打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., "I prefer handwriting."), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh, umm) and unclear phrases like "fences and pain." Use precise vocabulary to explain why handwriting matters to you.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me express my thoughts more personally. For example, when I write by hand I can choose different styles and notes, which makes it easier to remember and reflect on my feelings.

建議: Give a clear, direct answer first ("I type on a laptop every day."), then support with specific reasons and use linking words (because, so, therefore). Replace vague phrases and correct grammar (e.g., "easy to carry" not "carry on").

範例: I type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient. For instance, I can put it in my bag and work in different places, so I prefer it over a desktop.

建議: Answer directly with a time frame ("I learned in high school.") then give a concise supporting detail. Avoid repetition and unclear clauses. Use proper sentence structure and specific verbs ("taught us touch-typing").

範例: I learned to type in high school when our teachers introduced a typing course. They taught us basic touch-typing and regular practice made me more confident.

建議: Be specific about methods and use linking words. Start with a topic sentence ("I improve my typing by practising regularly."), then list concrete strategies (online exercises, timed tests, correct posture) and avoid irrelevant words like "driving."

範例: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing tests and lessons. For example, I use a typing website for 15 minutes a day and focus on accuracy and correct finger placement, which has gradually increased my speed.

× I prefer handwriting because typing is uh, umm, doing, you know, computer.

✓ I prefer handwriting because typing is done on a computer.

Grammar problem type ID:21 Incorrect passive voice and 26 sentence structure errors. The student used 'doing' incorrectly and an unclear structure. Use passive 'done on a computer' or active 'you do on a computer' to convey the idea clearly. Suggestion: replace 'doing, you know, computer' with 'done on a computer' or 'you do on a computer.'

× But handwriting is uh, you write something with fences and pain, whatever you want.

✓ With handwriting you write something by hand, with feeling and expression, whatever you want.

Grammar problem type ID:13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and 26 sentence structure errors. 'Fences and pain' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'feeling' and 'pen.' Also word order and preposition use needed correction. Suggestion: use 'by hand' and replace wrong nouns with 'feeling' and 'pen.'

× You write down your feelings, everything by pain.

✓ You write down your feelings and everything by hand.

Grammar problem type ID:13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and 11 incorrect use of prepositions. 'By pain' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'by hand.' Suggestion: use 'by hand' to indicate handwriting.

× Handwriting, it's more easy.

✓ Handwriting is easier.

Grammar problem type ID:6 Present tense issue and 13 incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs. Use comparative adjective 'easier' instead of 'more easy' and remove unnecessary pronoun 'it' after topic marker. Suggestion: use 'Handwriting is easier.'

× Every day I dive on laptop keyboard, uh, because it's, uh, easily carry on.

✓ Every day I type on a laptop keyboard because it is easy to carry.

Grammar problem type ID:26 Sentence structure errors and 11 incorrect use of prepositions. 'Dive on' is incorrect verb choice; use 'type on.' 'Easily carry on' is ungrammatical; use 'easy to carry.' Suggestion: 'type on a laptop keyboard' and 'easy to carry.'

× And whenever we go, it's, uh, easily.

✓ And when we go somewhere, it is convenient.

Grammar problem type ID:13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and 26 sentence structure errors. 'It's easily' is incorrect because 'easily' is an adverb; a noun or adjective like 'convenient' is required. Suggestion: use 'it is convenient' or 'easy to carry.'

× We put our on our bag.

✓ We put it in our bag.

Grammar problem type ID:12 Incorrect use of pronouns and 11 incorrect use of prepositions. 'Our on our bag' is incorrect; likely meant 'it in our bag.' Suggestion: use 'put it in our bag.'

× So go everywhere and type something so it's more easy to type on keyboard laptop.

✓ So we can go everywhere and type something; it is easier to type on a laptop keyboard.

Grammar problem type ID:26 Sentence structure errors and 6 present tense issue and 13 incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs. Fix subject omission, tense and comparative form: use 'easier' not 'more easy,' include subject 'we' and correct word order 'laptop keyboard.' Suggestion: 'we can go everywhere and type' and 'easier to type on a laptop keyboard.'

× I learned from my childhood in a high school, our teachers taught us a us for typing, keyboard and everything from laptop, doing everything from We learn from our childhood, you know.

✓ I learned as a child in high school; our teachers taught us typing and how to use the keyboard on a laptop. We learned this during our childhood.

Grammar problem type ID:26 Sentence structure errors, 5 past tense issue and 11 incorrect use of prepositions. The original is disorganized and contains incorrect word order and redundancy. Use past tense 'learned' consistently and clarify phrases: 'as a child in high school' and 'taught us typing' and 'how to use the keyboard on a laptop.' Suggestion: break into clearer sentences and use consistent past tense.

× I think improving typing is practicing.

✓ I think improving typing requires practice.

Grammar problem type ID:8 Verb + -ing form and 26 sentence structure errors. 'Improving typing is practicing' uses gerunds awkwardly; use 'requires practice' or 'improving your typing requires practice.' Suggestion: 'improving your typing requires practice.'

× If you do more practice, your typing is more faster.

✓ If you practice more, your typing will become faster.

Grammar problem type ID:5 Past tense issue and 6 present tense issue and 13 incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs. Use correct verb 'practice' (verb) rather than 'do practice,' and comparative 'faster' without 'more.' Also future result 'will become' fits cause-effect. Suggestion: 'If you practice more, your typing will become faster.'

× But my driving is not professional, but I'm still learning and still improving my typing because I'm not using so much.

✓ But my typing is not professional; I am still learning and improving it because I do not use it very much.

Grammar problem type ID:13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and 12 incorrect use of pronouns and 26 sentence structure errors. 'Driving' is incorrect word choice; should be 'typing.' 'I'm not using so much' is ungrammatical; use 'I do not use it very much.' Suggestion: replace 'driving' with 'typing' and correct the clause to 'I do not use it very much.'