打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar; give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix sentence fragments (e.g., 'I don't know how to type and I think typing.' is unclear).

範例: I prefer handwriting. First, I find it helps me think more clearly and keeps my ideas flowing, so I can express myself better. In addition, handwriting feels more personal and gives me a sense of satisfaction when I finish a piece of writing.

建議: Open with a direct answer, then give specific, coherent details. Correct grammar and reduce redundancy. Use linking words like 'however' or 'occasionally' to structure the response.

範例: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. I rarely type for work, and when I do need to send messages or short texts I use my phone instead. However, I avoid long typing tasks because I prefer handwriting.

建議: Give a concise topic sentence with one or two specific details (time, context, level of training). Avoid repeating the same information and correct small grammatical errors (e.g., 'on in' -> 'in').

範例: I learned to type in my computer class in grade 6 because it was part of the school syllabus. Since then I haven't taken any further formal training because I don't use computers much and haven't pursued it professionally.

建議: Start with a direct statement, then provide two specific methods and an example. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to make the answer coherent and precise.

範例: I would improve typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I could use typing apps that offer lessons and error correction, and I would set aside 15–20 minutes a day to practice accuracy and speed.

× I prefer handwriting because I don't know how to type and I think typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I don't know how to type and I find typing difficult.

The original second clause 'I think typing' is incomplete and does not convey the intended meaning. Replace with 'I find typing difficult' to express a present-tense opinion about typing. This keeps tense and meaning consistent.

× Typing is very time consuming and I'm not very comfortable while doing it.

✓ Typing is very time-consuming, and I'm not very comfortable doing it.

'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as the compound adjective 'time-consuming' before a noun. Also, 'while doing it' is wordy; 'doing it' is more natural. Use a comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses.

× On the other hand, while I'm handwriting, I can express my views much better and go in a flow which gives me a sense of freedom and completion.

✓ On the other hand, when I handwrite, I can express my views much better and get into a flow that gives me a sense of freedom and completion.

'While I'm handwriting' is an awkward use of the verb 'handwriting' (which is a noun). Use the verb 'handwrite' or the phrase 'when I handwrite.' 'Go in a flow' is nonstandard; use 'get into a flow' or 'enter a flow.' 'Which' is better replaced by 'that' for defining clause.

× Also, I definitely prefer handwriting than typing.

✓ Also, I definitely prefer handwriting to typing.

The verb 'prefer' takes 'to' rather than 'than' when comparing two alternatives: 'prefer A to B.' Using 'than' is incorrect in this construction.

× In fact, I don't type because I don't involve into that kind of a profession.

✓ In fact, I don't type because I'm not involved in that kind of profession.

'Don't involve into' is incorrect. Use the passive/adjective 'involved in' to indicate participation in a profession. Keep present tense: 'I'm not involved in' or 'I am not in'.

× But once a while if I have to type a message or something, I use my phone for that in everyday life because that is just for my.

✓ But if once in a while I have to type a message, I use my phone in everyday life because it is just for me.

'Once a while' is wrong order; correct phrase is 'once in a while.' 'For my' is incorrect pronoun/object; use 'for me' or 'it is just for me.' Also streamline sentence order for clarity.

× That is one of the way I connect to my friends and it is used for that purpose only.

✓ That is one of the ways I connect to my friends, and I use it for that purpose only.

'One of the way' should be 'one of the ways' (plural) because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. Also change passive 'it is used' to active 'I use it' for naturalness and correct subject reference.

× Otherwise I don't do typing at all.

✓ Otherwise, I don't type at all.

'Do typing' is an unnatural collocation; the verb 'type' is sufficient. Keep present tense 'I don't type at all.' Add comma after 'Otherwise' for flow.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard on in my computer class when I was in class 6.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard in my computer class when I was in class 6.

Remove the extra preposition 'on' which is redundant. Past tense 'learned' is correct for a past event.

× When I was in grade 6, we had to do that because it was a part of our teaching syllabus.

✓ When I was in grade 6, we had to do that because it was part of our syllabus.

'A part of our teaching syllabus' is wordy; 'part of our syllabus' is more natural. 'Syllabus' is fine singular here; 'a part of' can be simplified to 'part of.' This fixes article and wording.

× Otherwise, I have not taken any formal training or pursued with that because I'm not very fond of computers and things.

✓ Otherwise, I have not taken any formal training or pursued that because I'm not very fond of computers and such.

Remove 'with' after 'pursued'; say 'pursued that' or better 'pursued it.' 'Computers and things' is informal; 'computers and such' or 'computers and related things' is better. Maintain present perfect 'have not taken.'

× Practice is one of the best ways to improve typing and otherwise.

✓ Practice is one of the best ways to improve typing.

The ending 'and otherwise' is vague and ungrammatical here. Remove it to make a clear sentence. 'Improve typing' is acceptable though 'improve one's typing' is more formal.

× We have helping apps available these days which can help us to type better and to correct our mistakes so that we can gain efficiency in that.

✓ We have helper apps available these days that can help us type better and correct our mistakes so we can become more efficient at it.

'Helping apps' is an awkward phrase; 'helper apps' or 'helpful apps' is better. Use 'that' for defining clauses. Remove unnecessary 'to' before verbs 'type' and 'correct' after 'help.' 'Gain efficiency in that' is unnatural; use 'become more efficient at it.'