食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail or example. Use linking words (for example, because/so) and correct subject-verb agreement and pronouns.

範例: My favourite food is sushi because I enjoy its fresh flavours and delicate textures. For example, I love salmon nigiri and avocado rolls as they taste light but satisfying, and they often make me feel refreshed after a meal.

建議: Begin with a direct topic sentence, reduce redundancy, and give one or two specific examples of dishes or flavours to make the answer more vivid. Use linking words like because or such as.

範例: When I was young I loved my mother’s home-cooked meals because she always cooked with care. For example, I remember enjoying her spicy chicken curry and lentil dal, which were both comforting and full of flavour.

建議: Make the answer clearer and avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases (e.g. 'doesn't have a sore tooth'). Use one linking phrase to expand and give a specific example of seasonal food and why you prefer it.

範例: Yes, I change my diet by season because seasonal produce is fresher and cheaper. For instance, in summer I eat a lot of strawberries and blueberries in smoothies, which taste better and keep me hydrated.

建議: Give a clear comparison with one or two concrete reasons and correct grammar (e.g. 'healthier', 'lower in oil and carbs'). Avoid vague terms like 'soothing' without explanation. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, my taste has changed. As a child I preferred rich Indian dishes like butter chicken, but now I prefer sushi because it is generally healthier—lower in oil and carbohydrates and higher in protein—so I feel lighter after eating it.

× My current favorite food is sushi. I absolutely enjoy eating them because they suits your soul.

✓ My current favorite food is sushi. I absolutely enjoy eating it because it soothes the soul.

Use singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'sushi' (uncountable/singular). 'They' is plural and incorrect here. Also verb 'suits' does not agree with singular subject; replace with 'soothes' which correctly matches 'it' and is idiomatic. Suggestion: refer to uncountable foods with 'it' and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I call them the soul food because it is absolutely delicious.

✓ I call it soul food because it is absolutely delicious.

Use singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'sushi' and avoid 'the' before 'soul food' unless specifying a category; 'soul food' as a concept is uncountable. 'Them' and 'it' mismatch; use 'it' consistently.

× At the same time you feel really refreshed.

✓ At the same time, you feel really refreshed.

Not strictly a grammar error type list match but added comma improves clarity. Sentence is otherwise correct. Keep pronoun 'you' if addressing general experience.

× These days I'm really experimenting with Japanese cuisines and absolutely love it.

✓ These days I'm really experimenting with Japanese cuisine and absolutely love it.

Use 'cuisine' (uncountable) rather than plural 'cuisines' when speaking generally about a country's style of cooking. 'Love it' correctly refers to 'Japanese cuisine'.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? As a child I absolutely enjoyed anything my mom used to cook because she put in a lot of love and affection to her cooking and that's the main reason why it was really delicious.

✓ As a child I absolutely enjoyed anything my mom used to cook because she put a lot of love and affection into her cooking, and that's the main reason it was so delicious.

Use 'put a lot of' rather than 'put in a lot of', and preposition 'into' is correct with 'put...into her cooking' (preposition error). Also 'it was so delicious' is more natural than 'really delicious' here. This matches past tense usage.

× I was a child who used to eat every type of food, meat, veggies, fruits or even protein rich.

✓ I was a child who used to eat every type of food: meat, vegetables, fruits, or even protein-rich foods.

List items need parallel form and correct word forms: use 'vegetables' not 'veggies' in formal speech, 'protein-rich' should modify 'foods'. Add colon or commas and ensure items are parallel.

× Definitely, I try to incorporate all the seasonal vegetables and fruits as it is really cheap at the same time fresh.

✓ Definitely, I try to incorporate seasonal vegetables and fruits because they are usually cheaper and fresher.

Use plural 'they' to refer to 'vegetables and fruits' and correct agreement 'are cheaper and fresher'. Original 'all the seasonal' is awkward; 'seasonal' suffices. This fixes quantifier and agreement issues.

× Recently I started eating strawberries and blueberries which is in the season.

✓ Recently I started eating strawberries and blueberries, which are in season.

Use plural verb 'are' to agree with plural subject 'strawberries and blueberries'. Also 'in season' is the idiomatic phrase; omit 'the'.

× As someone who doesn't have a sore tooth, it is a new for me and I enjoy.

✓ As someone who doesn't have a sore tooth, this is new to me and I enjoy it.

'This is new to me' is the correct phrase; 'a new' is incorrect without a noun. Add 'it' to complete 'I enjoy it'. Fix article and sentence completeness.

× Very much so, as a child I usually enjoy and eat a lot of Indian food, although even today I absolutely love them.

✓ Very much so. As a child I usually enjoyed and ate a lot of Indian food, and even today I absolutely love it.

When referring to childhood, use past tense 'enjoyed' and 'ate'. 'Indian food' is treated as singular/uncountable here, so use 'it' not 'them'.

× I am more into really soothing food like sushi because they are much more healthier with less oil, less carb and protein packed.

✓ I am more into soothing foods like sushi because they are much healthier, with less oil and fewer carbs, and are protein-packed.

Use 'foods' plural to match 'they'. 'Healthier' already comparative so 'much more healthier' is redundant; use 'much healthier' or 'more healthy'. Use 'fewer carbs' (countable), and hyphenate 'protein-packed' when used as adjective. Maintain parallel structure.

× So it definitely changed.

✓ So it has definitely changed.

Use present perfect 'has changed' to indicate change from past to present. Depending on context 'So it definitely changed' could be acceptable, but 'has definitely changed' sounds natural when discussing life course.