食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence saying what your favourite food is, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (use singular/plural, verb forms) and avoid fillers like 'uh'.

範例: My favourite foods are high-protein meals, such as grilled chicken, lentils and eggs, because they give me energy and help me build muscle. For example, I often eat a chicken salad with quinoa for lunch, which keeps me full and supports my goal of gaining weight.

建議: Open with a clear past statement about childhood preferences, then contrast with present using a linking word (e.g., 'however' or 'but'). Give one specific example of a childhood favourite and one specific current food to show change. Avoid repetitions and filler words.

範例: As a child I loved continental fast foods like french fries, pizza and burgers. However, over the years I became health-conscious, so now I usually choose high-protein options such as grilled fish and beans to maintain my weight and energy.

建議: Structure your answer: start with 'Yes' then explain how seasons affect your meals with clear examples. Use coherent linking words ('in summer', 'in winter') and correct unclear phrases (e.g., 'add some nerves and farm foods' is confusing). Be specific about foods.

範例: Yes. In summer I eat cooling, hydrating foods such as salads, watermelon and cucumbers to stay hydrated. In winter I prefer warm, spicy dishes like stew, curries and roasted root vegetables to keep me warm.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence stating the change, then explain reasons and provide specific examples of childhood and current favourites. Correct grammar (tense, articles) and avoid trailing off; finish your thoughts with concrete details.

範例: Yes, it has changed. As a child I loved sugary treats like chocolate, cakes and candy, but now I prefer nutritious meals such as oatmeal, grilled salmon and steamed vegetables because I want to stay healthy and fit.

× I prefer a nutrients and calorie rich food.

✓ I prefer nutrient- and calorie-rich food.

Use of 'a' is incorrect before an uncountable/compound adjective phrase; 'nutrients' should be the adjective form 'nutrient' and compound adjectives use hyphens. Remove 'a' because 'food' is uncountable here. Suggestion: Use 'nutrient-rich' or 'nutrient- and calorie-rich' before 'food'.

× I always prefer to have my lunch and dinner comprises of high protein diet and not only boost my energy level but also help me to gain my muscle as I'm currently working on my uh low weight because I'm very underweight also.

✓ I always prefer my lunch and dinner to consist of a high-protein diet that not only boosts my energy levels but also helps me gain muscle, since I am currently trying to increase my low weight because I am very underweight.

Multiple errors: 'comprises of' is incorrect (use 'consist of' or 'comprise' without 'of'), missing articles ('a high-protein diet'), subject-verb agreement ('boosts', 'helps'), verb forms ('help me to gain' -> 'helps me gain'), and sentence fragments/word order. Also use 'energy levels' plural and clarify reason with 'since' rather than awkward repetition. Suggestions: split into clearer clauses, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct verbs ('consist of').

× When I was in, I was a big fan of continental food like fries, pizzas and burgers.

✓ When I was young, I was a big fan of continental food like fries, pizza and burgers.

The phrase 'When I was in' is incomplete; likely meant 'When I was young'. Also use 'pizza' as uncountable or singular form in a list; 'pizzas' is acceptable but 'pizza' is more natural in general. Maintain past tense 'was' which is correct.

× But later on with the UH, with the passage of time, I have realized and I have learned a lot of uh health and fitness.

✓ But later on, with the passage of time, I realized and learned a lot about health and fitness.

Mixing present perfect ('have realized') with time phrase 'with the passage of time' is awkward; simple past 'realized' fits. Remove filler 'UH' and add preposition 'about' after 'learned'. Suggestions: prefer 'I realized and learned a lot about health and fitness.'

× So I moved and I switched to high protein diet UH, which not only boosts my energy level but also maintained my healthy weight.

✓ So I switched to a high-protein diet, which not only boosts my energy levels but also helps me maintain a healthy weight.

Tense inconsistency: 'boosts' (present) vs 'maintained' (past). Use present tense 'helps me maintain' to match habitual action. Add article 'a' and hyphenate 'high-protein'. Remove filler 'UH'.

× Yes, I usually change my meals according to the season.

✓ Yes, I usually change my meals according to the season.

Sentence is correct. No change needed. Suggestion: none.

× Like in summer I usually focus on my hydration and add salads, fruits and vegetables.

✓ In summer I usually focus on staying hydrated and add salads, fruits, and vegetables.

Prefer 'In summer' rather than 'Like in summer'. Use 'staying hydrated' (verb phrase) instead of 'my hydration' for natural English. Add Oxford comma for clarity. Suggestion: Use gerund after 'focus on'.

× Uh rich in water content.

✓ They are rich in water content.

Fragment: missing subject. Attach to previous sentence or add 'They are' to form a complete sentence. Remove filler 'Uh'.

× But in winters I move to more spicy food and add some nerves and farm foods.

✓ But in winter I switch to spicier foods and add some nuts and farm products.

Use singular seasonal noun 'winter' or 'winters' both possible but 'in winter' is natural. 'More spicy' should be comparative 'spicier'. 'Move to' is informal; 'switch to' is better. 'Nerves' is incorrect; likely 'nuts'. 'Farm foods' unclear — use 'farm products' or 'locally produced foods'.

× Yes, in childhood I love to eat sweet dishes with a lot of sugar and chocolate and other sweetening agent.

✓ Yes, in childhood I loved to eat sweet dishes with a lot of sugar, chocolate, and other sweetening agents.

Tense mismatch: 'in childhood' requires past tense 'loved' not 'love'. Use plural 'sweetening agents' and add commas for list. 'In childhood' could be 'When I was a child' for naturalness.

× But later on I learned about health and fit fitness and I switched to more healthier food comprises of, uh, nutrients and.

✓ But later on I learned about health and fitness, and I switched to healthier foods that are full of nutrients.

Errors: doubled words 'fit fitness', incorrect comparative 'more healthier' (use 'healthier'), 'comprises of' incorrect (use 'consist of' or 'are full of'), sentence ends incomplete. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestions: use 'healthier foods that are full of nutrients' for clarity.