建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more precise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid vague phrases like "tall things," and limit length to 2–3 sentences. Add one specific detail using a linking word to support your statement (for example, describe a nearby landmark or how the building affects your life).

範例: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home because I live in the city. For example, my building is a five‑storey hotel, and its height means I often have nice views of the street below.

建議: Make your answer concise and grammatically correct. Begin with a direct response, then give one clear reason with a linking word. Avoid vague phrasing like "be different architecture design"; use specific vocabulary such as "unique architecture" or "interesting facades."

範例: Not usually. I don't often photograph buildings because I rarely encounter striking architecture, but if I visit a building with unique design, I would definitely take pictures.

建議: Keep the answer natural and correct tense. Start with a clear topic sentence and include one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetition ("symbol of love" and "beauty of love") and use linking words like "because" or "so."

範例: Yes, I would like to visit the Taj Mahal because I read about it as a child and was struck by its history and beauty. Since it is one of the Seven Wonders, I hope to see its architecture and gardens in person someday.

建議: Be concise and correct minor errors ("two two floors" → "two floors"). Give a brief reason using a linking word, and add one specific detail about what you like about such a house (e.g., garden, space, privacy).

範例: No, I wouldn't. I prefer a cozy two‑storey house because it offers more privacy and a small garden, which is better for my family.

× Yes, I live in a city and there are lots of tall things near my house and even my home is a hotel so it is quite tall and has five floors.

✓ Yes, I live in a city and there are lots of tall buildings near my house, and my home is a hotel, so it is quite tall and has five floors.

The original used 'things' which is vague and inappropriate; 'buildings' fits the context. Also punctuation was needed to separate clauses for clarity. Use 'there are' correctly for plural 'buildings'. Suggestion: replace vague nouns with specific ones and use commas to separate clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 3

× No, I'm not quite fond of taking photos of buildings and I have not got a chance to see a building be different architecture design.

✓ No, I'm not very fond of taking photos of buildings, and I have not had a chance to see a building with a different architectural design.

Use present perfect 'have not had' to indicate lack of opportunity up to now; 'be different architecture design' is ungrammatical. Use 'with a different architectural design' where 'architectural' is the correct adjective and 'with' is the correct preposition. Suggestion: use 'have not had' and 'with a different architectural design'. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× But if I get that chance I will surely click photos because that fascinates me.

✓ But if I get that chance, I will surely take photos because that fascinates me.

Use 'take photos' rather than informal 'click photos' in standard English. Also add a comma after the conditional clause. 'Will' is correctly used for future; change verb choice for naturalness. Suggestion: use 'take photos' and punctuation after the 'if' clause. Grammar problem type ID: 7

× Yes, when I was a child I have read a lot about Taj Mahal, which is a symbol of love, so I would like to visit it someday as it is one of the seven wonders of the world and it shows the beauty of love.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I read a lot about the Taj Mahal, which is a symbol of love, so I would like to visit it someday as it is one of the seven wonders of the world and shows the beauty of love.

Tense sequence: use simple past 'read' with 'when I was a child' instead of present perfect 'have read'. Also use the definite article 'the' with 'Taj Mahal' and remove redundant 'it' before 'shows'. Suggestion: use past tense for completed actions in the past and include 'the' with famous monuments. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× No, I'm not very fond of tall buildings. I prefer a cozy, comfortable house with two two floors. I think that is moderate for my family and comfortable too.

✓ No, I'm not very fond of tall buildings. I prefer a cozy, comfortable house with two floors. I think that is moderate and comfortable for my family.

The phrase 'two two floors' repeats 'two' and is incorrect; use 'two floors'. Word order: put 'moderate and comfortable' before 'for my family' for clarity. Suggestion: remove duplicate word and reorder adjectives for natural flow. Grammar problem type ID: 14