走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, and use correct verb forms. Add one specific reason or brief example using a linking word. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I walk a lot — about 9,000 steps a day. I find walking improves my fitness and reduces stress, so I try to walk whenever I can. For example, I walk to work three times a week because it helps me feel energised.

建議: Answer the past question clearly using past tense and avoid confusing present references. Give a short contrast or reason using a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences and correct tense errors.

範例: No, I didn't often go for walks when I was a child because I spent most of my free time playing indoors. However, I walk a lot now — about 9,000 steps a day — because I want to stay healthy and relaxed.

建議: Use appropriate verbs (walk, not work) and provide two clear reasons with linking words for coherence. Avoid colloquial tags like 'right?' and keep answers natural and formal enough for the test.

範例: People like walking in parks because it is safer than walking on busy streets and there is less traffic. Moreover, parks are peaceful and have fresh air, which makes walks more enjoyable.

建議: Begin with a clear conditional answer and avoid repeating fillers. Use precise language to say where and why, with one linking word to add a reason. Limit to 3 sentences.

範例: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the mountains on a hiking trail. Hiking usually gives me over 10,000 steps and is both healthy and very relaxing.

建議: Answer in past tense for 'lately' and be specific about one location. Avoid contradictory phrases (relaxed and uncomfortable) and unclear words (Fletcher). Use linking words to describe sensory details briefly and accurately.

範例: Lately I walked along the seafront promenade near my town and around a nearby beach. It was very relaxing because I could hear the birds and enjoy the sea breeze.

× I walk a lot. I walk about, uh, 9000 steps in a day. Walking is really healthy and then it makes me really comfortable, so I'm keep doing that.

✓ I walk a lot. I walk about 9,000 steps a day. Walking is really healthy and makes me feel comfortable, so I keep doing it.

Multiple issues: incorrect numeric formatting not required by list but grammar issues align with 'Verb + -ing form' and 'Verb in the present participle form' are not directly applicable. Primary errors are subject-verb and verb form. 'so I'm keep doing that' is ungrammatical — the correct form is 'I keep doing it' (present simple for habitual action). Also use 'makes me feel' rather than 'makes me really comfortable' for natural phrasing. Use 'a day' instead of 'in a day' for frequency. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, and use 'keep doing it' to express continuation.

× I didn't often go outside to have a walk when I was a child, but when I'm a child now, like I work a lot, like almost every day with 9000 steps.

✓ I didn't often go outside for walks when I was a child, but now I walk a lot, almost every day, about 9,000 steps.

Present tense issue (6) and sentence structure problem: 'when I'm a child now' incorrectly mixes tenses and person; should be past for childhood and present for current habit. Use 'for walks' instead of 'to have a walk' and 'now I walk' (present simple) for a current habit. Keep numbers formatted as '9,000' and place frequency expressions correctly.

× It's really healthy and then it makes me feel more comfortable and then also relaxed.

✓ It's really healthy and makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed.

Present tense and conjunction overuse: excessive 'then' is unnecessary and interrupts flow. Use present simple 'makes' for general truths. Combine adjectives 'comfortable and relaxed' without repeating conjunctions. Suggestion: avoid redundant connectors.

× I think because when people work in parks, firstly it's safe.

✓ I think it's because when people walk in parks, it's safer.

Third person singular/word choice issue: 'work in parks' is wrong contextually; should be 'walk in parks.' Also comparative 'safer' is appropriate when comparing parks with streets. Use 'it's because' to introduce reason. Suggestion: match the verb to the activity and use comparative when comparing alternatives.

× If you work on the street there is a traffic, it's kind of dangerous, right?

✓ If you walk on the street, there is traffic; it's kind of dangerous, right?

Incorrect preposition and article use: 'work on the street' should be 'walk on the street' for this context. 'a traffic' is incorrect; 'traffic' is uncountable, so no article. Also punctuation: separate clauses for clarity. Suggestion: use uncountable nouns without 'a' and choose correct verbs and prepositions.

× I would like to take a long walk when I'm hiking. Like hiking makes me work a lot, like over 10,000 steps.

✓ I would like to take a long walk when I'm hiking. Hiking makes me walk a lot, usually over 10,000 steps.

Present tense issue and verb choice: 'makes me work' is incorrect; the verb should be 'walk' to match meaning. Use present simple for habitual or general statements: 'Hiking makes me walk a lot.' Remove filler 'like' and clarify frequency with 'usually.' Suggestion: choose verbs that match the activity and use present simple for general facts.

× In a day on average, that's really healthy and it's really relaxing. I like it.

✓ On average, that's really healthy and very relaxing. I like it.

Present tense and word order: 'In a day on average' is awkward; 'On average' is more natural. Use 'very relaxing' instead of 'it's really relaxing' to avoid repetition. Maintain present simple for general statements.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where have you gone for a walk lately?

Present tense issue: 'lately' pairs with present perfect in English to ask about recent experiences. Use present perfect 'have you gone' rather than simple past 'did you go' for relevance to the present. Suggestion: use present perfect with time expressions like 'lately' or 'recently.'

× I walk on the sea walk and around the beach in the mountain.

✓ I walked on the seawalk and around the beach by the mountain.

Tense mismatch (6) and preposition use (11): The question used present perfect, so reply should use present perfect or past simple depending; since 'lately' suggests recent past, use past simple 'I walked' or present perfect 'I have walked.' Also 'sea walk' is better as 'seawalk' or 'seafront walkway' and 'around the beach in the mountain' is awkward—use 'by the mountain' or 'near the mountain.' Suggestion: match tense to question and use appropriate prepositions for location.

× Like everywhere. I walk over 10,000 steps in a day on average.

✓ I walked in many places. I walk over 10,000 steps a day on average.

Tense issue: keep consistency—if describing recent walk, use past 'I walked'; when stating habitual average, use present simple 'I walk over 10,000 steps a day on average.' Also use 'a day' rather than 'in a day.' Suggestion: separate recent actions from habitual facts and use appropriate tenses.

× It makes me feel more relaxed and uncomfortable.

✓ It makes me feel more relaxed, not uncomfortable.

Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs: 'relaxed and uncomfortable' are contradictory; likely the speaker meant 'relaxed and comfortable.' Correct to 'relaxed and comfortable' or negate 'uncomfortable.' Suggestion: check adjective meaning and consistency.

× I can enjoy Fletcher and then I can hear bird sound, it's really nice.

✓ I can enjoy the fresh air and hear the birds; it's really nice.

Incorrect preposition and nouns: 'enjoy Fletcher' is unclear—probably meant 'fresh air' or 'the scenery.' 'Bird sound' should be 'the birds' or 'birdsong.' Use 'the' with 'birds' and plural. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and use articles with countable nouns; 'birdsong' or 'the birds' are natural.