阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, use correct singular/plural forms and verb agreement, and add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Use linking word for clarity.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading short stories because they help me practice English. For example, I read one short story each week to learn new words and sentence patterns, which improves my vocabulary and comprehension.

建議: Use clear, accurate vocabulary and correct verb forms. Give a concise topic sentence stating preference, then add one specific reason with a linking word (e.g., because, although). Avoid unclear words like 'textile field' and correct 'lead' to 'read'.

範例: I prefer to read on paper because it helps me concentrate and I can underline important parts easily. Although reading on a screen can be convenient for short articles, paper is more comfortable for longer texts.

建議: Provide a clear two-part answer with correct grammar and specific examples. Use linking words (for example, whereas) and correct verbs (read, instructions). Keep each part concise and avoid filler words.

範例: I need to read carefully at work because I must understand instructions and official documents to avoid mistakes. In contrast, when I read a short story for pleasure, I read more quickly and focus on the plot rather than every detail.

建議: State your main preference first, then explain with specific reasons using linking words (however, so). Fix grammar (needs, helps) and word choice (lovely → thoroughly). Keep sentences natural and under five sentences.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand the text thoroughly. However, I usually scan the article first to find the main points so I can decide which sections need closer attention, which helps me manage my time efficiently.

× Yes, I enjoy reading short story because they help me practice my English.

✓ Yes, I enjoy reading short stories because they help me practice my English.

The noun 'short story' should be plural 'short stories' to agree with plural pronoun 'they'. Use plural when referring to multiple items; change 'short story' to 'short stories'.

× My reading skill are not very strong, so I need regularly to improve my vocabulary and comprehension.

✓ My reading skills are not very strong, so I regularly need to improve my vocabulary and comprehension.

Subject 'reading skills' is plural, so verb 'are' is correct but original word order made 'skill' singular and adverb placement awkward. Correct to plural 'skills' and place adverb 'regularly' before main verb for natural word order.

× I prefer to lead on paper because the textile field help me concentrate and I can easily underline or mark notes regarding on a screen can be convenient, but it is more distracting and less comfortable for long takes.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because the tactile feel helps me concentrate and I can easily underline or mark notes; a screen can be convenient, but it is more distracting and less comfortable for long takes.

Multiple errors: 'lead' should be 'read' (wrong verb), 'textile field' should be 'tactile feel' (word choice), and verb 'help' needs third person singular 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'the tactile feel'. Also sentence was run-on; split and clarify. Ensure verb agrees with its singular subject.

× When I'm at work, I need to read carefully because I might concentrate and make sure I understand instruction or document correctly.

✓ When I'm at work, I need to read carefully because I must concentrate and make sure I understand instructions or documents correctly.

Use stronger modal 'must' or 'need to' instead of 'might' which implies possibility rather than necessity. 'Instruction' and 'document' should be plural 'instructions' and 'documents' to match general reference. Also keep base verbs 'concentrate' and 'make sure' consistent.

× When I'm leading for pressure start as a short story, I often lead more quickly and don't pay as much attention to every detail.

✓ When I'm reading for pleasure, such as a short story, I often read more quickly and don't pay as much attention to every detail.

Incorrect verb 'leading' should be 'reading'; 'pressure start' is incorrect phrase — intended 'pleasure'. Replace both with correct words. Maintain verb form 'read' for present tense.

× I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand everything to lovely, but I often scan first to find the main point and decide which section need closer attention.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand everything thoroughly, but I often scan first to find the main point and decide which sections need closer attention.

'to lovely' is incorrect; use adverb 'thoroughly' to modify 'understand'. 'section' should be plural 'sections' to match 'which' referring to multiple parts, and verb 'need' should be 'need s' but because subject 'sections' is plural, 'need' is correct; however original had singular/plural mismatch which is fixed by using 'sections'.

× Scanning help me lead more quickly and use my time efficiency.

✓ Scanning helps me read more quickly and use my time efficiently.

'help' must be 'helps' to agree with singular gerund subject 'Scanning'. 'lead' should be 'read'. 'time efficiency' is awkward; use adverb 'efficiently' to describe how time is used.