打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, "because" or "so"). Keep within 3–4 sentences and avoid repeating the same idea.

範例: I prefer both typing and handwriting, depending on the task. For example, I handwrite notes because it helps me remember information, but I type messages and calculations because it is faster and more convenient. Overall, typing is becoming more common these days.

建議: Clarify and organize information: give a direct topic sentence stating which device you use, then add one specific duty that requires typing. Use correct tense and avoid repetitive phrases like "I am typing" and "going to typing."

範例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day at work. I am a team leader in the warehouse printing department, so I enter label details and send commands to the printer, which requires frequent typing.

建議: Improve accuracy and conciseness: state when you learned clearly and avoid awkward phrases (e.g., "ear by ear"). Provide a precise skill statement and correct the measurement phrasing. Keep it to two sentences maximum.

範例: I learned to type at school because computers were part of our curriculum. Now I am quite fast — I can type about 45–50 words per minute, which helps me work efficiently.

建議: Be specific and use linking words: begin with a clear topic sentence about how you improve, then give concrete habits (how often, what exercises) and results. Correct tense consistency and finish the sentence fully.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly: I type for more than two hours at home every evening and also type daily at work. I also use online typing exercises and focus on accuracy, which has noticeably increased my speed and reduced mistakes.

× I like both and I also using both.

✓ I like both and I also use both.

The verb 'use' should be in base form after 'also' in present simple. 'Using' is a present participle that requires an auxiliary (e.g., 'I am using') or different structure. Use present simple 'use' to match 'I like both.' Suggestion: Say 'I also use both' or 'I also use both methods.'

× Whenever I have to make notes then I prefer handwriting.

✓ Whenever I have to make notes, I prefer handwriting.

The sentence uses present simple appropriately but needs a comma to separate the subordinate clause. Remove unnecessary 'then'. Suggestion: Use 'Whenever... , I prefer...' for clarity.

× Whenever I have to send messages or do calculations then I love to do typing.

✓ Whenever I have to send messages or do calculations, I prefer to type.

Use 'prefer to type' or 'I prefer typing' in present simple; 'love to do typing' is unnatural. Remove 'then' and use correct verb form. Suggestion: 'I prefer to type' or 'I prefer typing'.

× Typing and writing both are popular but these days typing are mostly used by.

✓ Typing and writing are both popular, but these days typing is used most often.

Subject-verb agreement: 'typing' (singular gerund) requires 'is' not 'are'. Also sentence ending is incomplete; 'used most often' is natural. Reorder 'both' after verb. Suggestion: 'Typing and writing are both popular, but these days typing is used most often.'

× Yes, on my job I type on laptop on desktop keyboard.

✓ Yes. At my job I type on a laptop and on a desktop keyboard.

Preposition 'on my job' is incorrect; use 'at my job' or 'at work'. Also need articles 'a laptop' and 'a desktop keyboard' and conjunction 'and'. Suggestion: 'At my job I type on a laptop and on a desktop keyboard.'

× I'm working as a team leader in a warehouse where I am in a printing department.

✓ I work as a team leader in a warehouse, where I am in the printing department.

Present continuous 'I'm working' can be acceptable but simple present 'I work' is more natural for job descriptions. Add definite article 'the' for 'printing department' and comma before relative clause. Suggestion: 'I work as a team leader in a warehouse, where I am in the printing department.'

× I have to print labels so I have to type or I have to send command to printer.

✓ I have to print labels, so I have to type or send commands to the printer.

Use parallel structure: 'type or send'. Plural 'commands' and include article 'the' before 'printer'. Suggestion: '...so I have to type or send commands to the printer.'

× So I am typing on the daily basis and I am going to typing.

✓ So I type on a daily basis, and I am going to keep practicing typing.

'Am typing on the daily basis' is awkward; use simple present 'I type on a daily basis'. 'I am going to typing' is incorrect: after 'going to' use base verb 'type' or restructure. Added 'keep practicing' to match likely meaning. Suggestion: 'I type on a daily basis, and I am going to keep practicing.'

× In school, computer was the part of our curriculum, so when I learnt how to use keyboard and how to type on that ear by ear, I was learning and now I'm expert in typing on keyboard.

✓ In school, computers were part of our curriculum, so I learned how to use the keyboard and how to type. I practiced a lot, and now I'm an expert at typing on the keyboard.

Multiple errors: plural 'computers' and verb 'were' for agreement; 'learnt' acceptable but use 'learned' (both OK). 'How to type on that ear by ear' is unclear and incorrect; likely meant 'year by year' or 'over time'—replaced with 'I practiced a lot'. Use article 'the' before 'keyboard' and 'an expert at typing' for correct preposition and noun phrase. Suggestion: 'Computers were part of our curriculum... I learned how to use the keyboard and how to type. I practiced a lot, and now I'm an expert at typing on the keyboard.'

× I can type 15 words in less than 20 seconds on.

✓ I can type 15 words in less than 20 seconds.

Trailing preposition 'on' is unnecessary and leaves sentence incomplete. Remove it. Suggestion: 'I can type 15 words in less than 20 seconds.'

× I improved my typing by practicing at home.

✓ I improved my typing by practicing at home.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Suggestion: Maintain this sentence as is.

× I use my laptop at home to complete my office course, so I type more than two hours at home and also at work I type daily, so it improves my typing by practicing and.

✓ I use my laptop at home to complete my work tasks, so I type for more than two hours at home, and I also type daily at work, so my typing improves with practice.

Multiple issues: 'office course' is unclear—'work tasks' fits context. Need 'for' with duration 'for more than two hours'. Sentence run-on and ending incomplete; restructured for clarity. 'Improves with practice' is natural phrasing. Suggestion: 'I use my laptop at home to complete my work tasks, so I type for more than two hours at home, and I also type daily at work, so my typing improves with practice.'