打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers ('umm', 'uh') and repetitions. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'handwriting helps me remember' or 'I enjoy the tactile feel of paper').

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better and feels more personal. For example, when I take notes by hand I can organize ideas with underlines and arrows, which makes revision easier.

建議: Answer directly and provide a clear reason with specific detail. Avoid absolute statements unless true. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly. Replace vague phrases ('dangerous for our health, maybe') with precise concerns (e.g., 'may cause eye strain or posture problems').

範例: No, I don't use a keyboard every day because prolonged screen use strains my eyes and can worsen my posture. Therefore I try to read printed books and write notes by hand whenever possible.

建議: Give a concise time reference and one clear reason, avoid repetition and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently ('I learned') and provide a specific example of activities that helped you improve.

範例: I learned to type when I was about eight years old. Playing online games and watching videos helped me get used to the keyboard and gradually improved my typing speed.

建議: Respond directly with a clear method and give one or two specific practices. Avoid repeating earlier answers and eliminate filler. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'by' to structure the response.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with typing tutor websites and by playing typing-based games. For example, I use a typing app for 15 minutes daily to increase my accuracy and speed.

× I prefer handwriting more than typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing.

The phrase 'prefer X more than Y' is less natural; use the correct collocation 'prefer X to Y'. Also 'handwriting' vs 'typing' are uncountable nouns so no plural change is needed.

× Typing is so easy, but I, I think handwriting is useful for our hand and umm, so on.

✓ Typing is very easy, but I think handwriting is useful for our hands and so on.

Use 'very' instead of 'so' for formality and clarity. 'Our hand' should be plural 'our hands' when referring generally to people's hands. Remove stuttering 'I, I'. 'So on' is acceptable but keep 'and so on' for fluency.

× Umm, it's also, I want to touch the, uh, copy book and uh, physical book in my hand, on my hand.

✓ I also want to hold a notebook or a physical book in my hands.

Use 'hold' or 'touch' appropriately; 'copy book' is nonstandard, 'notebook' is clearer. Use plural 'my hands' for natural expression. Remove fillers and redundant prepositions like 'in my hand, on my hand'.

× I don't type, never because it's keyboard and the laptop keyboard are so, umm, dangerous For our health, maybe.

✓ I never type because desktop and laptop keyboards can be harmful to our health, perhaps for our eyes.

Placement of 'never' should be before the main verb: 'I never type'. Use 'keyboards' plural to match 'desktop and laptop'. 'Are so dangerous For' is ungrammatical capitalization and word order; use 'can be harmful to' and specify 'our eyes' if intended.

× For our eyes, uh, So I think I prefer to write with hand or handwriting and, uh, touch books.

✓ For our eyes. So I prefer to write by hand and to touch books.

Use 'write by hand' or 'write with a pen' rather than 'write with hand'. 'Handwriting' is a noun meaning the style; 'write by hand' describes the action. Use infinitive parallelism 'to write... and to touch' for clarity.

× I learn how to type on a keyboard when I was a child because I played a lot of a lot of kinds of a lot kinds of games with computer, online games and watching any movies with computers.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a child because I played many kinds of computer games and watched movies on the computer.

Use past tense 'learned' to match 'when I was a child'. Reduce redundant phrases 'a lot of a lot of kinds'. Use 'many kinds of computer games' and 'watched movies on the computer' for proper verb forms and clarity.

× So it helps me to improve my skills, my skills.

✓ So it helped me improve my skills.

When referring to past practice that improved skills, use past tense 'helped'. Remove repetition 'my skills, my skills' and use the infinitive 'to improve' or bare 'improve' after 'helped'.

× I answered this question in previous question.

✓ I answered this question in a previous question.

Add the article 'a' before 'previous question' for grammaticality: 'in a previous question'. Alternatively say 'I already answered this question earlier.'

× I improve my typing with games, online games, computer games and maybe with intellectual games which we can play with computer a lot.

✓ I improved my typing with online computer games and maybe with puzzle games that we can play on the computer a lot.

Use past tense 'improved' if referring to past improvement. Combine 'online games' and 'computer games' for conciseness. 'Intellectual games' is awkward; 'puzzle games' or 'brain games' is clearer. Use 'on the computer' rather than 'with computer'.

× Can a lot of a lot of kinds of movies when I type this.

✓ I also watched a lot of different kinds of movies while I was using the computer.

Original sentence is ungrammatical. Use 'watched' for past tense and 'a lot of different kinds of movies' for clarity. 'While I was using the computer' explains simultaneous action rather than 'when I type this'.