打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Use clearer sentence structure, avoid filler words (uh), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep answers within 3–4 concise sentences. Focus on accurate grammar (e.g., "much faster" -> "much faster" already, but remove extra words) and correct word forms ("AI checkers" -> "spell-checkers or grammar checkers").

範例: I prefer typing because it is much faster and more convenient than handwriting. Also, typing lets me use grammar and spell-checkers, which help me correct mistakes quickly. For these reasons, I usually choose typing for schoolwork and messages.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence first (e.g., 'It depends on where I am.'), then add two clear supporting details with linking words (for example, 'at home... whereas at school...'). Correct grammar (avoid 'because of' misuse) and finish the thought. Limit to 3 sentences and be specific about frequency or reasons.

範例: It depends on where I am. At home I use my laptop because I don't have a desktop, but at school I use the desktop computers for computer science lessons because the exercises require specific software. Most days I type on my laptop outside class and on desktops during lessons.

建議: Start with a clear time expression (e.g., 'I learned when I was about five.') Then give a short reason or context. Avoid unclear phrases ('the exam requires') and filler words. Use correct past tense and simplified vocabulary to explain who helped you and how you learned.

範例: I learned to type when I was about five years old. My dad bought my first computer, and I practised using the keyboard and mouse a lot, so I learned by using the computer every day. Later, I improved my typing with games and practice.

建議: Give a concise topic sentence, then list specific methods using linking words (for example, 'I improved by...'). Use correct grammar (e.g., 'skills are weak' not 'is'), and include measurable detail if possible (frequency or time spent). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I improved my typing by practising regularly with typing programs and games. I practised about 30 minutes a day during exam periods, and after a few months my speed and accuracy improved significantly.

× I definitely prefer typing, uh, because of this is much more convenient and useful for me because when we type in, this is much more faster than handwriting.

✓ I definitely prefer typing because it is much more convenient and useful for me; when we type, it is much faster than handwriting.

The phrase 'because of this is' uses incorrect conjunction and word order. Replace 'because of this is' with 'because it is' and 'when we type in' with 'when we type'. Also 'much more faster' is redundant ('more' with 'faster'); use 'much faster' or just 'faster'. Suggestion: simplify conjunctions and keep correct adjective modifiers. (Grammar problem type ID:16)

× And also when we type in some messages, uh, history is, uh, AI checkers that check our sentence, uh, for to correct or wrong mistakes.

✓ Also, when we type messages, there are AI checkers that review our sentences to correct mistakes.

'Type in' is better as 'type' for messages; 'history is' is incorrect—use 'there are' to introduce existence. 'For to correct or wrong mistakes' is ungrammatical; use 'to correct mistakes'. Keep plural agreement 'sentences' and avoid redundant words like 'wrong'. (Grammar problem type ID:11)

× I would say it depends where I am because of when I am in the home I only use laptop keyboard just because I do not have my own desktop.

✓ I would say it depends where I am; when I am at home I only use a laptop keyboard because I do not have my own desktop.

'Because of when' is incorrect; use 'when' or restructure sentence. Use preposition 'at home' not 'in the home'. Include article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' and remove redundant 'just because'. Suggestion: simplify to 'when I am at home I only use a laptop because I do not own a desktop.' (Grammar problem type ID:26)

× By the way I am in the school.

✓ By the way, I am at school.

Use 'at school' not 'in the school' for general attendance. Add comma after introductory phrase for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID:11)

× In my computer science lessons I use only desktop because of this is only two which required to us for doing some exercise in the.

✓ In my computer science lessons I only use a desktop because there are only two available for us to use during exercises.

Original has incorrect clause 'because of this is only two' and missing object. Use 'there are only two available' and 'for us to use during exercises' to convey meaning. Place modifiers ('only') correctly. (Grammar problem type ID:26)

× Uh, I would say in my childhood because when I was around 5 years, my dad bought me my own, my first own computer and the exam requires many computer tools such as keyboard, mouse.

✓ I would say in my childhood; when I was around five years old, my dad bought me my first computer, and the exam required many computer tools such as a keyboard and mouse.

Use 'five years old' not '5 years'. Use past tense consistently: 'bought' and 'required' (not 'requires') because events occurred in the past. Use articles 'my first computer' and 'a keyboard and mouse'. (Grammar problem type ID:5)

× And I just had an choice, uh, experts at, uh, learn how to type and use that tools.

✓ And I just had a choice to learn how to type and use those tools.

Use 'a choice' not 'an choice'. 'Experts at' is misplaced and likely unintended; replace with 'to learn'. Use 'those tools' plural demonstrative. Remove filler words. Ensure infinitive 'to learn' follows 'choice'. (Grammar problem type ID:14)

× So when I had some exams on computer science, I realized that my typing skills is really low and weak.

✓ So when I had some computer science exams, I realized that my typing skills were really low and weak.

Subject 'typing skills' is plural, so verb should be 'were' (past tense plural) not 'is'. Also reorder noun phrase to 'computer science exams'. Consider using one adjective ('weak' or 'poor') rather than both. (Grammar problem type ID:27)

× So I started to practice a lot in the typing programs, typing games and lessons.

✓ So I started practicing a lot using typing programs, typing games, and lessons.

Use gerund 'practicing' after 'started' rather than 'to practice'. Use 'using' for tools and include commas in a list. 'In the typing programs' should be 'using typing programs'. (Grammar problem type ID:8)

× So I would say that by this I improved my typing.

✓ So I would say that because of this I improved my typing.

'By this' is awkward; use 'because of this' or 'as a result' to show cause. Place adverbial phrase before result. Alternatively: 'As a result, my typing improved.' (Grammar problem type ID:26)