阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clearer, more concise and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetition, correct grammar (e.g., "I've liked reading since my childhood"), and keep to 2–4 sentences. Add a specific example and a brief reason to support your opinion. Use linking words like "because" or "for example."

範例: Yes, I love reading. I have enjoyed books since childhood because they help me relax and learn new things. For example, I often read comic books in my free time because their illustrations make stories more engaging.

建議: Clarify your preference and give two concise reasons. Avoid incorrect words ("people" should be "paper") and reduce fillers. Use a linking word to connect reasons (e.g., "because" and "also"). Keep sentences grammatical and within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because long screen reading strains my eyes. Also, paper helps me concentrate better since I find screens more distracting.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence describing situations needing careful reading and situations when skimming is enough. Remove hesitations and correct verb forms (e.g., "I have made a mistake"). Provide a specific example and use linking words such as "for example" or "when."

範例: I need to read carefully when the material is important or difficult, for example when studying for exams or signing a contract. In contrast, I skim articles or emails when I'm just looking for basic information or headlines.

建議: Provide a concise, well-structured response: state both preferences clearly, give specific conditions for each, and use linking words like "if" and "because." Avoid overusing complex adjectives like "quintessential" unnecessarily. Keep it to 2–3 polished sentences.

範例: It depends on the material: if the information is important or complex, I read in detail because I need to understand everything. However, if I'm short on time or only need the main idea, I scan headings and highlights to save time.

× Yes, uh, absolutely. I like her reading, uh, since my childhood, uh, that's my hob hobby of reading different kind of books of plethora of authors.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I have liked reading since my childhood; it's my hobby to read different kinds of books by a plethora of authors.

The original uses the pronoun 'her' incorrectly; the speaker means the act of reading. Also 'hob hobby' is repeated and 'different kind' should be plural 'different kinds'. Use present perfect 'have liked' to express a preference from childhood to now. Use 'by a plethora of authors' to show authors as the agents of books.

× Uh, I like comic books a lot because they are having drawings, certain kinds of paintings with it.

✓ I like comic books a lot because they have drawings and illustrations.

Use of 'are having' is incorrect; 'have' is the correct verb for possession. 'Certain kinds of paintings with it' is awkward—replace with 'illustrations'. Keep simple present for general truths.

× So I enjoy reading books in my leisure times as well as.

✓ So I enjoy reading books in my leisure time as well.

Use singular 'leisure time' not 'leisure times'; 'as well as' at the end is unnecessary—use 'as well' or rephrase. Preposition 'in' with 'time' is acceptable but 'in my leisure time' is the common expression.

× Uh, well, to be honest, I like to prefer reading on people rather than on screen uh, because it affect your eyes also as well as uh, uh, additionally, I would like to see it will, for me, it serves as a form of distraction whenever I used to do it on screen, So I uh, neglect screen and prefer paper and I.

✓ To be honest, I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because it affects your eyes. For me, reading on a screen is distracting, so I avoid screens and prefer paper.

'Reading on people' is incorrect pronoun use; 'paper' is intended. 'A screen' needs the article. 'Affect' requires third-person singular 'affects' to agree with subject. 'Used to do it on screen' is wrong tense; use present 'is distracting'. Remove extraneous filler and complete the final clause.

× Umm, uh, well, uh, when I feel like I have uh did some mistake or I have neglect some or I have just skipped some reading, so I put more uh stress on the words and uh re read the sentences where I need to read carefully.

✓ When I feel I have made a mistake, neglected something, or skipped some reading, I put more stress on the words and reread the sentences where I need to read carefully.

'Have did' is incorrect; use present perfect 'have made'. 'Have neglect' should be 'have neglected'. 'Re read' should be 'reread' (one word). Keep present perfect to show past actions with present relevance.

× Also, uh, when I think like, uh, I have not.

✓ Also, when I feel I have not understood something, I read it more carefully.

Original sentence is incomplete and lacks object/completion. Provide a complete clause that fits context: 'have not understood something'. This corrects sentence structure and clarifies meaning.

× Well, it depends on the type of paper or thing I'm reading.

✓ Well, it depends on the type of text or material I'm reading.

'Paper or thing' is informal and vague; replace with 'text or material'. Present continuous 'I'm reading' is appropriate and kept.

× If it's very, uh, quintessential and imperative for me, then I prefer detail reading.

✓ If it's very important and essential for me, then I prefer detailed reading.

'Quintessential and imperative' are awkward here; 'important and essential' are clearer. 'Detail reading' should be the adjective 'detailed reading'.

× If I just to overlook them, then I prefer scanning and reading just headings, uh, highlights, uh, to also save my time.

✓ If I only need to skim, I prefer scanning and reading just the headings and highlights to save time.

'If I just to overlook them' is ungrammatical—use 'If I only need to skim'. 'Just headings, highlights' needs conjunction 'and' and 'to save my time' is more natural as 'to save time'.