钥匙— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (articles, tense) and avoid irrelevant items. Focus on natural phrasing and keep to 3–4 sentences.

範例: No, I usually only carry one house key. However, when I go to the tennis club I sometimes take an extra key for the locker and my membership card. Because I rarely go out with many keys, I find it easy to keep track of them.

建議: Give a truthful, coherent response with correct verb forms and realistic details. Avoid exaggeration like "every single day." Use a linking word to explain consequences and keep it natural and brief.

範例: Yes, I have misplaced my keys a few times. As a result, I try to be careful and often leave a spare key at home with my mother so I don't get locked out.

建議: Answer directly with clear grammar and logical structure. Use linking words (because, so) to explain reasons, and avoid confusing negatives. Be specific about frequency and arrangements for access.

範例: No, I don't often lock myself out because my mother is usually at home. Therefore, I can always get in if I forget my key, so it rarely causes a problem.

建議: Express your opinion clearly and politely, then give specific reasons with linking words. Correct phrasing and vocabulary (e.g., "a bad idea," "responsible") will improve clarity.

範例: No, I don't think it's a good idea to leave keys with a neighbour. Although some neighbours are friendly, they may not be reliable; therefore I prefer to leave a spare key with a close family member who I trust to be responsible.

× I usually have just one key for my house and if I was in Tennis Club I have to bring key for the card to carry the balls and also to collect my Locket.

✓ I usually have just one key for my house, and if I am at the tennis club I have to bring a key card to carry the balls and also to collect my locket.

The sentence mixes conditional tense and wrong verb forms. 'If I was' should be 'if I am' (present conditional matching habitual context) or 'when I am' for routine; 'in Tennis Club' should be 'at the tennis club' (preposition and articles). 'Have to bring key for the card' is incorrect order and missing article — use 'bring a key card'. Capitalization of common nouns like 'Tennis Club' and 'Locket' is incorrect. Suggestion: use consistent present simple for habitual actions and correct prepositions/articles.

× Yes I have. I lost my key every single day so I usually don't take my key to go somewhere or something to do.

✓ Yes I have. I lose my keys every single day, so I usually don't take my keys when I go somewhere or have errands to do.

The speaker used past simple 'lost' but refers to habitual action; present simple 'lose' is correct for habits. Also plural agreement: 'my key' should be 'my keys' because 'every single day' implies multiple occurrences. 'to go somewhere or something to do' is awkward; use 'when I go somewhere or have errands to do.' Suggestion: use present simple for habits and maintain plural consistency.

× No I don't if I forgot to bring my key or lock the key when I left.

✓ No, I don't. If I forget to bring my key or lock the door when I leave, ...

Sentence structure is incorrect and tense is inconsistent. 'If I forgot' uses past while the context requires present/future 'if I forget' as a general condition. 'Lock the key' is wrong; you lock the door. 'When I left' should be 'when I leave.' Suggestion: use present simple in conditional clauses for general situations and correct collocations (lock the door).

× However my mom always in the house so I don't have to look the key to go somewhere.

✓ However, my mom is always at home, so I don't have to take the key when I go out.

Missing verb 'is' after 'my mom' (sentence structure) and incorrect preposition 'in the house' is better as 'at home.' 'Look the key' is incorrect verb choice; use 'take the key.' Also 'to go somewhere' is better as 'when I go out.' Suggestion: include the verb 'is', use correct prepositions and collocations.

× No, I don't think so. It is worse idea because they are not my family, even they are close people between me and them.

✓ No, I don't think so. It is a bad idea because they are not my family, even if they are close to me.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'bad/worse idea.' 'Worse' is comparative and needs comparison; 'bad' is appropriate. 'Close people between me and them' is ungrammatical; use 'close to me.' Suggestion: use correct articles and idiomatic expressions like 'close to me.'

× In addition, they don't have responsibility where they lost the case.

✓ In addition, they wouldn't be responsible if they lost the keys.

Phrase 'don't have responsibility where they lost the case' is ungrammatical. Use conditional/modal 'wouldn't be responsible' to express potential lack of responsibility. 'Lost the case' is wrong; intended meaning is 'lost the keys.' Suggestion: use clear nouns and conditional phrasing to express responsibility.