 'have had to use' for the consequence continuing to present. Subject-verb agreement 'desktop keyboard are' should be plural 'keyboards are'. Comparative 'more noisy' should be 'noisier'. Suggestion: use present simple for habits, present perfect for recent events affecting present, ensure plural agreement and correct comparative form.

× I never learned how to type on a keyboard, nor I needed that skill because my task is and work in general often requires very basic typing skills. So I didn't engage or took classes in learning how to type because I don't. I definitely didn't need it.

✓ I never learned how to type on a keyboard, nor did I need that skill because my tasks and work in general often require only very basic typing skills. So I didn't take classes to learn how to type because I didn't need to. I definitely didn't need it.

Errors: incorrect use of 'nor' requires inversion 'nor did I need'; tense/agreement 'my task is and work in general often requires' is ungrammatical—use 'my tasks and work in general often require'; incorrect verb form 'didn't engage or took classes'—use 'didn't take classes' or 'did not engage in taking classes'; sentence 'because I don't' is wrong tense and incomplete—use 'because I didn't need to'. Suggestion: apply auxiliary inversion after 'nor', match plural subjects with plural verbs, and use base verb after auxiliary 'did'.

× I don't need to improve my typing because my work and the task is I usually do, uh, don't require that much of a skill, don't require speed or don't require profession or some skillful skills. I just type in and uh, yeah, I get used to it.

✓ I don't need to improve my typing because the work and tasks I usually do don't require that much skill, speed, or professional expertise. I just type, and I'm used to it.

Errors: awkward noun phrases 'the task is I usually do' should be 'the work and tasks I usually do'; redundant and incorrect phrases 'don't require profession or some skillful skills'—use 'professional expertise' or 'specialized skills'; 'I just type in' is informal/unclear—use 'I just type'. Suggestion: simplify noun phrases, avoid redundancy, and use concise expressions; ensure negative 'don't' applies correctly to plural subject 'work and tasks'.