走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and consistent. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, avoid contradictions (you said “No” then “I walk a lot”), reduce hesitations, use correct tense and plural/singular forms, and limit to up to 5 concise sentences. Add one specific reason with a linking word (because/so) and a concrete detail.

範例: Yes, I walk a lot, especially in my neighbourhood because it helps me relax. For example, I often walk for 30 minutes after dinner and enjoy the shops and street trees along the route.

建議: Use correct past tense and avoid repetition and fillers. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words (for example, because/so) and concise examples. Mention specific activities or places to make the answer vivid.

範例: Yes, I often went for walks as a child because I enjoyed exploring my neighbourhood. For example, I used to walk to the park with friends to play football and visit the small grocery store on the corner.

建議: Clarify meaning and use correct vocabulary: likely you meant ‘peaceful views’ and ‘relieve stress’. Start with a clear general reason, then support with a specific effect using linking words (so/therefore). Avoid repeating words and correct subject-verb agreement.

範例: People like walking in parks because they offer peaceful scenery and fresh air. As a result, walking there helps to relieve stress and improve mood, especially after a busy day.

建議: Answer directly and use the conditional structure correctly. State the place, give one or two specific reasons with linking words, and use correct verb forms (e.g. ‘go swimming’). Keep it concise and natural.

範例: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk on the beach because I love the sea views and the sound of waves. In addition, I could go swimming and collect shells along the shore.

建議: Use past simple for recent events and be specific about timing and effects. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence (I went...), then explain why and what happened using linking words (because/so) and a specific detail about the park to show result (I felt calmer). Avoid fillers.

範例: I went to the park yesterday because I was feeling very stressed. While walking among the trees and flowers, I felt much calmer and more relaxed afterwards.

× No, I walk a lot.

✓ No, I don't walk a lot.

The student used simple present 'I walk a lot' but the examiner asked 'Do you walk a lot?' which is a yes/no question expecting affirmation or negation. To negate in present tense, use auxiliary do not + base verb: 'I don't walk a lot.' This fixes tense and polarity.

× When I was walking I can see the views on the streets.

✓ When I walk I can see the views on the streets.

The original mixes past progressive 'was walking' with present modal 'can see'. Maintain consistent time: if speaking generally use simple present 'When I walk I can see...'. If referring to a past occasion, use past: 'When I was walking I could see...'. Choose one timeline and match verb forms.

× I think it is pleasures.

✓ I think it is pleasant.

'Pleasures' is a plural noun; the student needs an adjective describing 'it' (the experience). Use 'pleasant' to describe something enjoyable. Alternatively, 'it is a pleasure' would use the noun form correctly.

× Yeah, I always go go to have a walk when I was a child because I like to see the views on the streets and I can meet, uh, uh, I can meet my friends on the on the street and I can, umm, play with them during the walk.

✓ Yeah, I always went for a walk when I was a child because I liked to see the views on the streets and I could meet my friends on the street and play with them during the walk.

The sentence mixes present tense verbs ('go', 'like', 'can') with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense throughout: 'went', 'liked', 'could'. Also use natural collocation 'go for a walk' and remove duplicated words and filler pauses.

× Umm because umm because the park have a lot of pressure views after they after the people walk the park and they they can feel pressure and relax.

✓ Umm, because the park has a lot of peaceful views; after people walk in the park they can feel peaceful and relaxed.

'Park have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; singular 'park' requires 'has'. 'Pressure views' is incorrect adjective choice; likely 'peaceful views'. Use 'walk in the park' not 'walk the park'. Use parallel adjectives 'peaceful and relaxed'.

× Umm, I want to go to the. The the beach because I love the, uh, beach views and I can also swimming there.

✓ Umm, I want to go to the beach because I love the beach views and I can also swim there.

After modal/can use base verb, not -ing: 'can swim' not 'can swimming'. Also remove extra 'the.' Keep 'go to the beach' correct preposition and article.

× Umm, I go to the park for a walk, uh, yesterday, umm, because I, uh, I have a lot of stress and umm, during I, I uh, saw the feels of the uh, park. I can uh, relive my stress.

✓ Umm, I went to the park for a walk yesterday because I had a lot of stress, and while I was there I felt the calm of the park. I could relieve my stress.

The student mixed present tense 'go', 'have', 'can' with past time 'yesterday'. Use past tense: 'went', 'had', 'felt', 'could relieve'. 'Saw the feels' is ungrammatical; 'felt the calm' or 'felt relaxed' expresses the idea. Use 'while I was there' for background action.