阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "a lot of information" and "a lot of knowledge"). Also correct article use and word forms ("informative books", not "the informative books").

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I prefer non-fiction books because they teach me new facts and practical ideas, for example books about history and science. Therefore, I read them often to expand my knowledge.

建議: Be direct and correct grammatical errors. Use one clear reason and support it with a specific example, linking ideas with words like "because" and "for example." Use correct terms ("font size", "screens").

範例: I prefer reading on screens because I can adjust the font size and brightness, which helps reduce eye strain. For example, I often increase the text size on my tablet when I read at night.

建議: Give a clearer structure: state the main idea, then explain with specific examples and linking words (e.g., "however", "for instance"). Fix grammar ("it depends on my mood", "if a story interests me"). Avoid vague phrases like "not my taste" without detail.

範例: It depends on the material and my interest. If a text is about a topic I like, for example technology or travel, I read it carefully to remember details. However, if the topic is boring to me, I skim it quickly.

建議: Answer directly and use natural phrasing: state your preference, give reasons and a concise example. Correct grammatical issues ("I prefer scanning because I don't have much time"). Avoid redundant wording and unclear phrases.

範例: I usually prefer scanning because I often have limited time and need to find key information quickly. For instance, when researching articles for university, I scan headings and first paragraphs to decide which ones to read in detail.

× Yes, of course I like reading.

✓ Yes, of course I like reading.

No grammatical change needed; sentence correctly uses present simple to express a general preference.

× I mostly like to read the informative books because they are more enjoyable as we can gain a lot of information by them and they are a way to gain a lot of knowledge as well.

✓ I mostly like to read informative books because they are enjoyable and we can gain a lot of information and knowledge from them.

Remove the definite article before 'informative books' because the speaker means books in general (Article errors/Incorrect use of adjectives). Replace awkward phrasing 'more enjoyable as' with 'enjoyable and' and change 'by them' to 'from them' (preposition correction). Combine redundant phrases for conciseness.

× So I like the reading most.

✓ So I like reading the most.

Remove the definite article 'the' before 'reading' because 'reading' here is a gerund representing the activity in general; 'the reading' would imply a specific instance. Use superlative 'the most' after the verb phrase.

× Yes, I like to read on a screen because they can given the words in a proper way.

✓ Yes, I like to read on a screen because it can display the words properly.

Pronoun 'they' incorrectly refers to 'a screen' (singular); use 'it'. 'Given' is wrong tense/verb choice; use 'display' and 'properly' (adverb) for correct form.

× The bolt size is quite good that our eyesight can not be affected by them and we can easily see as compared to the paper.

✓ The font size is good, so our eyesight is not affected and we can see more easily compared to paper.

'Bolt size' is incorrect word choice; use 'font size'. Replace awkward clause 'is quite good that our eyesight can not be affected by them' with clearer cause-effect 'is good, so our eyesight is not affected'. Use 'see more easily' for correct adverb placement and comparatives.

× So I prefer the screen reading.

✓ So I prefer reading on a screen.

'Screen reading' is unnatural; use the gerund phrase 'reading on a screen'. Remove the definite article 'the' because speaking generally.

× Yes, it's depend on the mood.

✓ Yes, it depends on my mood.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' requires the third person singular verb 'depends' (Present tense/Third person singular). Also specify 'my mood' for clarity (pronoun correction).

× Whenever I can read a story that's related to my interest, I can read very carefully.

✓ Whenever I read a story that relates to my interests, I read very carefully.

Use simple present for habitual actions ('read' instead of 'can read'). 'That's related to my interest' is better as 'that relates to my interests' for natural phrasing and correct noun number.

× But whenever I feel and the story is not my taste, that's the time I can't read the carefully.

✓ But when I do not enjoy a story, I cannot read it carefully.

Original sentence has extra words and incorrect structure ('whenever I feel and the story is not my taste'). Simplify to 'when I do not enjoy a story' and remove extra article in 'read the carefully'. Use 'cannot read it carefully' for correct object and adverb placement.

× I guess I mostly prefer to be scanning because I have not more time and by when we are going to detail reading and they can consumed our lot of time as well as they can, they can take a lot of attraction from us.

✓ I guess I mostly prefer scanning because I do not have much time, and detailed reading can take a lot of time and attention.

Multiple issues: replace 'prefer to be scanning' with 'prefer scanning' (verb + -ing form). 'I have not more time' should be 'I do not have much time' (negative and quantifier). 'By when we are going to detail reading' is incorrect structure; use 'detailed reading'. 'They can consumed' incorrect verb form; use 'can take' or 'takes'. 'Take a lot of attraction from us' should be 'take a lot of our attention'. Overall simplify and use present simple for habits.