打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is thoughtful and shows personal preference, but it is slightly disorganized and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Aim for a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting reasons, and concise language. Use linking words (for example, "however", "because", "so") to make your points coherent, and avoid repeating the same idea. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., "both techniques work well for me", "it really carries").

範例: I like both typing and handwriting, but I prefer handwriting overall because it feels more personal and expressive. For example, when I write by hand I remember ideas better and my notes feel unique. However, I type when I need speed or to share work quickly with others.

建議: The answer responds directly but is a bit repetitive and contains hesitations and minor grammar issues. Make your topic sentence concise, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Remove fillers like "umm" and avoid repeating the same point. Use a linking word to connect your reason.

範例: I don't use a desktop or laptop keyboard daily; I mainly type on my smartphone keyboard. Because I use my phone for messaging and social media every day, it's the most convenient device for quick communication with friends and family.

建議: Good content and clear timeline, but the answer is somewhat wordy and repetitive. Use a clear past-time expression (e.g., "when I was a child") and give one concrete detail about the competitions or practice. Keep sentences compact and use linking words like "because" and "over time" to show progression.

範例: I learned to type when I was a child because I took part in school competitions that required laptop use. Over time, regular practice in those events helped me become faster and more accurate.

建議: The answer explains a learning process but is unclear in places and contains grammatical errors and repetition. Give a clear method (e.g., practice regularly, use typing exercises), provide a concrete example of a practice activity, and link sentences for coherence. Avoid vague phrases like "uplifted them" and incomplete sentences.

範例: I improved my typing step by step, starting with basic lessons from my teacher about key positions. Then I practiced regularly with timed exercises and simple typing games, which helped me build speed and accuracy over time.

× To be honest, both technique works well on me because I tend to translate my mind well when typing or writing my thoughts, writing my words and thoughts rather.

✓ To be honest, both techniques work well for me because I tend to translate my mind well when typing or writing my thoughts and words.

'Both' requires a plural noun, so 'technique' should be 'techniques' and the verb must agree: 'prove/work' plural -> 'work'. 'On me' is unnatural in this context; use 'for me'. The repeated phrase 'writing my thoughts, writing my words and thoughts rather' is redundant and awkward; combine to 'writing my thoughts and words'. Suggestions: use plural with 'both', ensure subject-verb agreement, and avoid redundancy.

× But for me, I want to stay on the tradition of handwriting and you know it really just.

✓ But for me, I want to keep the tradition of handwriting, because it really does.

The original is fragmented and uses 'stay on the tradition' and 'it really just' incorrectly. Use 'keep the tradition' or 'maintain the tradition'. Also 'it really does' completes the thought; 'does' is required as auxiliary for emphasis. Suggestions: use complete clauses, choose correct verb collocations like 'keep the tradition'.

× Carries the beauty of being a human, because of course when you are writing something, it always carries a story from the pen, from your hand, from the moment.

✓ Handwriting carries the beauty of being human, because when you write something it often carries a story from the pen, from your hand, and from the moment.

Original lacks a clear subject and has awkward phrasing 'being a human'. Add subject 'Handwriting' and simplify 'when you are writing' to 'when you write'. 'Always' is too strong; use 'often' or keep 'always' depending on intended meaning. Suggestions: include an explicit subject, simplify verb tense, and ensure parallel list structure.

× No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day. I type on my keyboard phone my mobile phone keyboard because our phones are what we use daily and it is something that I use most of the time also to in order to connect with my friends or.

✓ No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day. I type on my mobile phone keyboard because phones are what we use daily and it is something I use most of the time to connect with my friends or people I'm close to.

Problems include word order and redundancy. 'My keyboard phone my mobile phone keyboard' is repetitive and jumbled; simplify to 'my mobile phone keyboard'. 'Our phones are what we use daily' can be 'phones are what we use daily'. Removed extraneous 'also' and corrected fragment 'or.' to 'people I'm close to.' Suggestions: simplify phrases, fix word order, and avoid fragments.

× And so this is umm, the very thing that I have close to me right now. And yes, I use phone.

✓ So this is the thing I have closest to me right now, and yes, I use my phone.

'Have close to me' should be 'have closest to me' or 'is closest to me'. 'I use phone' is missing the determiner 'my'. Remove filler 'umm' and join into one sentence for clarity. Suggestions: use appropriate comparatives ('closest') and include possessive determiners.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard since I was a child because I used to participate in competitions that involved the use of technology and that specifically is the use of laptop.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a child because I used to participate in competitions that involved technology, specifically using a laptop.

Use 'when I was a child' rather than 'since' with 'learned' (past simple). 'That specifically is the use of laptop' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'specifically using a laptop'. Suggestions: choose correct time expressions with past tense and simplify awkward noun phrases.

× I used laptop as my medium to type.

✓ I used a laptop as my medium for typing.

Missing article before 'laptop'—use 'a laptop'. 'To type' can be 'for typing' to sound more natural. Suggestions: include articles before singular countable nouns and prefer natural prepositions ('for typing').

× And to showcase my skills in that particular aspect.

✓ I used it to showcase my skills in that particular area.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb to be a complete sentence. Add 'I used it to' and 'aspect' is better as 'area'. Suggestions: avoid sentence fragments by ensuring a subject and verb are present.

× And with that, over time, as I got to, as I practiced my skills and that field, I got to experience learning new things.

✓ Over time, as I practiced my skills in that field, I experienced learning new things.

Original is repetitive and contains extra filler 'got to' and awkward comma placement. Simplify to clear sequence: 'as I practiced... I experienced...'. Suggestions: remove filler phrases and streamline the sentence for clarity.

× I improve my typing by slowly taking everything step by step.

✓ I improve my typing by taking things step by step.

'Slowly' and 'step by step' are redundant; 'taking things step by step' is natural. Both are gerund structures; original is not ungrammatical but wordy. Suggestions: eliminate redundancy and prefer concise expressions.

× I started when I was a child.

✓ I started when I was a child.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Suggestions: none.

× My teacher used to teach me the basics of how a keyboard looks like, where the keys are and.

✓ My teacher used to teach me the basics of what a keyboard looks like and where the keys are.

'How a keyboard looks like' is incorrect; use 'what a keyboard looks like' or 'how a keyboard looks'. The original ends with a fragment 'and.'—complete the list properly. Suggestions: use correct question-word structures ('what' vs 'how') and avoid sentence fragments.

× With those lessons my teacher taught me, I gradually uplifted them and eventually I got used to the areas or the where they keep the keys are placed on the.

✓ With those lessons, I gradually improved and eventually got used to the keyboard layout and where the keys are placed.

'Uplifted them' is unnatural here; use 'improved' or 'built on them'. The latter part is garbled: 'the areas or the where they keep the keys are placed on the' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'keyboard layout and where the keys are placed.' Suggestions: use natural verbs (improve, build on), remove redundant pronouns, and rephrase for clear noun phrases.