阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is natural and directly addresses the question with a clear preference. To improve, add one brief supporting detail (reason or example) and avoid repeating words. Use a linking word to connect the topic sentence and the detail.

範例: Yes, I love reading, especially fiction and science fiction, because I enjoy exploring imaginative worlds and ideas. For example, I recently read a sci‑fi novel that challenged my views on technology and society.

建議: Your response gives a clear preference but has repetition and lacks a specific reason. Remove redundant phrases and add a concise, specific reason using a linking word (e.g., because, since).

範例: I prefer to read on paper because it feels more authentic and helps me concentrate better than reading on a screen.

建議: The answer is confusing and contradictory. Start with a direct topic sentence that distinguishes the two situations, then use linking words to explain when to skim and when to read carefully with specific examples.

範例: It depends: I skim when I need an overview, such as checking articles or emails, but I read carefully when the material is important or complex, like academic papers or legal documents.

建議: This is a good concise answer that shows process. To improve, expand slightly with a specific reason or example and a linking word to make the relationship clear.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the text; however, I usually start by scanning to get the main idea and decide which parts need closer attention.

× I prefer to read on paper. It feels like it feels authentic and I like it more than reading on screen.

✓ I prefer to read on paper. It feels more authentic, and I like it better than reading on a screen.

This sentence repeats 'it feels' unnecessarily and uses 'more than' with 'like' awkwardly. Classify as sentence structure errors (ID 26). Remove the repeated phrase, use 'more authentic' to compare correctly, and use 'better than reading on a screen' for natural comparative phrasing. Also add 'a' before 'screen' for correctness.

× There's no such thing as read carefully. I think you should skim first, skim the text 1st and then read like read carefully.

✓ There is no such thing as 'reading carefully.' I think you should skim the text first and then read it carefully.

Original contains incorrect noun form after 'such thing as' and awkward repetition. Classify as 'There be issue' (ID 3) for the use of 'There is' and 'Verb + -ing form' (ID 8) for needing the gerund 'reading.' Replace 'read carefully' with 'reading carefully,' reorder 'skim the text first' for natural word order, and add 'it' to refer to the text. Use 'first' instead of '1st' in formal speech.