旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use correct verb forms and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one brief supporting detail. For example, change “I traveling” to “I’m travelling” or “I travel,” and avoid repeating words like “usually” twice.

範例: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car. I enjoy watching passing towns and countryside because it helps me relax during long journeys.

建議: Correct tense and word choice, and make the reason clearer and more concise. Use present simple for habitual actions, fix verb agreement (“it makes me remember” or “it helps me remember”), and limit to one supporting detail with a linking word (because/so).

範例: Yes, I always take photos when I travel by car because they help me remember special moments from the trip.

建議: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to add a specific reason and one brief contrast. Correct verbs and remove duplicated words (“ski ski”, “I like I prefer”).

範例: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I enjoy skiing and snowy landscapes, and I usually visit mountains in winter. However, I sometimes go to the sea in summer for a change of scenery.

× Yes, usually I like to look out the window when I traveling by car.

✓ Yes, usually I like to look out the window when I travel by car.

The verb after 'when' should be in the base form for present tense general habits. 'I traveling' is incorrect because 'traveling' is a present participle; use the simple present 'travel' to match the habitual action. Suggestion: Use 'I travel' for repeated or habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I always took a photo when I traveling by car because it's make me memorize a moment while I traveling.

✓ Yes, I always take photos when I travel by car because it helps me remember a moment while I am traveling.

Multiple tense and form issues: 'always took' (past) conflicts with 'always' which usually indicates a habitual present action, so use simple present 'take'. 'I traveling' should be 'I travel' for habitual action or 'I am traveling' for ongoing; here use 'travel' to match 'take'. 'it's make' is incorrect: after 'it' use third person singular present 'helps' or 'makes' and 'make' needs to be conjugated. 'memorize' is the wrong verb for remembering a memory; use 'remember'. Also changed 'a photo' to plural 'photos' to match 'always' and habitual practice. Suggestions: keep consistent present tense for habits, use correct third-person singular verb forms, and choose appropriate verbs like 'remember'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Usually I prefer mountains more than sea because I like to make some ski ski sport and I like snow and usually I go to the mountain in the winter, but also I like go to the sea.

✓ Usually I prefer the mountains to the sea because I like skiing and snow, and I usually go to the mountains in winter, but I also like going to the sea.

Several issues addressed within allowed types: 'prefer mountains more than sea' is unnatural; use 'prefer the mountains to the sea' (comparison structure). 'make some ski ski sport' is incorrect; the correct gerund is 'skiing'. 'I like snow' is acceptable but linked better as 'and snow'. 'go to the mountain' should be plural 'go to the mountains' for typical destinations, and 'in the winter' simplified to 'in winter'. 'I like go to the sea' should be 'I like going to the sea' (verb + -ing). Suggestions: use 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons, use gerunds for activities (skiing), and keep nouns plural for general places (the mountains). Grammar problem type ID:14

× But yes, and overall I like I prefer mountain more than sea.

✓ Overall, I prefer the mountains to the sea.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical: 'I like I prefer' repeats subjects/verbs and 'mountain more than sea' is an incorrect comparison. Simplify to a single clear statement using 'prefer X to Y' and include the definite article for general places: 'the mountains' and 'the sea'. Suggestions: avoid repetition, use proper comparison structure, and include articles where needed. Grammar problem type ID:26