阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more fluent and concise: state your preference clearly, avoid fillers (umm, uh), and give a specific reason and example. Use one clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Replace repetitions and incorrect phrasing ("criminal book" is unclear) with accurate vocabulary (e.g., crime novels).

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading and I try to read about one book each month. I especially like crime novels because I enjoy solving mysteries and guessing the culprit — for example, I recently read a detective novel with a surprising twist at the end.

建議: Answer directly and give clear reasons with linking words. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Explain exactly what you mean by "pass the sentence" and "record them" — for example, say you find it easier to follow sentences on paper and to make notes or highlight.

範例: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because it’s easier to follow long sentences and concentrate. Also, I can mark important passages and take notes in the margins, which helps me remember what I read.

建議: This answer is unclear and contains irrelevant information and hesitations. Give a clear contrast: say situations that require careful reading (e.g., studying or work) versus casual reading (e.g., light entertainment). Use linking words like "when" and "but" and give specific reasons.

範例: I need to read carefully when I’m studying for an exam or reading work-related documents because I must understand details and avoid mistakes. But when I read for relaxation, such as magazines or light fiction, I usually skim and don’t focus on every sentence.

建議: Provide a coherent answer: state your current preference, explain why, and give an example. Reduce hesitations and grammatical errors (e.g., use 'used to scan' and 'detailed reading'). Use linking words like 'however' or 'now' to show change.

範例: I used to prefer scanning texts quickly to get the main idea, but now I try to do more detailed reading because it helps me understand complex information and learn new vocabulary — for instance, when reading an academic article I read slowly and take notes.

× Yes, I like reading and I try to read a book, umm, a month.

✓ Yes, I like reading and I try to read a book a month.

Unnecessary filler 'umm' removed and extra comma before 'a month' eliminated; sentence uses simple present to describe regular habit, so keep concise. Suggestion: avoid fillers and punctuation that breaks flow.

× I usually re uh, prefer reading uh, the criminal book because I umm, want to, I want to find a crime criminal.

✓ I usually prefer reading crime novels because I want to read about crimes.

Incorrect and redundant words ('re uh', repeated 'want to', 'crime criminal') and wrong noun form 'criminal' used as a noun here. Use 'prefer' without 're' or filler; 'crime' + 'novels' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: use correct noun forms and remove fillers.

× Actually, I prefer read, reading, uh, paper to screen because it's really easy to, uh, it's to pass the, uh, sentence and I can, uh, record them on my.

✓ Actually, I prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen because it is easier to follow sentences and I can make notes on it.

Wrong verb form 'prefer read' should be 'prefer reading'; missing prepositions 'on paper' and 'on a screen'; awkward phrase 'it's to pass the sentence' replaced with 'easier to follow sentences'; 'record them on my' is incomplete — use 'make notes on it'. Suggestion: use gerund after 'prefer', include required prepositions, and complete objects.

× I usually read a book carefully when I really depra depressed.

✓ I usually read a book carefully when I am really depressed.

Misspelled 'depressed' and missing auxiliary verb 'am' for present state. Use present simple or present continuous depending on nuance; here 'am depressed' is correct. Suggestion: check spelling and include appropriate form of 'to be'.

× Yeah, because it is. I need to umm, make my feeling more higher.

✓ Yes, because it helps. I need to lift my mood.

Sentence fragment 'because it is.' is incomplete. 'Make my feeling more higher' is ungrammatical: 'feelings' countable/plural misuse and double comparative 'more higher' is wrong. Use 'lift my mood' or 'improve my feelings'. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and use correct comparative forms.

× But when I just feel.

✓ But when I just want to relax, I don't read carefully.

Original is an incomplete fragment 'But when I just feel.' Lacks object and verb. Provide a complete clause that answers the question contextually. Suggestion: always complete clauses with subject and predicate.

× I, I actually, I used to, umm, scanning.

✓ I actually used to scan.

After 'used to' the base form 'scan' should be used, not the gerund 'scanning'. Also remove fillers and repetitions. Suggestion: use 'used to' + base verb for past habits.

× I usually just scan them when I read the, but I these days I try to the detail reading because it's, uh, it important for my.

✓ I usually just scan when I read, but these days I try to read in detail because it is important for me.

Incorrect word order and missing words: 'scan them when I read the' is awkward; 'try to the detail reading' is incorrect — use 'try to read in detail'; 'it important for my' should be 'it is important for me'. Suggestion: use correct collocations 'read in detail' and include auxiliary 'is' and pronoun 'me'.