食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatically accurate: use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise supporting details. Mention specific ingredients or reasons and use linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: My favourite food is ramyeon. I like it because there are many varieties and I can add different toppings like egg, vegetables, or kimchi. Also, I often choose ramyeon when I want something spicy and comforting.

建議: Use past tense consistently and give specific details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain what you liked and why, using linking words for coherence. Avoid vague fillers like “MMM.”

範例: When I was young, I liked fried chicken because of its crispy texture and sweet sauce. The contrast between the crunchy coating and the juicy meat made it my favourite snack. As a child, I often ate it at family gatherings.

建議: Answer directly and complete the sentence. Avoid filler words and incorrect phrases. Explain briefly why your diet stays the same or give an example of seasonal changes, using linking words to clarify your point.

範例: Not really; I usually eat the same types of food throughout the year because I prefer familiar dishes and don’t try new recipes often. However, I sometimes eat more soups and stews in winter for warmth.

建議: Give a clear yes/no and then explain with specific reasons. Use correct word order and linking words to connect ideas. Keep it concise and avoid repetition.

範例: No, my favourite food hasn’t changed; I still love ramyeon. I also enjoy chicken because both are comforting and convenient, so I often choose them depending on my mood.

× My favorite food is ramyeon because ramyeon have a lot of kind of things and I always choose what when I want to eat.

✓ My favorite food is ramyeon because ramyeon has a lot of different ingredients and I can always choose what I want to eat.

The error involves pluralization and countability. 'ramyeon have' is incorrect because ramyeon (treated as a singular dish) requires singular verb 'has' (subject-verb agreement, also ID 27). 'a lot of kind of things' is ungrammatical; use 'a lot of different ingredients' or 'many kinds of things'. Also 'I always choose what when I want to eat' is word order and missing words; correct to 'I can always choose what I want to eat'. Suggestion: treat 'ramyeon' as a singular noun, use singular verbs, and replace vague phrases with 'different ingredients' or 'many kinds'.

× So when I want to eat spicy.

✓ So when I want to eat something spicy.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking an object and proper structure. It needs an object 'something spicy' to be complete and present tense 'want to eat' is fine. Suggestion: add a noun after 'eat' to complete the sentence or combine with the previous sentence for clarity.

× When I was young I like chicken crispy texture and sweet sauce.

✓ When I was young I liked chicken with a crispy texture and sweet sauce.

The talking about past time 'When I was young' requires past tense 'liked' not present 'like'. Also missing preposition 'with' and article/ adjective order: 'crispy texture' should be 'a crispy texture' or 'crispy texture' with 'with'. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for past contexts and include necessary prepositions and articles.

× It was very MMM. Delicious for me.

✓ It was very tasty and delicious to me.

Fragmented and informal 'MMM.' interrupts sentence structure; 'Delicious for me' is a fragment. Combine ideas into one sentence: use an adjective 'tasty' or 'delicious' and a complete structure 'delicious to me' or 'I found it delicious'. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and onomatopoeic inserts in formal responses.

× Actually, I often eat uh, same food because I don't rubbish to find new food because I.

✓ Actually, I often eat the same food because I don't bother to find new foods.

Multiple issues: pronoun/word choice 'don't rubbish' is incorrect; correct verb is 'don't bother'. 'same food' needs definite article 'the same food'. The sentence also ends abruptly 'because I.' Remove redundancy and finish the clause. Suggestion: use 'bother' for 'take trouble to do something' and include articles and complete the clause. Also pluralize 'foods' or keep 'food' uncountable depending on meaning.

× No I haven't, my currently my favorite food is ramyeon but also I like chicken too.

✓ No, it hasn't. Currently my favorite food is ramyeon, but I also like chicken.

Question asked 'Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?' requires a response about change: 'No, it hasn't.' The original 'No I haven't' mismatches subject; use 'it hasn't' referring to 'my favourite food'. 'my currently my' repeats 'my' and misorders; correct 'Currently my favorite food is...'. Also 'I like chicken too' is fine but better 'I also like chicken'. Suggestion: refer to 'favorite food' as 'it' when answering yes/no and avoid redundant words.

× I like both about it.

✓ I like both of them.

The phrase 'I like both about it' is ungrammatical. 'Both' must refer to two items; use 'both of them' (referring to ramyeon and chicken) or 'I like both.' Also 'about it' is unnecessary. Suggestion: use 'both of them' or 'both' alone when context is clear.