打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid filler phrases (e.g., "I mean", "definitely" repeated) and aim for varied vocabulary (e.g., "efficient", "personal" instead of repeating "better").

範例: I prefer typing for professional tasks because it is faster and makes editing easier; however, for personal items like diaries or postcards, I favor handwriting since it feels more personal and helps me remember details better.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the device, then give concise reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition ("tap on the desktop" repeated) and incorrect grammar (e.g., "something personal thing"). Add one specific example to support your point.

範例: I type mainly on a desktop at work because my office computer is set up for handling many emails and documents; occasionally I use my laptop at home for personal tasks like messaging or online shopping.

建議: Give a direct answer with a clear time phrase, then add one specific detail about the class. Remove hesitations ("umm", "uh") and use correct tense and grammar (e.g., "we had typing classes" not "we have").

範例: I learned to type in primary school, around age nine, when we had a dedicated typing class where the teacher taught touch-typing techniques and proper finger placement on the keyboard.

建議: Provide a clearer, more varied response: start with a topic sentence describing your main method, then give specific examples of how you practice and use linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words.

範例: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice; for example, at work I type emails and reports, and at home I use online typing exercises and short timed tests to build speed and accuracy.

× It depends on the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence correctly uses the present simple to state a general truth.

× I mean if it's for work then definitely typing is better than handwriting because you can finish the task in a more efficient way.

✓ I mean if it's for work, then definitely typing is better than handwriting because you can finish tasks more efficiently.

Use of article and noun number: 'the task' is unnatural when speaking generally; plural 'tasks' is more natural. 'In a more efficient way' is wordy; use the adverb 'more efficiently'. Added a comma after the conditional clause for clarity. This fits general present-tense conditional (zero/first conditional).

× However, if it is something for memory like diary or some postcards, then definitely handwriting is better.

✓ However, if it is something for memory, like a diary or some postcards, then handwriting is definitely better.

Needs article 'a' before 'diary' and a comma before the example phrase. Moved 'definitely' to a more natural position. Present simple is appropriate.

× I'm currently working so every day I need to tap on the desktop.

✓ I'm currently working, so every day I need to use the desktop.

Verb choice: 'tap on the desktop' is odd for typing on a computer; use 'use the desktop' or 'use the desktop computer'. Added comma after introductory clause. Present continuous 'I'm currently working' is fine.

× It is in my office.

✓ It is in my office.

Sentence is correct; 'in my office' is the proper prepositional phrase. No change required.

× I have a lot of emails to send so every day I tap a lot on the desktop.

✓ I have a lot of emails to send, so every day I type a lot on the desktop.

Use 'type' rather than 'tap' when referring to keyboard input. Added comma before 'so'. 'Type a lot' is more natural than 'tap a lot'.

× However if I have something personal thing to do I will also.

✓ However, if I have something personal to do, I will as well.

Remove redundant 'thing' after 'personal' and add commas around the conditional clause. Use 'as well' or 'also' after the verb for natural word order.

× I can't remember the exact time clearly, but I guess it was around sometime when I was in primary school.

✓ I can't remember the exact time clearly, but I guess it was sometime when I was in primary school.

Remove redundant 'around' when 'sometime' is used. Past simple 'was' correctly matches 'when I was in primary school'.

× I remember at that time we have the typing class, umm.

✓ I remember that at that time we had a typing class.

Tense: change 'have' to past simple 'had' to match 'I remember' referring to past events. Add article 'a' before 'typing class'. Move 'that' for natural flow and remove filler 'umm'.

× The teacher tells us how to type on the computer.

✓ The teacher taught us how to type on the computer.

Use past simple 'taught' (not 'tells') because the action happened in the past. 'Tells' is present; mismatch with the past context.

× We have uh, specifically.

✓ We had specific exercises.

Original is a fragment and unclear. Replace with a complete past-tense sentence 'We had specific exercises' to convey likely meaning: there were specific practice activities. Matches past context.

× I guess practice makes perfect because I didn't devote any specific time practising my typing.

✓ I guess practice makes perfect, because I haven't devoted any specific time to practising my typing.

If referring to remainder of life up to now, present perfect 'haven't devoted' is more appropriate than simple past 'didn't devote'. Also add 'to' before 'practising'. Note British spelling 'practising' kept; present simple 'makes' is fine.

× Actually, I just do it every day and I'm progressing every day.

✓ Actually, I just do it every day, and I'm making progress every day.

'I'm progressing' is less natural than 'I'm making progress'. Both present simple and present continuous are used correctly: 'do it every day' and 'I'm making progress' indicate habitual action and ongoing improvement.

× I'm making progress every day.

✓ I'm making progress every day.

Sentence is correct; no grammatical change needed. Could remove repetition in context but grammar is fine.

× So that's basically how I improve my typing.

✓ So that's basically how I improve my typing.

Present simple 'improve' is acceptable to describe habitual method; sentence is grammatically correct.

× Yeah, it takes time.

✓ Yes, it takes time.

'Yeah' is conversational but not a grammar error; 'Yes' is more formal. Sentence 'it takes time' is grammatically correct present simple.