建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and fix grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct sentence structures (e.g., 'Most of the buildings nearby are low-rise, which makes the area feel less crowded and quieter').

範例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in student housing for UC Berkeley, and most of the buildings nearby are low-rise, which makes the neighborhood feel less crowded and much quieter.

建議: Answer directly, correct article and plural usage, and give a clear reason with linking word. Avoid vague phrases and keep it within 1–3 sentences.

範例: Not really. I rarely photograph buildings; instead, I prefer taking pictures of drawings and food because they are more colorful and have finer details.

建議: Be specific and grammatically correct. Use singular/plural correctly and add a reason using a linking word. If you don't have a specific building, say so clearly and give an example of the type you mean.

範例: I don’t have a single specific building in mind, but I would love to visit a famous skyscraper. I enjoy city views, so visiting a tall building like the Empire State Building would be really impressive.

建議: Clarify your meaning and fix unclear phrases ("I have to keys" and who 'them' refers to). Give a concise reason and one specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Not really. I prefer living in a low-rise building because I have pets and low-rise buildings provide a safer, more comfortable environment for them to play and run.

× No, there aren't any tall buildings around my home because I live in student housing for UC Berkeley.

✓ No, there aren't any tall buildings around my home because I live in student housing for UC Berkeley.

Sentence is grammatically correct with 'there aren't any' to state absence. No change needed.

× Most of buildings near in my neighborhood are low rise buildings which feels less crowded and quiet.

✓ Most of the buildings in my neighborhood are low-rise, which feel less crowded and quiet.

Errors: missing definite article 'the' before 'buildings'; incorrect word order 'near in' should be 'in'; 'low rise' should be hyphenated as 'low-rise' when used as a compound adjective; subject 'which' refers to 'buildings' (plural) so verb should be 'feel' not 'feels'. Suggestion: use 'Most of the buildings in my neighborhood are low-rise, which feel...'.

× I'm not interested in taking photos of building.

✓ I'm not interested in taking photos of buildings.

Error: noun 'building' should be plural after 'photos of' because typically multiple buildings or the general category is meant. Use plural 'buildings'. The '-ing' form 'taking' is correct here.

× Actually, I prefer taking photos of a drawings and foods which are more colorful and detailed.

✓ Actually, I prefer taking photos of drawings and food, which are more colorful and detailed.

Errors: article 'a' is incorrect before plural 'drawings'—remove it; 'foods' as a plural is uncountable here, use 'food'; add comma before 'which' and ensure 'which are' refers to plural 'drawings and food'. Suggestion: 'photos of drawings and food'.

× I'd like to visit all skyscraper.

✓ I'd like to visit all skyscrapers.

Error: singular 'skyscraper' should be plural 'skyscrapers' after 'all'. Use plural when referring to all members of a class.

× I enjoy seeing a city views.

✓ I enjoy seeing city views.

Error: article 'a' before plural 'views' is incorrect; remove 'a'. Keep plural 'views' to match meaning.

× I don't have a specific buildings in my mind but it would be really impressive.

✓ I don't have any specific buildings in mind, but it would be really impressive.

Errors: 'a specific buildings' mixes singular article with plural noun—use 'any specific buildings' or 'a specific building'. 'In my mind' is better as 'in mind' after 'have'. Add comma before 'but'.

× Not really, I prefer living in low rise buildings because I have to keys and low rise buildings provide a more comfortable environment for them to play and run.

✓ Not really. I prefer living in low-rise buildings because I have two keys, and low-rise buildings provide a more comfortable environment for my children to play and run.

Multiple errors: punctuation—use a period to separate ideas; 'low rise' should be hyphenated as 'low-rise'; 'I have to keys' uses 'to' instead of 'two' (number); sentence is unclear who 'them' refers to—use 'my children' or 'them' must be defined; added comma before 'and'. Suggestion: clarify the subject ('children') and correct number word.