建筑— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Correct grammar (e.g. 'sandel of city' → 'edge/outskirts of the city'; 'that is height is' → remove or give height). Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' correctly. Keep it under 5 sentences.

範例: Yes. There are not many tall buildings near my home because I live on the outskirts of the city. However, there is one tall office tower about twenty stories high that stands out from the rest.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and add a specific reason and brief example. Avoid repetition and use linking words such as 'because' or 'so'. Correct phrasing: 'I am not attracted to buildings' or 'I'm not very interested in them.'

範例: Not really. I prefer photographing natural scenery because I enjoy landscapes and sunsets more than architecture. For example, I often take pictures of the nearby river and the trees during golden hour.

建議: Answer directly and add one or two specific reasons. Avoid uncertain phrases like 'which is I guess' — be confident or explain uncertainty clearly. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' to organize reasons.

範例: Yes. I would like to visit Taipei 101 because it is one of the tallest skyscrapers in Taiwan and offers an observation deck with great city views. I would also like to see its unique design and the high-speed elevator for a firsthand experience.

建議: Give a concise direct answer and provide 1–2 clear reasons with correct grammar. Fix unclear phrasing about disasters — for example, 'I worry about safety during earthquakes or fires.' Use linking words like 'because' and 'also'. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

範例: No, I wouldn't. I am afraid of heights, and I would also worry about safety during emergencies such as earthquakes or fires in a tall building.

× Yes, but not much because my home is near the sandal of city. There's one building that is height is.

✓ Yes, but not many because my home is near the center of the city. There's one building that is quite tall.

Problems: 'not much' mismatches countable noun (buildings) should be 'not many' (Grammar Problem Type 14 also relates to quantifiers but primary is preposition/word choice). 'the sandal of city' is incorrect phrase; likely meant 'center of the city' so use correct noun and preposition 'of'. The clause 'There's one building that is height is' is ungrammatical: redundant 'is' and wrong word order. Correct to 'There's one building that is quite tall' or 'There is one tall building.' Suggestion: use 'many' with countable nouns, use standard place expressions like 'center of the city', and form relative clauses with subject + verb (that is + adjective).

× Actually, I don't take many photos of buildings. I prefer taking photos of scenery because I don't have attraction in buildings much. I don't.

✓ Actually, I don't take many photos of buildings. I prefer taking photos of scenery because I'm not very interested in buildings.

Problems: 'I don't have attraction in buildings much' is unidiomatic. Use 'interested in' to express lack of interest. 'Much' placement is awkward; use 'not very' before 'interested'. Also the final short 'I don't.' is incomplete and unclear, so remove it. Suggestion: say 'I'm not very interested in buildings' to convey preference clearly and grammatically.

× I want to visit the building in Taipei called Taiwan 101 because it is the highest building in that country, which is I guess.

✓ I want to visit the building in Taipei called Taiwan 101 because it is the tallest building in that country, I guess.

Problems: 'the highest building' is acceptable but 'tallest' is more natural in this context (superlative). The clause 'which is I guess' is ungrammatical; 'I guess' should be placed after the clause as a parenthetical: 'I guess'. Also 'the building in Taipei called Taiwan 101' is long but acceptable. Suggestion: use 'tallest' for buildings and place 'I guess' appropriately: '...in that country, I guess.'

× Definitely not because I hate height. I am afraid of it. And on top of that I think that if we have disasters running from the tall building is to.

✓ Definitely not because I hate heights. I am afraid of them. And on top of that, I think that if a disaster happens, escaping from a tall building would be difficult.

Problems: 'I hate height' should be plural 'heights' or 'being at heights'. 'I am afraid of it' is unclear; referent should be plural 'them' (heights) or restructure. The sentence 'if we have disasters running from the tall building is to' is ungrammatical and unclear. Correct by using 'if a disaster happens' and an appropriate result clause: 'escaping from a tall building would be difficult.' Also use conditional structure correctly. Suggestion: use correct noun forms ('heights'), clear pronouns matching number, and complete conditional clauses with a main clause expressing consequence.