建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は内容的に十分ですが、もっと簡潔で自然な始め方と文の構造改善が必要です。トピック文で直接答えた後、具体例を短く述べ、冗長な表現（“for example, for me”や“which is one of the biggest cities in the world”）を避けてください。また、文を2〜3文以内に収め、情報の流れを明確にするために接続詞（e.g. “for instance”, “also”）を適切に使ってください。

範例: Yes. I live in Tokyo, so there are many tall buildings nearby. For instance, I can see the Tokyo Skytree and several high-rise condominiums from my neighborhood.

建議: 答えは率直ですが、表現がやや不自然で語法ミスがあります（“there aren't any reasons”や“used to see”）。理由を述べる際は、自然なフレーズ（“I don't usually”や“I'm used to”）を使い、1〜2個の具体例や比較を加えて説得力を高めてください。

範例: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I grew up in Tokyo and I'm used to seeing them every day. Unless a building is unusual or historic, I rarely photograph it.

建議: 良い回答ですが、最初の否定を簡潔にした方が自然です。また、なぜ魅力的なのかをもう少し具体的に説明すると良いです（例：建築様式、年代、装飾など）。接続語を使って情報を整理し、文は2〜3文にまとめてください。

範例: I don't have a specific building in mind, but I would love to visit traditional buildings in the UK or Germany. Their architectural styles and historical details are very different from Japanese buildings, so I'd enjoy photographing their façades and interiors.

建議: 回答は個人的経験を含んでいて良いですが、文法ミス（“I live in house which is on the 15th floor floor”）や冗長な表現を直してください。まず短く肯定し、その後に具体的な理由と一例を1文で述べると自然です。語彙は“overlook”や“view”の使い方を整理しましょう。

範例: Yes, I do. I enjoy the views from high up. For example, I live on the 15th floor of my condominium and can overlook the river and the town, which I find very pleasant.

× If there are, for example, for me, I am living in Tokyo, Japan, which is one of the biggest cities in the world, and there are a lot of tall buildings like Tokyo Skytree, and there are also tall condominiums near my house.

✓ For example, I live in Tokyo, Japan, which is one of the biggest cities in the world, and there are a lot of tall buildings like Tokyo Skytree, and there are also tall condominiums near my house.

The original uses 'I am living' which suggests a temporary action; however, when stating where you live as a general fact, the simple present 'I live' is more appropriate. Also remove redundant phrases ('If there are, for example, for me') and start with 'For example' to make the sentence clear and natural. Use simple present to describe habitual or permanent situations.

× No, I don't, because there aren't any reasons to take photos of buildings.

✓ No, I don't, because there aren't any reasons to take photos of buildings.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable, but a more natural phrasing would be 'there isn't any reason' or 'there are no reasons.' The original 'there aren't any reasons' is plural and can be used, but native speakers more often use the singular 'there isn't any reason' when giving a general explanation. Suggestion: 'No, I don't, because there isn't any reason to take photos of buildings.'

× I was born and brought up in Tokyo, so I am very used to see a lot of buildings.

✓ I was born and brought up in Tokyo, so I am very used to seeing a lot of buildings.

After the phrase 'used to' meaning 'accustomed to,' the verb should be in the -ing form (present participle). 'Used to see' is incorrect in this structure. Use 'used to seeing' to express being accustomed to something.

× They are not so special to me.

✓ They are not very special to me.

Using 'so special' in this context is informal and slightly awkward. 'Very special' more naturally quantifies the adjective. Alternatively, 'not particularly special' is also natural. Suggest replacing 'so' with 'very' or 'particularly'.

× Not especially, but I'd like to visit traditional buildings in the United Kingdom or Germany.

✓ Not especially, but I'd like to visit traditional buildings in the United Kingdom or Germany.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'I'd like to visit' correctly uses the modal 'would' plus base verb, and 'traditional buildings' is fine. No change needed.

× They are very attractive to me because they are totally different from those of Japan.

✓ They are very attractive to me because they are totally different from those in Japan.

The phrase 'those of Japan' is understandable but slightly unnatural. 'Those in Japan' more clearly refers to buildings located in Japan. The tense is fine (simple present) because it describes a general fact.

× I'd like to go and take a lot of photos.

✓ I'd like to go and take a lot of photos.

This sentence is correct: 'go and take' is an acceptable casual structure, and 'I'd like' correctly expresses desire. No grammatical correction needed.

× Yes I do because I really like the scenery from tall building.

✓ Yes, I do because I really like the scenery from tall buildings.

Use plural 'tall buildings' because you are speaking generally about scenery viewed from tall buildings. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech punctuation. The simple present 'I really like' correctly expresses a general preference.

× For example I live in house which is on the 15th floor floor of a condominium and I can overlook a river which is running in front of my house and also beautiful town.

✓ For example, I live in a house which is on the 15th floor of a condominium, and I can overlook a river that runs in front of my house and a beautiful town.

Several article and noun phrase errors: use the indefinite article 'a house' when introducing a countable noun for the first time. Remove duplicate 'floor'. Use 'that runs' (or 'running') rather than 'which is running' for reduced relative clause; 'that runs' is more natural. Also connect 'a beautiful town' with 'and' and include the article 'a'. Add commas to separate clauses. Overall, fix articles, duplicate word, and make verb forms consistent.