阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and repeated ideas. Also correct grammar (e.g. "time-consuming", "on the internet").

範例: To be honest, I don't enjoy reading much. (topic sentence) I find it time‑consuming and it requires a lot of patience, so I usually prefer watching short videos on the internet because they explain ideas quickly and visually. (supporting details with linking phrase)

建議: Give a clear reason and one specific example. Fix unclear phrasing and avoid contradictions. Use linking words like “because” and “for example.” Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because I feel more focused and connected to the text. For example, when I study from a printed book I can take notes in the margins and remember information better. In contrast, reading on a screen distracts me with notifications.

建議: Make the response direct and use correct grammar. Provide a clear contrast with linking words like “however” or “on the other hand,” and include a short example of each situation.

範例: You should read carefully when studying for exams or learning a difficult topic because understanding every sentence is important. (topic sentence) However, if you are reading for pleasure or to get a general idea, scanning is fine; for instance, I scan news articles to catch headlines quickly.

建議: Start with a concise topic sentence, then explain both situations with clear linking phrases. Avoid repetition and unclear endings. Use specific examples (e.g. studying for an exam vs. preparing for a conversation).

範例: It depends on the purpose: I choose detailed reading for tests because I need to understand concepts deeply. On the other hand, I scan when I only need a quick overview, for example, when preparing for a casual conversation or looking up facts online.

× To be honest, I don't like reading very much because I find it very time taking and a person requires so much patience to read properly.

✓ To be honest, I don't like reading very much because I find it very time-consuming and that it requires a lot of patience to read properly.

The original uses the incorrect compound adjective 'time taking' and an unnatural noun phrase 'a person requires so much patience' which breaks sentence structure. Replace 'time taking' with the adjective 'time-consuming' and rephrase the latter clause to 'it requires a lot of patience' for a clear subject and verb. Suggestion: use clear subjects (it/reading) and standard adjectives.

× Instead of reading, I prefer watching something on Internet, maybe a short video of that thing.

✓ Instead of reading, I prefer watching something on the Internet, maybe a short video about that topic.

The phrase 'on Internet' lacks the definite article; correct form is 'on the Internet'. Also 'of that thing' is vague; 'about that topic' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'the Internet' and prefer 'about' for topics.

× Well, I prefer to read on paper because it is very helpful for me to gain knowledge consciously on screen.

✓ Well, I prefer to read on paper because it helps me gain knowledge more effectively than reading on a screen.

The original is confusing: 'gain knowledge consciously on screen' is unclear and mismatches the contrast. Rephrase to explicitly compare paper and screen: 'helps me gain knowledge more effectively than reading on a screen.' Suggestion: state the comparison clearly and use 'helps me' rather than 'it is very helpful for me to'.

× I feel it is not real in front of me and I don't feel connected with the text and the.

✓ I feel it is not real in front of me and I don't feel connected to the text.

The sentence ends with an incomplete phrase 'and the.' Remove incomplete fragment and use correct preposition 'connected to' rather than 'connected with' for emotional/experiential connection. Suggestion: avoid leaving sentence fragments and choose appropriate prepositions for 'connected'.

× Well, if you are studying something, you should read carefully and dig deep every sentence and underst try to understand every and each word of the paragraph.

✓ Well, if you are studying something, you should read carefully, dig into every sentence, and try to understand each word of the paragraph.

The original mixes pronouns and has typos: 'underst try' is incorrect, 'dig deep every sentence' is ungrammatical. Use parallel verb forms: 'read carefully, dig into every sentence, and try to understand each word.' Use 'each' rather than 'every and each.' Suggestion: keep parallel structure and proofread for typos.

× But if you are reading it just for your fun and simple knowledge, you can read it by scanning and not.

✓ But if you are reading just for fun or for general knowledge, you can scan it instead.

The phrase 'for your fun and simple knowledge' is awkward and 'scan it by scanning and not' is incomplete. Replace with 'for fun or for general knowledge' and use 'you can scan it instead.' Suggestion: use concise expressions and complete contrasts like 'instead' or 'instead of reading carefully.'

× Well it depends.

✓ Well, it depends.

Missing comma after 'Well' affects natural written punctuation. Grammatically, 'it depends' is present tense and appropriate. Suggestion: include punctuation for clarity.

× If I have test or something related to check my knowledge then I prefer detailed reading.

✓ If I have a test or something related to checking my knowledge, then I prefer detailed reading.

Missing article before singular countable noun 'test' — use 'a test.' Also verb phrase 'to check' should be gerund 'checking' after 'related to.' Suggestion: use articles with countable nouns and correct verb forms after prepositions.

× But if I have simple kind of speaking thing then I will prefer scanning because scanning gives you a lot of information in less time but detailed reading do not.

✓ But if I have a simple speaking task then I will prefer scanning because scanning gives you a lot of information in less time, but detailed reading does not.

Replace 'simple kind of speaking thing' with 'a simple speaking task' for clarity. Subject-verb agreement error 'detailed reading do not' should be 'does not' (reading is singular noun). Suggestion: use precise nouns and ensure verb agrees with the subject.

× For detailed reading you need to read.

✓ For detailed reading, you need to read more carefully and more thoroughly.

The original is tautological and uninformative. Clarify what 'read' means in context: 'read more carefully and more thoroughly.' Suggestion: avoid redundancy and explain the specific action required for detailed reading.