打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ нужно сделать более естественным и грамматически корректным: убрать лишние слова и повторения, исправить порядок слов и артикли, а также добавить связку. Конкретно: заменить «rather than» на «to typing» или «than typing», исправить «the idea is comes to me» на «ideas come to me», убрать лишнюю «in», и перестроить фразу «I need to develop this my skill» в «I need to develop this skill». Попрактикуйтесь в произнесении полного связного предложения и сохранении длины — не более 3–4 предложений.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because ideas come to me more quickly when I write by hand. Also, writing helps me think more clearly, so I try to practice my handwriting regularly.

建議: Сократите заполнители («uh», «honestly») и повторения («use it», «use laptop keyboard») для естественности. Исправьте словосочетания: «laptop keyboard» лучше «a laptop keyboard», и уточните причину одним связным предложением с союзом. Тренируйте сокращение пауз и повторов и следите за артиклями.

範例: I don't type very often, but when I do I usually use a laptop keyboard because it's more convenient and portable, which helps me practise typing skills.

建議: Исправьте времена и согласование: «I didn't take» правильно, но далее нужно «I just tried to teach myself by practising every day». Уберите лишние артикли и завершите мысль в последнем предложении: «after using online exercises and practising, I improved». Также избегайте обрывочных фраз и обеспечьте связку между предложениями («however», «but», «as a result»).

範例: I started learning to type when I was about 14. I didn't take any formal courses; instead, I tried to teach myself by practising every day. At first I made many mistakes and typed slowly, but after using online exercises I gradually improved.

建議: Сделайте фразу более естественной и исправьте структуру: уберите «it's the only way how», используйте «the best way to improve… is to practise daily». Уточните временной объём и следуйте правилу связности: используйте «if» или «as a result» для вывода. Уберите лишние слова («make it to practice»).

範例: In my opinion, the best way to improve typing is to practise every day for 20 to 30 minutes. If you do that consistently, your typing speed and accuracy will improve noticeably.

× I prefer handwriting rather than typing because the idea is comes to me much faster, quicker than I can type in.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because ideas come to me much faster and quicker than I can type.

The original has article and redundancy issues: 'the idea is comes' is ungrammatical. Replace 'the idea' with plural 'ideas' or omit article; remove extra 'is' and use simple present 'come'. Use 'prefer A to B' not 'rather than' for this structure; 'faster, quicker' is redundant so use 'faster' or 'much faster and quicker' corrected to 'much faster and quicker' combined more naturally. Suggestion: use 'I prefer handwriting to typing because ideas come to me much faster than I can type.'

× I need to develop this my skill.

✓ I need to develop this skill of mine.

Incorrect word order and pronoun choice. 'this my skill' is ungrammatical; use 'this skill of mine' or 'my skill' depending on emphasis. Suggestion: 'I need to develop this skill of mine.'

× Honestly, I don't type uh very often, but when I use it, I usually use laptop keyboard because it's more convenient and also helps me to develop my skill.

✓ Honestly, I don't type very often, but when I do, I usually use a laptop keyboard because it's more convenient and also helps me develop my skills.

Pronoun/reference and article errors: 'when I use it' should be 'when I do' to avoid unclear 'it'. 'use laptop keyboard' needs an article: 'a laptop keyboard'. 'helps me to develop my skill' better as 'helps me develop my skills' (omit 'to' after 'help' and plural 'skills'). Suggestion: use 'when I do' and include 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'.

× I started learning to type on the keyboard when I was about 14.

✓ I started learning to type on the keyboard when I was about 14.

This sentence is grammatically correct; past tense 'started' and 'was' are appropriate. No change needed.

× I didn't take any formal courses, I just try to teach myself by the practicing every day.

✓ I didn't take any formal courses; I just tried to teach myself by practicing every day.

Tense inconsistency and article misuse: 'didn't take' is past, so 'try' should be past 'tried'. 'by the practicing' is incorrect; use 'by practicing' without 'the'. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout the narrative and remove the article before gerund.

× At first I made a lot of mistakes and typed very slowly, but after using online exercise and typing.

✓ At first I made a lot of mistakes and typed very slowly, but after using online exercises and practicing typing, I improved.

Fragment and missing result: the original ends with 'but after using online exercise and typing.' which is incomplete. Use plural 'exercises' and add a main clause showing the result (e.g., 'I improved'). Also 'practicing typing' clarifies action. Suggestion: complete the sentence with the outcome.

× From my perspective, it's the only way how to improve typing is to make it to practice every day, maybe 20 or 30 minutes, but it must be daily.

✓ From my perspective, the only way to improve typing is to practice every day, maybe 20 or 30 minutes, but it must be daily.

Redundant and awkward structure: 'it's the only way how to improve' is incorrect; use 'the only way to improve'. 'to make it to practice' is ungrammatical; use 'is to practice'. Suggestion: simplify to 'the only way to improve typing is to practice every day.'

× And after this you can see that your typing is much faster than was before.

✓ And after this you can see that your typing is much faster than it was before.

Missing subject in comparison: 'than was before' needs the subject 'it' ('it was before'). Tense and comparison are fine otherwise. Suggestion: include the subject 'it' for clarity.