阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Good direct answer with clear reason and frequency. To improve, make the answer more concise, fix small grammar (e.g., “I choose to read” → “I choose reading” or “I read”), and use a linking phrase to connect reason and habit. Add one specific example (a recent title or author) to make it more vivid.

範例: Yes, I love reading, especially romance novels because life can be stressful and they help me relax. For example, last month I read 'Me Before You' by Jojo Moyes, and I try to read at least one book a month.

建議: Clear preference and reasons given. Improve by reducing informal language (e.g., “wanna”), correcting grammar (“so much screen time”), and using linking words for coherence. Provide a concise two- to three-sentence answer and give a concrete example of a situation when you prefer paper books.

範例: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because we already spend a lot of time on devices for work and study. For instance, I like to read a paperback in the park on weekends to enjoy fresh air and avoid blue light.

建議: Good structure with direct answer and an example. Improve by using precise phrasing (e.g., “when you need to read carefully” rather than “where”), correcting tense and article errors, and adding a linking phrase to contrast the two situations. Make the examples more specific (e.g., application deadline, contract).

範例: You need to read carefully when the information is important or legally binding, for example when checking university admission requirements or a job contract. On the other hand, you can be less careful when reading light fiction, such as a comedy novel, because minor details are less consequential.

建議: Answer communicates preference and reasons but is slightly repetitive and has grammar mistakes (“terms or conditions,” “what you're going to consume”). Improve coherence with linking words and avoid trailing sentences. Provide a concrete example of a label or term you recently read and explain the result or consequence of reading carefully.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because important information can be easy to miss. For example, I always read the nutrition label on packaged foods and the terms and conditions before subscribing to a service, which helps me avoid unhealthy ingredients or unexpected fees.

× I do prefer to read on paper rather than reading on screen, because I feel like in one day we use so many screen time for works, for studies.

✓ I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen, because I feel like in a day we use so much screen time for work and study.

Incorrect use of gerund: 'rather than reading on screen' is awkward; use parallel structure 'rather than on a screen' or 'rather than reading on a screen'. 'So many screen time' uses count noun with uncountable 'time' and wrong quantifier; use 'so much screen time'. 'works, for studies' has plural/word choice errors; use uncountable 'work' and 'study'. Also simplify 'in one day' to 'in a day'. Suggestions: use parallel phrasing and correct uncountable nouns; e.g., 'I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen, because I feel like in a day we use so much screen time for work and study.'

× I wanna to connect with nature, to be honest, just to stay away from screen, from blue light.

✓ I want to connect with nature, to be honest, and just stay away from screens and blue light.

Informal contraction 'wanna' is nonstandard in formal speech and 'wanna to' is incorrect because 'want to' + verb is the correct form. Use plural 'screens' and include conjunction 'and' for clarity. Suggestions: use 'want to' and match nouns/plurals: 'stay away from screens and blue light.'

× I always read one book at least per month.

✓ I always read at least one book per month.

Word order: adverbial phrase 'at least' should precede the quantity for natural English. Tense is fine (present simple for habitual action). Suggestion: place 'at least' before 'one book' for clarity.

× I think the time where you need to read carefully is when you read something important.

✓ I think the time when you need to read carefully is when you read something important.

Use 'when' rather than 'where' to refer to time. 'Where' refers to place. Suggestion: replace 'where' with 'when' to correct the temporal reference.

× For example, if you are going to apply for university and you need to read carefully for the university criteria or requirements, which was the most important.

✓ For example, if you are going to apply to a university, you need to read the university criteria or requirements carefully, which are the most important.

Preposition: 'apply for university' should be 'apply to a university' (apply to + institution). Word order: place 'carefully' after the object. Pronoun/agreement: 'which was the most important' is wrong number and tense; 'which are the most important' agrees with plural 'criteria or requirements'. Suggestion: use 'apply to a university' and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct placement of adverbs.

× But you don't have to read carefully if it was not important, for example, like you read a comedy book.

✓ But you don't have to read carefully if it is not important, for example if you are reading a comedy book.

Tense inconsistency: 'you don't have to' (present) should match 'if it is not important' (present) rather than 'if it was not important' (past). Also prefer 'if you are reading a comedy book' or 'if you are reading a comedy novel' for parallel present reference. Suggestion: keep conditional in present when discussing general situations.

× Sometimes people skip reading the information on the food, the nutrients, but for me, I feel like it's really important because you need to know what you're going to consume or even the terms or condition.

✓ Sometimes people skip reading the information on food and nutrients, but for me I feel it's really important because you need to know what you're going to consume or even the terms and conditions.

Articles: 'the food, the nutrients' is unnecessary; use 'food and nutrients' generally. 'Terms or condition' should be plural 'terms and conditions' for the common phrase. Also remove extra comma before 'I feel' and simplify. Suggestion: use general nouns without 'the' and pluralize fixed expressions 'terms and conditions'.