打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar, use a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and awkward phrases. Include one specific reason and an example with linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Watch pronunciation of repeated words and articles.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me think more clearly. For example, when I keep a journal I find that writing by hand makes my thoughts more organized and memorable, so I usually choose a notebook over typing.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid unnecessary repetition, and use linking words to connect past habits to present practice. Be specific about frequency or tasks to add content.

範例: I usually type on a laptop because I don't have a desktop at home. During university I did many assignments on my laptop, so now I type daily for work and study tasks.

建議: Use a clear topic sentence and avoid unclear or incorrect expressions (e.g., "must kill"). Give a precise age and a short reason, with one linking word. Correct repetition and grammatical errors.

範例: I learned to type when I was about five or six years old in primary school because computer skills are considered essential in my country, so typing was taught early as part of the curriculum.

建議: Give a concise topic sentence, avoid filler words, and add one or two specific methods you used to improve (e.g., online practice, touch-typing, exercises) with linking words describing sequence or cause.

範例: I improved my typing mainly through daily practice while doing university assignments. Additionally, I used online typing exercises and focused on touch-typing, which gradually increased my speed and accuracy.

× I personally prefer handwriting as it is quite intimate form of expressing our feelings.

✓ I personally prefer handwriting as it is quite an intimate form of expressing our feelings.

Missing article 'an' before the singular countable noun 'intimate form'. Add 'an' because 'form' is a singular countable noun modified by an adjective beginning with a vowel sound. Suggestion: use 'an intimate form' or rephrase as 'a very personal way'.

× Typing is kind of not my thing as I I love expressing my feelings as writing a general exam, for example writing a journal.

✓ Typing is kind of not my thing because I love expressing my feelings through writing, for example keeping a journal.

Pronoun and phrasing errors: redundant 'I I' and unclear pronoun reference. 'As' used twice awkwardly; 'through' is better to show the means of expression. 'Writing a general exam' is incorrect collocation; use 'keeping a journal' or 'writing in a journal'. Suggestion: remove duplicate pronoun and use clear connective like 'because' or 'since'.

× So yes, handwriting I would prefer it over typing.

✓ So yes, I would prefer handwriting over typing.

Incorrect word order and redundant pronoun 'it'. Use correct subject-verb-object order: 'I would prefer handwriting over typing.' Alternatively 'I prefer handwriting to typing.'

× I usually type on the laptop keyboard as I don't have a computer at my home.

✓ I usually type on a laptop because I don't have a computer at home.

Article and pronoun use: 'the laptop keyboard' implies a specific laptop; use 'a laptop' for generality. 'At my home' is unnatural; use 'at home'. Suggestion: drop 'the' and simplify phrase.

× Especially when I used to study at university, we used to do a lot of assignments on our laptop, so I'm quite familiar with the right typing on the laptop keyboard.

✓ Especially when I was studying at university, we did a lot of assignments on our laptops, so I'm quite familiar with typing correctly on a laptop keyboard.

Overuse of 'used to' and tense mismatch: 'used to' is okay for habitual past but 'when I was studying' is clearer. 'We did a lot of assignments' is simple past for completed activities. Plural agreement: 'laptops' matches 'we'. 'the right typing' is awkward; use 'typing correctly'. Also change 'the laptop keyboard' to 'a laptop keyboard' for general reference.

× In my country specifically, children learn typing at a really young age, maybe when they are 5 or 6 years old.

✓ In my country, children learn to type at a very young age, maybe when they are five or six years old.

Verb form: use 'learn to type' not 'learn typing' for natural English. 'Specifically' is unnecessary here; move or remove. Use words for numbers under ten in writing: 'five or six'. Suggestion: 'learn to type at a very young age'.

× Because we think like knowing a computer, it's a must kill.

✓ Because we think that knowing how to use a computer is essential.

Nonsensical phrase 'must kill' and informal 'think like'. Replace with 'is essential' or 'is a must'. Use 'knowing how to use a computer' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid literal translations and use idiomatic expressions.

× Everyone should have.

✓ Everyone should have one.

Sentence fragment missing object. 'Have' needs an object such as 'one' (a computer) or rephrase: 'Everyone should have a computer.' Suggestion: complete the sentence with the item being discussed.

× And thus I learned computer maybe when I was, when I was in primary school, when I was 5 or 6.

✓ Thus I learned about computers when I was in primary school, around five or six years old.

Awkward repetition and missing preposition: use 'learned about computers' or 'learned to use a computer'. Remove repeated 'when I was'. Use 'around' for approximate age. Suggestion: 'I learned to use computers in primary school, at about five or six.'

× At first my typing was not really great, but we used to do a lot of assignments in university and eventually my typing got better by, uh, doing it every day regularly.

✓ At first my typing was not very good, but we did a lot of assignments at university and eventually my typing got better by practicing every day.

Use 'was not very good' rather than 'not really great' for formality. 'Used to do' replaced with simple past 'did' for past habitual actions during a specific period. Remove filler 'uh' and redundant 'regularly' because 'every day' already implies regularity. 'Practicing' is the correct gerund.

× And thus now my typing has improved a lot by practicing regularly and doing my assignments.

✓ So now my typing has improved a lot from practicing regularly and doing my assignments.

Stylistic: 'And thus now' is redundant; use 'So now' or 'Thus'. 'By practicing' is acceptable but 'from practicing' is more natural here. Keep present perfect 'has improved' to show result of past actions. Suggestion: simplify connectors and keep tense consistent.