打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then briefly give one specific reason and an example. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like “uh.”

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand during lectures, I retain facts longer and can review them more easily.

建議: Answer directly and correct grammar (use 'neither...nor' and proper tense). Give one clear detail about your daily typing device and a specific example of what you type. Use linking words to improve flow.

範例: I don’t use a desktop or laptop regularly; instead, I type on my smartphone every day. For example, I message friends, reply to emails, and keep a daily to-do list in a notes app.

建議: This answer is generally good but can be tightened: begin with a direct time phrase, then add one specific detail about the learning experience. Use a linking word to connect the two parts and avoid unnecessary words.

範例: I learned to type in third grade when our school introduced computer classes. During those lessons, we practised touch-typing exercises which helped me improve my speed.

建議: Be clearer and avoid repeated words. State the method directly, give a specific routine and a measurable result. Use linking words and correct vocabulary (typing vs handwriting) to avoid confusion.

範例: I improve my typing by practising every day on a keyboard. For example, I set aside 30 minutes to type essays and daily journal entries, which has increased my speed and reduced errors over time.

× I prefer handwriting the most because it is the most effective way to improve our handwriting and uh.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is the most effective way to improve my handwriting.

Using 'prefer... the most' is redundant (prefer already indicates choice); 'our handwriting' mismatches speaker perspective in a personal preference context — use 'my handwriting'. Remove filler 'uh'. Keep present simple for general preference.

× I neither use a desktop or a laptop for a while, but I use my mobile phone every day to chat with my friends and family members and I also write my everyday thing in my notes also.

✓ I haven't used a desktop or laptop for a while, but I use my mobile phone every day to chat with my friends and family, and I also write my daily notes on it.

'Neither... or' is incorrect; use 'neither... nor' or rephrase. 'for a while' needs present perfect ('haven't used') to indicate an action continuing up to now. Avoid repeating 'also' and 'everyday thing' is incorrect — 'daily notes' is clearer. Use 'on it' to indicate writing on the phone.

× I remember when I was in my third grade we started having a computer class in my school and at that time I started learning how to type on a keyboard.

✓ I remember when I was in third grade we started having a computer class at school, and at that time I began learning how to type on a keyboard.

Use 'in third grade' (no 'my') and 'at school' is more natural than 'in my school'. Use 'began' or 'started' consistently; 'began learning' sounds smoother. The past simple 'started/h began' is correct for a past event — keep tense consistent and remove extra articles.

× So I brought my typing by writing every day on a keyboard.

✓ So I improved my typing by writing every day on a keyboard.

'Brought my typing' is incorrect collocation; the correct verb is 'improved' to show progress. 'By writing' correctly uses verb + -ing to express the method.

× Like for example, I write essays on my keyboard as well as daily tasks on my keyboard which really improves my handwriting on on a keyboard.

✓ For example, I write essays and daily tasks on the keyboard, which really improves my handwriting on it.

Avoid repeating 'on my keyboard' twice and remove redundant 'like'. Use 'which' to link the clause and 'it' to refer back to 'keyboard'. Also correct duplication 'on on' and ensure subject-verb agreement ('improves' refers to 'writing on the keyboard').