食物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: ① 主語と動詞の一致や冠詞の使い方（a/an/the）に注意する。② 情報の繰り返しを減らし、より自然で簡潔な表現を使う。③ 味の説明で具体的な語彙（umami, rich, creamy など）を使うと印象が良くなる。④ 文は最大5文に収め、接続詞や代名詞で流れを滑らかにする。

範例: My favorite food is ramen, especially tonkotsu. It’s famous worldwide as a Japanese dish, and I enjoy its rich, creamy pork broth. I also like trying different regional varieties because each one has a unique flavor and topping. Overall, ramen is comforting and satisfying to me.

建議: ① 文法（複数形、動詞の一致）と語彙の誤用に注意する（e.g. "have" → "had", "fruits" の使い方）。② 意図を明確にし、具体例を示す（どんなイタリア料理か）。③ 比較をするときは比較表現を正確に使う（"compared to" の位置や対象）。④ 冗長な繰り返しを避け、論理的な接続語を使う。

範例: When I was young, I preferred Italian food to Japanese food. I liked dishes like pasta and pizza because they were richer and more flavorful than the subtle taste of traditional Japanese food. For example, tomato-based sauces and cheese made Italian dishes taste stronger, which I enjoyed as a child.

建議: ① 表現を具体化し、季節ごとの変化に関する明確な例を出す（季節の食材や行事食）。② "gorgeous coast dinners" のような不自然な語は避け、適切な語彙を選ぶ。③ 文を整理して接続詞（for example, in summer, during winter）で流れを整える。④ 配達や外食について話す場合は頻度や理由も加えると良い。

範例: Yes, I do. In summer I often choose lighter meals such as salads and cold noodles, while in winter I prefer hot soups or stews. I also enjoy trying international cuisines year-round; for instance, I often order Vietnamese pho from restaurants or delivery because I like its fresh herbs and clear broth.

建議: ① 不完全な文を避け、理由を明確に述べる（"vegetables have" の後に何があるか）。② 自然な時制と語順を使う。③ 変化の過程やきっかけ（when/how/why）を具体的に説明する。④ 文を3〜4文に収め、接続語（since, because, however）を使って論理的に繋げる。

範例: Yes, my tastes have changed since childhood. I didn’t like vegetables as a child, but now I enjoy them because I try to eat more healthily and I’ve discovered how tasty well-prepared vegetables can be. For example, roasted seasonal vegetables taste delicious with olive oil and herbs.

× One of my favorite food is ramen.

✓ One of my favorite foods is ramen.

'One of' requires a plural noun after it. 'Food' should be plural 'foods' because you are selecting one item from a group of foods. Improve by using 'one of' + plural noun: 'one of my favorite foods'.

× Ramen is well known by our Japanese food in the world, and I really love many various kinds of ramen.

✓ Ramen is well known as Japanese food around the world, and I really love many different kinds of ramen.

Use 'well known as' to describe how ramen is recognized, not 'known by'. 'Our Japanese food' is awkward; 'Japanese food' is correct. 'In the world' should be 'around the world'. 'Many various kinds' is redundant; use 'many different kinds'.

× It is oily and fatty but taste very good.

✓ It is oily and fatty but tastes very good.

Subject-verb agreement: with subject 'it' the verb must be 'tastes' (third person singular). Also 'oily and fatty' is acceptable as adjectives describing ramen.

× When I was very young, I liked Italian foods compared to Japanese food.

✓ When I was very young, I liked Italian food compared to Japanese food.

'Food' when referring to a cuisine type is usually uncountable and singular: 'Italian food' and 'Japanese food'. Use the same form for both for parallelism.

× That is because I thought that Japanese food have a lean taste, not salty.

✓ That is because I thought that Japanese food had a lean taste and was not salty.

Tense consistency: the main clause is past ('I thought'), so subordinate clause should use past 'had' and 'was'. Also 'not salty' describes 'taste' so use 'was not salty' or 'was less salty'.

× On the other hand, Italian fruits have a strong taste and salty.

✓ On the other hand, Italian food has a strong taste and is salty.

'Fruits' is incorrect here; you mean 'food'. Use singular uncountable 'food' with singular verb 'has', and express 'is salty' rather than just 'salty'.

× Yes, I typically choose many different types of foods, like fast foods and gorgeous coast dinners.

✓ Yes, I typically choose many different types of food, like fast food and fancy coastside dinners.

Use uncountable 'food' when speaking about categories. 'Fast foods' is better as 'fast food'; 'gorgeous coast dinners' is unnatural—'fancy coastside dinners' or 'dinners on the coast' is clearer.

× And of course I choose many cuisines from other countries.

✓ And of course I choose many cuisines from other countries.

This sentence is grammatical, but 'choose many cuisines from other countries' is acceptable. No change needed; keep as is. (Included to follow instruction 2: only correct listed types.)

× For example, I really like Vietnamese foods and I eat Vietnamese foods in the restaurant and using Uber Eats for delivery services.

✓ For example, I really like Vietnamese food and I eat it in restaurants or order it using Uber Eats for delivery.

Use uncountable 'Vietnamese food'. Parallel structure: 'eat it in restaurants' and 'order it using Uber Eats'. Do not mix 'in the restaurant and using'—use parallel verbs 'eat' and 'order'.

× Since I was a child, my taste has been changed.

✓ Since I was a child, my taste has changed.

Use present perfect 'has changed' without 'been' because 'change' is an intransitive verb here. 'Has been changed' would imply someone changed it (passive). 'Since' indicates a time from past until now, so present perfect is correct.

× For example, I really like vegetables now, but when I was a child I didn't like vegetables.

✓ For example, I really like vegetables now, but when I was a child I didn't like them.

Use pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition; sentence is otherwise correct. Ensure past tense 'didn't like' matches time reference.

× That is because I changed my taste to be healthy and I understood that vegetables have.

✓ That is because I changed my eating habits to be healthier and I understood the benefits of vegetables.

Original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical ('vegetables have' requires an object). Clarify meaning: 'changed my eating habits' or 'changed my taste to be healthier' and state what vegetables have (e.g., benefits). Use 'healthier' as comparative adjective.