阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp, phát âm và tính tự nhiên. Cụ thể: rút gọn câu, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “5 hour” → “five hours”), bỏ các từ lặp và filler như “like”, “to like”, thêm liên từ để mạch lạc (because → so/which helps). Hãy dùng tối đa 3-4 câu, nêu câu chủ đề rồi cung cấp 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ thể loại sách, lợi ích thực tế).

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I usually read for about five hours at the weekend because it helps me gain knowledge and relax. For example, I like non-fiction books about history, which give me new perspectives on the world.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý rõ ràng nhưng ngôn ngữ thiếu chính xác và nhiều filler (uh, like, umm). Cần sửa ngữ pháp ("helps me more convenient" → "is more convenient for me"), dùng linking words để mạch lạc (for example, when, so), và nêu 1-2 lý do cụ thể, tối đa 3 câu. Tránh lặp từ và filler.

範例: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient. For example, I can carry many books on my phone and read while commuting. This helps me use short free moments to read more.

建議: Ý chính tốt nhưng câu lộn xộn, ngữ pháp sai và dùng từ không chính xác ("scan the information" bị lẫn ý). Cần phân biệt rõ hai tình huống: khi cần đọc kỹ (exams, research) và khi chỉ đọc lướt (tin tức không quan trọng). Dùng linking words (especially, when, whereas) và sửa từ sai ("screen screen" → "skim"), tối đa 3 câu.

範例: I read carefully when I am studying for exams or doing research because I need to understand details and avoid mistakes. However, when the material is not important or I am just browsing news, I skim it to save time.

建議: Trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và phần cuối không liên quan ("you kind of get lonely"). Cần tránh filler, đưa lý do cụ thể và ví dụ, sửa ngữ pháp ("scan" vs "scanning" consistent). Nên dùng 2-3 câu: nêu ưu tiên, giải thích lý do và đưa ví dụ. Loại bỏ mệnh đề vô nghĩa.

範例: I prefer scanning because it allows me to cover more material quickly, especially when reading news or searching for facts. For instance, I can skim several articles to find the key points without spending hours on each one.

× Yes I do, I often read like 5 hour in at the weekend because I think reading can help me to like gain my knowledge and also help me to see the world in like larger perspective.

✓ Yes, I do. I often read for about five hours at the weekend because I think reading can help me gain knowledge and also help me see the world from a broader perspective.

The sentence uses incorrect time expression and article/number agreement ('5 hour' should be 'five hours') and incorrect prepositions ('in at the weekend' should be 'at the weekend'). There is an unnecessary infinitive marker 'to like gain' and awkward phrases 'like' used as a filler; remove them. Use 'gain knowledge' (no possessive) and 'from a broader perspective' instead of 'in like larger perspective'. Suggestions: use correct plural for hours, use 'for' with duration, place 'at the weekend', remove filler words, and use 'from a broader perspective' to express viewpoint.

× Well, uh, I'd love to read uh, on screen because it helps me more convenient. Like when I go anywhere I can open it and scroll through it, uh, to kill my time and umm, even sometimes I feel bored and I can open it to read.

✓ Well, I'd prefer to read on a screen because it is more convenient. When I go anywhere I can open it and scroll through it to pass the time, and sometimes when I feel bored I can open it to read.

The original uses an adjective/adverb error: 'helps me more convenient' should be 'is more convenient' or 'helps me more' (adjective vs adverb and verb 'helps'). Also 'go anywhere' is acceptable but 'pass the time' is more natural than 'kill my time'. Remove fillers 'uh' and 'umm'. Suggestions: use 'is more convenient' for states, and choose natural collocations like 'pass the time'.

× Well, uh, I will read carefully, especially when I am in an exam or I need to scan the information, if anything to research like carefully about it.

✓ I read carefully, especially when I am in an exam or when I need to research information in detail.

Tense and phrasing are inconsistent: 'I will read carefully' sounds like future but speaker means general habit so use simple present 'I read carefully'. 'Scan the information' conflicts with 'read carefully'; use 'research information in detail'. Also 'if anything to research like carefully about it' is ungrammatical; restructure to 'when I need to research information in detail'. Remove filler 'uh' and 'like'. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual actions, and use clear verb phrases like 'research information in detail'.

× And when I feel that it's not something important or not something, umm, interested in, I will, uh, screen screen.

✓ And when I feel that it is not important or not interesting to me, I will skim it.

Errors include incorrect adjective forms and word choice: 'not something important' should be 'not important'; 'not something ... interested in' is incorrect because 'interested' is an adjective describing a person, not a thing—use 'not interesting'. Repetition 'screen screen' is unclear; 'skim' or 'scan' is appropriate. Use 'it' to refer to the material. Suggestions: use 'interesting' for things, 'interested' for people, and verbs like 'skim' or 'scan' to indicate quick reading.

× Well, uh, mostly I prefer scanning because, uh, with that method I can read through many books and news, uh, without, like spending much time. Uh, why? I can understand all the like, you kind of get lonely.

✓ Mostly I prefer scanning because with that method I can read through many books and news articles without spending much time. I can get a general understanding quickly.

'Prefer scanning' is acceptable, but 'news' should be 'news articles' or 'the news' for countability. The phrase 'without, like spending much time' misplaces commas and filler 'like'; use 'without spending much time'. The final fragment is ungrammatical and unclear ('I can understand all the like, you kind of get lonely')—replace with a clear meaning such as 'I can get a general understanding quickly'. Suggestions: remove filler words, use correct noun phrases ('news articles'), and complete thoughts with clear clauses.