食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and directly state the food and simple reasons. Use correct noun phrases, avoid filler questions, and include one or two specific details (flavour, ingredients, or how it's served). Keep answers under 5 sentences and use a linking word to add detail.

範例: My favourite food is a traditional Bandung dish called W Jofa. I love it because it has a rich, spicy flavour from a blend of ground spices and chilli powder. Also, it is usually served with fresh herbs and crispy shallots, which give it a nice contrast of texture.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence (what you liked) and give specific examples and simple explanations. Use correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., grilled chicken, smoked chicken) and link ideas with words like 'for example' or 'also'. Avoid unclear phrases like 'smoked air'.

範例: When I was young, I really liked spicy food. For example, I often ate grilled or smoked chicken with a very hot chilli sauce. I preferred it at the second-highest heat level because it was intense but still enjoyable.

建議: Answer directly and give one or two specific seasonal examples. Use clearer vocabulary (seasonal, street food, variety) and linking words like 'for example' or 'also'. Keep sentences shorter and grammatically correct.

範例: Yes, I do. For example, in the rainy season I prefer hot soups and stews, while in summer I choose lighter dishes like salads or grilled fish. I also enjoy trying different street foods year-round because the variety is interesting.

建議: Give a clear yes/no or brief statement about change, then support with specific reasons or examples (e.g., exposure to international cuisine, health concerns). Use simple, correct grammar and linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid vague phrases like 'too tight for today'.

範例: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As I grew older I started to try foods from other countries — for example sushi and Italian pasta — so I now enjoy a wider range of dishes. Also, I choose healthier options more often because I care about my diet.

× I love the traditional food from Bandung W Jofa.

✓ I love the traditional food from Bandung, W Jofa.

The sentence mainly needs punctuation for clarity; however the preposition 'from' is acceptable. Keep 'from Bandung' to indicate origin; add a comma to separate the place name 'W Jofa' or confirm whether 'W Jofa' is part of the name. Suggestion: use comma or restructure as 'I love W Jofa traditional food from Bandung.'

× Why I love that? Because it's full of the powder on there.

✓ Why do I love it? Because it is covered in a lot of powder.

The question word order must use auxiliary 'do' for present simple questions (subject-auxiliary inversion). 'That' is vague; use 'it' referring to the food. 'Full of the powder on there' is ungrammatical: use 'covered in a lot of powder' or 'has a lot of powdered seasoning.' Suggestion: form questions as 'Why do I love it?' and use clearer noun phrases for descriptions.

× The food is made by several seasoning such as and the.

✓ The food is made with several seasonings, such as ...

Use plural 'seasonings' for multiple items (quantifier and count noun agreement). Use 'made with' to indicate ingredients rather than 'made by'. 'Such as' must be followed by examples; remove the stray 'and the' or add actual seasonings. Suggestion: list specific seasonings after 'such as.'

× When I was young I really like spicy food.

✓ When I was young I really liked spicy food.

The time clause 'When I was young' refers to the past, so the main verb should be in past tense: 'liked' rather than present 'like.' Suggestion: ensure verb tense matches time expressions.

× It name chicken but like a grilled chicken and smoked air.

✓ Its name is chicken, but it is like grilled chicken and smoked meat.

'It name' lacks the correct verb and possessive: use 'Its name is.' 'Like a grilled chicken' needs 'like' to compare and 'smoked air' is incorrect—likely meant 'smoked meat' or 'smoked flavor.' Suggestion: use 'its' for possession and include proper nouns for foods.

× Spicy is like 2 level the highest level and I think it's familiar in my mouth spicy.

✓ The spiciness is at level two, which is the highest level, and I find that level familiar to my palate.

Use noun 'spiciness' or 'the spice level' rather than 'spicy.' '2 level the highest level' needs clearer structure: 'at level two, which is the highest.' 'Familiar in my mouth spicy' is ungrammatical; use 'familiar to my palate' or 'familiar to me.' Suggestion: choose correct nouns and clearer modifiers.

× Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

✓ Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. The preposition 'at' and the plural 'times' are appropriate. No action required.

× Yes I do because I like to hunt the kind of food especially in many restaurant or if not in the restaurant I also look for the food in a street food because a street food here is so diver so I look for food that I really curious with it.

✓ Yes, I do because I like to hunt for different kinds of food, especially in many restaurants; if not in a restaurant, I also look for street food because street food here is so diverse, so I look for foods that I am really curious about.

Use 'hunt for' when searching something. 'Kind of food' should be plural 'kinds of food.' Use plural 'restaurants.' 'Street food' is an uncountable noun so drop 'a' before it. 'Diver' should be 'diverse.' 'Curious with it' is incorrect preposition use; say 'curious about.' Also use consistent verb forms: 'look for' and 'am curious.' Suggestion: break long sentence into clauses, use 'for' with 'hunt', pluralize count nouns and use correct prepositions.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

✓ Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

This exam question is correctly formed in present perfect to ask about change since childhood. No correction needed.

× When I am increasingly older, I think that there are many foods that change today, because we know that the widespread of the culture specific from another country make different of the kind of food.

✓ As I have grown older, I think many foods have changed, because the spread of specific cultures from other countries has changed the kinds of food available.

'When I am increasingly older' is awkward and wrong tense; use 'as I have grown older.' 'There are many foods that change today' should be present perfect 'many foods have changed.' 'The widespread of the culture specific' is incorrect noun phrase; use 'the spread of specific cultures.' Subject-verb agreement: 'spread ... has changed' (singular subject) and 'make different of the kind of food' should be 'has changed the kinds of food.' Suggestion: use present perfect to describe changes over time, correct noun phrases and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× So I think it's too fundamental when we know about food today, it's too tight for today.

✓ So I think food culture has become more complex today; it is too limiting to describe food in simple terms.

The original sentences are unclear and use incorrect metaphors: 'too fundamental' and 'too tight' do not convey likely meaning. Restructure to express intended idea: perhaps 'food culture has become more complex' or 'it's too restrictive to categorize food simply.' Suggestion: clarify the intended meaning and choose appropriate adjectives ('complex', 'restrictive') and restructure into coherent sentences.