食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且有重复填充词（umm, uh, as you know）。句子结构混乱，细节不够具体。建议去掉口头禅，先给出主题句，然后用一到两句具体描述你喜欢哪种寿司、口味或场景，并用连接词使表述更连贯。可以提及喜欢的配料、口感或与谁一起吃过的经历。

範例: My favourite food is sushi. I especially enjoy salmon nigiri because of its rich, buttery texture and fresh taste. I also like rolls with sesame and avocado, which add a crunchy and creamy contrast.

建議: 回答重复且时态和表达不准确，口头禅影响流畅性。建议用简单过去时清楚叙述过去的喜好，避免重复，并加入具体细节（如年龄、常吃的种类、和谁一起吃或为什么喜欢）。用连接词如“because”或“when”组织句子。

範例: I liked sushi when I was a child. When I first visited Japan with my mother, I tried many kinds of sushi and enjoyed the fresh fish and rice, so it became my favourite food.

建議: 回答总体合格但存在多余填充词与重复。内容可以更具体，例如说明哪些食物具有季节性、为什么这些食物在节日重要，以及你个人的感受。使用连接词（for example, during, because）使结构更清晰，控制在三到五句内。

範例: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, during Chinese New Year my family always eats dumplings because they symbolize wealth. During the Mid-Autumn Festival we have mooncakes, which are traditional and sweet, and we usually share them with relatives.

建議: 回答语法和表达混乱，含糊不清，且有矛盾。建议先直接回答（Yes/No），然后用一到两句解释原因，避免模糊短语。澄清你是否尝试并喜欢其他菜系，并用具体例子说明变化或保持不变的原因。

範例: No, my favourite food has not changed since I was a child. I still prefer Japanese food like sushi, but over time I have also started enjoying Turkish dishes such as kebabs because I like their spices and grilled flavours.

× My favorite food is sushi and it is umm, traditional, uh, Japanese food.

✓ My favorite food is sushi; it is traditional Japanese food.

句中多餘的冠詞和填充詞使表達不清。將兩個分句用分號連接，更簡潔；去掉非必要的“uh/umm”。另外“traditional Japanese food”中不需要不定冠詞。

× Uh, as you know, there's lots of kind of sushi and I love sesame as as well.

✓ As you know, there are many kinds of sushi, and I also love sesame.

“lots of kind of” 不正確，應為“many kinds of”。因為主語是複數（kinds），動詞用複數形式“are”。“as as well” 是重複，改為“also”。

× As I told you, I love eating sushi when I was young, I love eating sushi too.

✓ As I told you, I loved eating sushi when I was young; I loved it very much.

敘述過去經驗應使用過去時，將“love”改為過去式“loved”。用分號或句號分開兩個獨立句以改善句子結構。

× I remember that, umm, when I go to the, when I first time go to the Japan, go to Japan, I order a lot of sushi with my mom and I enjoy it very much.

✓ I remember that when I first went to Japan, I ordered a lot of sushi with my mom and enjoyed it very much.

句子結構混亂且時態不一致。應使用過去時“went/ordered/enjoyed”。去掉多餘的重複片段“go to the/ go to Japan”。“first time” 應改為“first” 或“for the first time”。

× Of course, I try various kind of food in different times of the year.

✓ Of course, I try various kinds of food at different times of the year.

“various” 應接複數名詞“kinds of”，且固定搭配為“at different times of the year”。

× Umm, for example, in the Chinese New Year, we always uh, eat the Chinese dumplings, uh, as well, uh, during the mid autumn festival, uh, we try, we, we eat the meat and we eat the mooncake as well and yeah, we.

✓ For example, at Chinese New Year we always eat Chinese dumplings; during the Mid-Autumn Festival we eat meat and mooncakes as well.

節日通常用介詞“at”而不是“in”。“mid autumn festival” 應大寫並加連字“Mid-Autumn Festival”。“mooncake” 複數用“mooncakes”。去掉口頭禪並簡化重複語句。

× MMM, there's nothing change of my favorite food since I was child.

✓ Hmm, there's been no change in my favorite food since I was a child.

“there's nothing change of” 語法錯誤。正確表達為“there has been no change in...”。“since I was a child” 需加不定冠詞“a”。時態用現在完成（has been）表示從過去持續到現在的狀態。

× Uh, but I do love more. Compared to my childhood and example, I accepted Japanese food.

✓ But I do like it more now compared to my childhood; for example, I became more open to Japanese food.

“love more” 用法模糊，需明確比較對象和時間。原句“accepted Japanese food” 用詞不當，應用“became more open to” 表達接受度提高。句子亦需分成兩部分以清晰表達。

× I love eating Turkey foods.

✓ I love eating Turkish food.

“Turkey foods” 語法不正確，應使用形容詞形式“Turkish” 修飾不可數名詞“food”。若要強調不同菜式可說“Turkish dishes”。