打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, so), and give one clear reason plus a brief example. Use linking words (because, so) correctly and check grammar (use articles and countable/uncountable nouns properly).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because most of my work is digital now. For example, I write reports and presentations on my computer, which is faster and easier to edit than handwritten notes.

建議: Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'type' not 'chipe'; 'studying' not 'reading'). Give a concise topic sentence, then one specific reason with a linking phrase. Reduce hesitation and fix article use.

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I am studying business management and often prepare presentations for class. Therefore, using a laptop is more convenient for creating slides and documents.

建議: Give a clear time reference and remove hesitation. Use one or two sentences: state when, then give a specific detail about how you learned (method or teacher). Improve grammar and word order.

範例: I learned to type when I was in eighth grade at school. In our computer class the teacher showed us correct hand placement and we practiced typing exercises to improve speed and accuracy.

建議: Be specific about methods and practice routines. Use clearer structure: topic sentence stating your main method, then one or two concrete examples (practice frequency, tools, goals). Avoid repetition and fillers.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on Microsoft Word and typing exercises. For instance, I write one report or essay each week and use online typing tests to measure my speed and accuracy and focus on reducing errors.

× I prefer typing rather than a handwriting because, uh, due to the digital condition each and everything, so uh prefer to be doing on a computer.

✓ I prefer typing rather than handwriting because, due to the digital nature of everything, I prefer to do things on a computer.

Student used 'a handwriting' incorrectly; 'handwriting' is uncountable here so no article is needed. 'Condition' is not the correct noun for the intended meaning; 'nature' fits better. Also the sentence had awkward phrasing; reworded to a clear comparative structure. Suggestion: treat 'handwriting' as uncountable and use natural collocations like 'digital nature' and 'do things on a computer'.

× So and also, uh, handwriting may not be understood by everyone, but the typing.

✓ Also, handwriting may not be understood by everyone, but typing is.

The original uses redundant conjunctions 'So and also' and an incomplete contrast 'but the typing.' Remove redundancy and complete the contrast with 'typing is.' Suggestion: use single linking words and ensure both sides of a contrast are complete.

× I chipe on a laptop keyboard every day because, uh, as I am reading a business management, I need to do a lot of presentation as a task given by a teacher.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because, as I am studying business management, I need to give a lot of presentations as tasks assigned by my teacher.

'Chipe' is incorrect — verb should be 'type'. 'Reading' is the wrong verb for studying; use 'studying.' 'A business management' is wrong: 'business management' is an academic subject and takes no article. 'A lot of presentation' needs plural 'presentations.' 'As a task given by a teacher' is awkward; 'tasks assigned by my teacher' is clearer. Suggestion: use correct verb 'type', 'study' for academic subjects, pluralize countable nouns, and use natural passive phrasing 'assigned by'.

× I learnt to type on a keyboard during I guess eight class because uh in 8th class there is a computer class and we, our computer teacher used to teach how to use the computer and keyboard.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard in, I guess, eighth grade because in eighth grade we had a computer class and our computer teacher used to teach us how to use the computer and the keyboard.

Use of 'during I guess eight class' is ungrammatical; replace with 'in, I guess, eighth grade.' 'Learnt' is acceptable British English, but 'learned' is more common in many varieties; either is acceptable—kept 'learned' here. Add 'us' after 'teach' for a complete verb phrase. Include 'the' before 'keyboard' when referring to a specific keyboard used in class. Suggestion: use correct ordinal 'eighth grade' or '8th grade', include the object after 'teach', and maintain consistent tense.

× The placement of a hand in the keyboard.

✓ (I learned) the correct placement of the hands on the keyboard.

This fragment lacks a main verb and has incorrect articles and prepositions: 'a hand' is too specific and singular; 'on the keyboard' is the correct preposition. To make it a full sentence, include the subject or integrate with previous sentence. Suggestion: use plural 'hands' and the preposition 'on', and ensure every sentence has a verb.

× I improve my typing in computer by by doing by writing a report or by typing or by writing essay in in computer Ms. word umm.

✓ I improve my typing on the computer by writing reports, typing, or writing essays in Microsoft Word.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'computer' and correct repetition 'by by' and duplicate 'in in'. Use gerunds consistently: 'writing', 'typing'. Pluralize countable nouns 'reports' and 'essays'. 'Ms. word' should be 'Microsoft Word'. Suggestion: remove redundancies, use correct prepositions, pluralize as needed, and use consistent gerund forms.