打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and choose clearer vocabulary; start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetitive or unclear phrases like “writing things on the book” or “Some always using.” Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., “I use a computer or phone” not “using system or phone with me”).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting. Mainly I use a computer or my phone for most tasks, both at home and at work, so I rarely need paper. For example, my workplace uses digital forms and messaging apps, which makes typing faster and more convenient than writing by hand.

建議: Begin with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect reasons. Fix grammar (e.g., “every day,” “every hour,” “even though we have desktops”). Provide one concrete example of when portability helps. Keep answer within 2–4 sentences to be natural and effective.

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because my job requires frequent hourly updates. Although desktops are available, I prefer a laptop since it is portable and lets me work from different locations — for instance, I can update reports quickly while moving between meetings.

建議: Provide a concise timeline with correct grammar and one or two supporting details. Use linking words like “when” or “after that” and avoid redundant phrases (“from since that,” “the my”). Mention a brief example of early practice to make the response specific.

範例: I learned to type when I was in fifth grade. My IT teacher introduced basic keyboard skills, and at first I found it difficult, but after regular practice at home I became much faster and more confident.

建議: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, then add specific methods and avoid contradictory or unclear endings (the final sentence is confusing). Correct grammar and tense (e.g., “I spend at least an hour every day,” “I used some tools my teacher showed me”). Give concrete examples of practice techniques and be positive about progress.

範例: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice: I spend at least an hour each day on my home computer. I also used typing software and online exercises my teacher recommended, which helped me correct common mistakes and increase my speed over time.

× I don't normally use writing things on the book.

✓ I don't normally write things in the book.

The verb phrase 'use writing things on the book' is incorrect. Use the verb 'write' and the preposition 'in' for writing inside a book. Suggestion: say 'write things in the book.'

× I'm always using system or phone with me.

✓ I always have a computer or phone with me.

'Using system or phone with me' mixes verb forms and pronouns incorrectly. Use 'have' to indicate possession and 'computer' instead of 'system.' Also remove 'with me' redundancy by placing it after the object. Suggestion: 'I always have a computer or phone with me.'

× Even in my workplace we are using phones, so I don't have any opportunity to use papers nowadays.

✓ Even at my workplace we use phones, so I don't have any opportunity to use paper nowadays.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'workplace' and simple present 'we use' to express habitual action. 'Papers' as a general material is better as uncountable 'paper.' Also 'nowadays' fits at sentence end. Suggestion: 'Even at my workplace we use phones, so I don't have any opportunity to use paper nowadays.'

× Some always using.

✓ Some people always do.

The fragment 'Some always using' lacks a subject and proper verb form. Add 'people' as the subject and a main verb 'do' to complete the thought. Suggestion: 'Some people always do.'

× I usually type laptop keyboard everyday because my work is like that.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because my work requires it.

Add the preposition 'on' before 'a laptop keyboard' and separate 'every day' into two words. 'Because my work is like that' is vague; use 'requires it.' Suggestion: 'I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because my work requires it.'

× So in my workplace I'm always using a laptop keyboard.

✓ So at my workplace I always use a laptop keyboard.

Use 'at' with 'workplace' and simple present 'use' for habitual actions. Avoid continuous tense unless emphasizing an action in progress. Suggestion: 'So at my workplace I always use a laptop keyboard.'

× Laptop is quite easier and we can carry the laptop anywhere every time, so it's more convenient than desktop.

✓ Laptops are much easier to use and we can carry them anywhere, so they're more convenient than desktops.

Use plural 'laptops' and 'desktops' for general statements (or use 'a laptop'/'a desktop'). 'Quite easier' is incorrect; use 'much easier' or 'easier.' 'Anywhere every time' is redundant; 'anywhere' suffices. Suggestion: 'Laptops are much easier to use and we can carry them anywhere, so they're more convenient than desktops.'

× I started to learn typing from my 5th standard.

✓ I started learning to type in my 5th grade.

Use 'started learning to type' instead of 'started to learn typing.' Use 'in my 5th grade' (or 'in 5th grade') rather than 'from my 5th standard.' Suggestion: 'I started learning to type in my 5th grade.'

× I have been using this from since that.

✓ I have been using it since then.

'From since that' is redundant and incorrect. Use 'since then' to indicate a starting point and 'it' as the object pronoun. Suggestion: 'I have been using it since then.'

× So yeah the my 5th grade IT teacher, she told me how to use a computer and how to type on computer first.

✓ So yeah, my 5th grade IT teacher taught me how to use a computer and how to type on a computer.

Remove the extra article 'the' before 'my.' Use past tense 'taught' for a completed action. Include the article 'a' before 'computer' in the second clause. Also avoid redundant subject 'she' after the noun. Suggestion: 'My 5th grade IT teacher taught me how to use a computer and how to type on a computer.'

× First stages I felt very difficulties but later on it felt very easy.

✓ At first I found it very difficult, but later it became very easy.

Use 'At first' for initial stage. 'Felt very difficulties' is ungrammatical; use 'found it very difficult.' 'It felt very easy' can be improved to 'it became very easy.' Suggestion: 'At first I found it very difficult, but later it became very easy.'

× I improve my typing skills through the practice, I even try to use my personal desktop from my home and every day at least I spend an hour for that.

✓ I improve my typing skills through practice; I even try to use my personal desktop at home and I spend at least an hour every day on it.

Use 'through practice' (no 'the') and 'at home' instead of 'from my home.' 'Spend an hour on it' is the correct collocation. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses. Suggestion: 'I improve my typing skills through practice; I even try to use my personal desktop at home and I spend at least an hour every day on it.'

× First I felt very difficulties to learn, then I used to some technologies that teacher showed me.

✓ At first I had great difficulty learning, then I used some techniques that the teacher showed me.

'Felt very difficulties' is incorrect; use 'had great difficulty' or 'found it very difficult.' 'Used to some technologies' is wrong; use 'used some techniques' or 'used the methods' that the teacher showed. Add the definite article 'the' before 'teacher.' Suggestion: 'At first I had great difficulty learning, then I used some techniques that the teacher showed me.'

× No I I am very irritated.

✓ Now I am not irritated anymore.

The original is unclear and contains repetition 'I I' and wrong connector 'No.' Likely intended to say they are no longer irritated. Use 'Now' and negate appropriately: 'not irritated anymore.' Suggestion: 'Now I am not irritated anymore.'