建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Use correct singular/plural and articles, and avoid repetition. Link ideas with a simple connector if needed.

範例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in an older neighborhood with mostly low-rise, aging apartment blocks, so the skyline is quite low compared with the city center.

建議: Use present simple for habits and correct word choice. Give a brief reason and one specific example. Avoid spelling mistakes and incorrect adjectives.

範例: Not really — I usually take photos of nature instead. For example, I often photograph flowers and trees in the local park because I find natural scenes more interesting than buildings.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and follow with specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same noun; use pronouns or synonyms. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, the public library near my apartment. I visit it every week because it has a large collection of books and a quiet study area where I can focus on my coursework.

建議: Be clear about your preference and give a single clear reason with correct vocabulary. Use correct expressions for fear (e.g. afraid of heights) and simple sentence structure. Avoid invented words and awkward phrasing.

範例: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building because I’m afraid of heights. I feel uncomfortable on high floors, so I prefer a low-rise apartment on the ground or first floor.

× Actually I live in the elderly area in the city there is many old buildings.

✓ Actually, I live in an elderly area in the city; there are many old buildings.

This sentence has plural/singular issues and punctuation. 'elderly area' needs an article 'an'. 'there is many old buildings' is incorrect because 'many buildings' is plural so use 'there are'. Also add punctuation to separate clauses.

× So it is not tall buildings near my homes.

✓ So there are no tall buildings near my home.

The phrase used incorrect number and structure. Use 'there are no' for plural 'tall buildings'. Use 'home' (singular) or 'my homes' rarely; 'my home' is appropriate here.

× I didn't take photos of buildings.

✓ I don't usually take photos of buildings.

Context asks about general habit, so present simple is required. 'Didn't take' is past tense and implies a single past event; use 'don't usually take' for habitual action.

× Actually, I prefer to take photos of landscapes such as flowers, trees or the parks because I think the building is boarding.

✓ Actually, I prefer to take photos of landscapes such as flowers, trees, or parks because I think buildings are boring.

Multiple issues: 'the parks' should be 'parks' (no definite article for general plural). 'the building is boarding' has wrong adjective and spelling: use 'buildings are boring' to describe them generally and match plural subject and correct adjective 'boring'.

× The library near my apartment where I usually visit.

✓ The library near my apartment is a place I usually visit.

Sentence lacks a main verb and has incorrect relative clause structure. Adding 'is a place' creates a complete sentence meaning.

× I always study in the library and the library have a lot of books that I can read in it and study in it.

✓ I always study in the library, and the library has a lot of books that I can read and study.

Subject-verb agreement: 'library' is singular so use 'has' not 'have'. Also avoid redundant use of 'in it' and 'study in it' by simplifying to 'read and study'.

× I don't want to live in a tub building because I scare of high areas when I stand up.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building because I'm scared of high places when I stand up.

Multiple errors: 'tub' is a typo for 'tall'. 'I scare of' is incorrect; use 'I'm scared of' or 'I am afraid of'. 'high areas' should be 'high places' for natural phrasing.

× The high areas I felt hermetic so I always avoid to the highest.

✓ High places make me feel closed-in, so I always avoid going to the highest floors.

'I felt hermetic' is unnatural; 'make me feel closed-in' or 'I feel claustrophobic' is better. 'avoid to the highest' is ungrammatical; use 'avoid going to the highest floors.' Also maintain tense consistency and clear vocabulary.