阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and grammar errors, and keep to 2–4 concise sentences. Use correct verb forms and age descriptions, and add one specific reason or example to support your opinion.

範例: Yes, I like reading, especially comic books like Spider-Man. As a 10-year-old, I enjoy comics because they have exciting pictures and short stories that are easy to follow.

建議: Start with a direct opinion sentence, then give one clear reason with correct grammar and a linking phrase. Use simpler, accurate vocabulary to explain health concerns and convenience.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes. Also, with paper books I can easily mark pages and re-read parts, while screens can cause eye strain after a long time.

建議: Answer directly without saying the question is difficult. Give a clear topic sentence about when careful reading is needed and support it with a specific example and reason. Correct grammar and avoid repetition.

範例: I need to read carefully when the text has important information, such as school instructions or stories with complex plots. For example, I pay more attention when my mother reads a horror book so I can understand the scary details and follow the story.

建議: Give a direct statement of preference, then explain one clear reason and add a brief example. Use correct grammar for verb forms and compare scanning with detailed reading if helpful.

範例: I prefer scanning because it helps me find information quickly. For instance, when looking for a fact for homework I will scan the text instead of reading every sentence in detail.

× I really like reading book or sometimes I'm reading a comic book like Spiderman because I am only 10 years so I still a young teenager.

✓ I really like reading books, or sometimes I read comic books like Spiderman because I am only 10 years old so I am still a young teenager.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' when speaking generally about reading. 'I'm reading a comic book' is fine, but 'sometimes I read comic books' matches habitual action. Also '10 years' needs the adjective 'old' to indicate age, and 'I still a young teenager' lacks the verb 'am'. Use 'I am still a young teenager.' Suggestions: use plural for general nouns and include 'old' after age and the correct form of 'be' (am).

× So normally a young a young teenager gonna be like a comic book, right?

✓ So normally a young teenager is going to like comic books, right?

'A young a young teenager' repeats 'a' and is redundant; use single 'a young teenager'. 'Gonna' is informal; use 'is going to' for correct future intention. 'Be like a comic book' is incorrect: say 'like comic books' using plural. Suggest using 'is going to like comic books.'

× Yeah, it really easy to answer your question.

✓ Yeah, it's really easy to answer your question.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'is' after the subject 'it'. Use contraction 'it's' or 'it is'. Also place adverb 'really' before adjective 'easy'. Suggest always include the correct form of 'to be' with adjectives.

× I gonna choose prefer I prefer to read on the paper because on the screen it it have a lot of it have a lot of bad thing for you because reading on paper we can put it and read it again, but the screens it make our eyes gonna goes black or some red.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because screens have a lot of disadvantages for you. Reading on paper lets us mark pages and read them again, but screens can strain our eyes and make them tired or red.

Multiple issues: 'gonna' is informal and ungrammatical here; use 'prefer' without 'gonna choose'. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper' (no article). 'It it have' is incorrect; use 'screens have' subject-verb agreement plural. 'A lot of bad thing' should be 'a lot of disadvantages' or 'many harmful effects'. 'We can put it and read it again' is unclear; 'mark pages and read them again' is clearer. 'Make our eyes gonna goes black or some red' mixes forms; use 'can strain our eyes and make them tired or red.' Suggestions: avoid 'gonna', match plural subjects with plural verbs, remove unnecessary articles, and use clear vocabulary.

× Your question is a bit difficult and it really for me, I I don't really know about this information so I can answer you with a really wrong question.

✓ Your question is a bit difficult for me; I don't really know about this topic, so I might give a wrong answer.

'It really for me' misses 'is' and wrong preposition 'about this information' is awkward; use 'about this topic'. 'I can answer you with a really wrong question' is confusing; intended meaning is 'I might give a wrong answer.' Use modal 'might' for possibility. Suggestions: include 'is' after subject, choose appropriate nouns ('topic' not 'information'), and use correct modal verbs for uncertainty.

× I when I read carefully is when I read with my with my mom because my mom are reading horror book.

✓ I read carefully when I read with my mom because my mom reads horror books.

Sentence order and subject-verb agreement errors: remove the extraneous 'I' at the start and place 'read carefully' after subject 'I'. 'My mom are' should be 'my mom reads' (third person singular). 'Horror book' should be plural 'horror books' if general. Suggestions: use correct word order 'I read carefully when...' and ensure the verb agrees with the subject.

× I prefer to scanning be reading because it made a lot of good thing for us, like me, a young teenager.

✓ I prefer scanning rather than detailed reading because it brings many benefits for us, like me, a young teenager.

'Prefer to scanning be reading' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer scanning' or 'prefer to scan'. 'It made a lot of good thing' mixes tense and number; use present simple 'it brings many benefits' and plural 'benefits' or 'good things'. Use 'rather than detailed reading' to contrast scanning and detailed reading. Suggestions: choose correct verb forms with 'prefer', keep tense consistent, and use plural for countable nouns.