打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating phrases like “can able to,” reduce hesitations (uh), and use linking words to connect reasons. Give one or two specific reasons with brief examples.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember spellings better. For example, when I write vocabulary by hand, the physical act of forming letters makes the words stick in my memory, whereas typing with autocorrect can make me rely on the computer to fix mistakes.

建議: Give a direct, fully formed topic sentence and avoid repetition. Use one linking phrase to add detail and a concise specific example about your setup or routine.

範例: Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard at work. I usually connect my laptop to a monitor and use an external keyboard and mouse because that setup is more comfortable for long hours of typing.

建議: Begin with a clear time marker and avoid vague or redundant phrases. Use linking words to explain progression (e.g., 'at first... later') and give one specific detail about how you practiced typing.

範例: I learned to type in grade six when we had a computer science class. At first I was unfamiliar with computers, but as technology advanced I started typing all my notes and submitting projects online, which quickly improved my skills.

建議: Be specific about methods and avoid unclear wording. Mention concrete practice techniques (timed exercises, accuracy focus) and how you use tools like Grammarly. Reduce hesitation words and explain one clear process you follow to improve.

範例: I improve my typing by using Grammarly to spot mistakes and then reviewing the corrections. In addition, I do timed typing tests twice a week to increase my speed and keep a list of commonly corrected words so I can practice them by hand.

× I always prefer handwriting because while writing I can able to see the letters and uh, so that I can able to remember the spelling out of it.

✓ I always prefer handwriting because while writing I can see the letters, so I can remember the spelling.

The phrase 'can able to' is redundant and incorrect; 'can' already expresses ability and should be followed by the base verb form. Remove 'able to' and simplify the clause. Also 'spelling out of it' is awkward; use 'the spelling' instead.

× If it is typing on system, then mostly in recent uh years, uh auto correction uh feature was enabled.

✓ If I type on a computer, in recent years the autocorrect feature has been enabled.

Use consistent present or present perfect tense: 'typing on system' is unidiomatic; use 'type on a computer'. 'was enabled' implies a single past event; 'has been enabled' (present perfect) fits 'in recent years'. Also 'auto correction uh feature' should be 'autocorrect feature'.

× So even if I make mistake, the computer automatically recognize the mistake and it fixes it.

✓ So even if I make a mistake, the computer automatically recognizes it and fixes it.

Subject-verb agreement and article: 'make mistake' needs the article 'a'. With singular subject 'the computer', the verb needs third person singular form 'recognizes'. Repeating 'the mistake' as 'it' is clearer and concise.

× Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day whenever I go to work.

✓ Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day when I go to work.

'Whenever' is not incorrect but can be simplified to 'when' for natural spoken English. No major grammar error; revision improves clarity and conciseness.

× I used to connect with, uh, connect my laptop with the monitor which was provided by my workplace and I will, uh, use an external keyboard and mouse for working there.

✓ I used to connect my laptop to the monitor provided by my workplace, and I would use an external keyboard and mouse there.

Remove redundant 'connect with, connect'. Use correct preposition 'connect ... to'. 'Which was provided by my workplace' is wordy; 'provided by my workplace' is sufficient. 'I will use' is mismatched with 'used to'; use 'I would use' to indicate habitual past action.

× When I was grade 6, there was a, uh, subject called Computer science.

✓ When I was in grade 6, there was a subject called Computer Science.

Add preposition 'in' before the grade. Remove extraneous commas and filler. Capitalize proper noun 'Computer Science'. The structure 'there was a subject called' is correct.

× At first I was not familiar with that, and later I had to learn more on computer because at that time, uh, technology was evolving, so I had to give everything.

✓ At first I was not familiar with it, and later I had to learn more about computers because technology was evolving, so I had to do everything on the computer.

Use 'familiar with it' instead of 'with that'. 'Learn more on computer' should be 'learn more about computers' or 'learn more about using computers'. 'Give everything' is incorrect in this context; likely meaning 'do everything on the computer' or 'submit everything via computer'. Clarify to 'do everything on the computer'.

× I have to give all my notes in computer.

✓ I had to type all my notes on the computer.

Context is past habitual action, so use past tense 'had to'. 'Give notes in computer' is unidiomatic; 'type notes on the computer' or 'submit notes on the computer' is clearer. Use preposition 'on' with 'computer'.

× Even my project has to be submitted through computer.

✓ Even my project had to be submitted through the computer.

Maintain past tense 'had to' to match the time frame. Add definite article 'the' before 'computer' or rephrase 'submitted online' if appropriate. 'Through computer' is unnatural; 'through the computer' or 'online' is better.

× I always rely on Grammarly because, uh, it gives a phrase where I need to use the neutral phase and where I have to use some uh, vocabulary to enhance the skills.

✓ I always rely on Grammarly because it suggests phrases where I should use neutral phrasing and where I can use different vocabulary to improve my writing.

'Gives a phrase' is unnatural; 'suggests phrases' is better. 'Neutral phase' should be 'neutral phrasing'. 'Have to use some vocabulary to enhance the skills' is vague; 'can use different vocabulary to improve my writing' is clearer and grammatically correct. 'Enhance the skills' is vague—specify which skills.

× In the meantime, while auto correcting, I'll just make a note of all the list of words which Grammarly used to provide to me.

✓ In the meantime, while autocorrecting, I just make a note of the list of words that Grammarly suggests to me.

Use 'autocorrecting' as a single word gerund. 'I'll just' implies future but context is habitual; use present simple 'I just make' or 'I usually make'. 'All the list of words' is redundant; use 'the list of words'. 'Which Grammarly used to provide to me' incorrectly implies it used to do so in the past; use 'that Grammarly suggests to me' for current habitual action. Also 'suggests me' should be 'suggests to me' or 'suggests'.