阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence. Avoid awkward phrasing and grammar mistakes (e.g., verb agreement, articles). Use one or two specific examples and a linking word to connect ideas. Keep the response within 3-4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often read novels and magazines because they help me learn new ideas and understand different viewpoints. For example, a novel I read recently changed how I think about friendship, which made me reflect on my own relationships.

建議: Start with a direct preference sentence, then give two clear reasons using linking words (because, moreover). Correct small grammar and article errors (e.g., 'the smell and texture of a book are'). Limit to 3-4 sentences and be specific about examples (e.g., types of books or highlighting methods).

範例: I prefer to read on paper because it is easier on my eyes and I enjoy holding a real book. Moreover, the smell and texture of a book make reading more pleasant. For instance, I like to use a pencil to underline important passages in my novels.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence distinguishing situations that require careful reading and those that do not. Fix grammar (singular/plural, articles) and use linking words (for example, however). Give a concrete example of a situation that needs careful reading (studying, legal documents) and one that does not (skimming news headlines).

範例: I need to read carefully when studying for exams or when reading instructions because details matter. For example, I read textbook chapters slowly to understand concepts. However, I usually skim news headlines or casual social media posts when I just want a quick update.

建議: Give a concise answer then two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words (because, therefore). Avoid vague phrases like 'many styles of life'—be specific (characters, cultures, ideas). Limit to 3-4 sentences and include a short example of a book or passage you enjoyed reading in detail.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand characters and their motivations. For example, when I read a novel closely I can notice how the author develops a character’s personality through dialogue and actions. Therefore, detailed reading makes the story more engaging for me.

× Yes, these days people are more enjoyable in playing with phones, so I think reading skills is more important than ever.

✓ Yes, these days people enjoy playing with phones more, so I think reading skills are more important than ever.

The adjective 'enjoyable' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'enjoy' to describe what people do. Also word order and plural agreement: 'reading skills' should be plural to match context and 'more important than ever' fits better. Suggestion: use 'people enjoy' + gerund and ensure noun pluralization matches context.

× Sometimes I read novels, magazines or even stories.

✓ Sometimes I read novels, magazines, or short stories.

The original sentence is mostly correct but 'stories' can be clearer as 'short stories' to match common usage. No verb change needed. Suggestion: add a comma before 'or' in a series for clarity.

× I think they can make me grow up quickly and even change my whole attitude.

✓ I think they can help me grow quickly and even change my whole attitude.

'Make me grow up' is awkward; 'help me grow' is more natural. 'Grow up' usually means mature over time; if referring to personal development, 'grow' suffices. Suggestion: prefer 'help me grow' or 'help me mature' depending on intended meaning.

× Reading on paper feels more comfortable for my eyes and I also like to hold a real book or magazine.

✓ Reading on paper feels more comfortable for my eyes, and I also like holding a real book or magazine.

Use 'holding' (gerund) rather than 'to hold' for parallel structure after 'like'. Also add a comma before 'and' for readability. Suggestion: maintain parallel verb forms after 'like'.

× It makes me feel happy.

✓ It makes me happy.

While original is grammatical, 'makes me happy' is more natural and concise in English. Suggestion: prefer concise expressions when possible.

× Sometimes the smell and the texture of book is so good, and I also want to make it easier to highlight the key parts, so I choose the book on paper.

✓ Sometimes the smell and texture of a book are so good, and I also want it to be easier to highlight the key parts, so I choose books on paper.

'The smell and texture' is a compound subject requiring the plural verb 'are'. 'Of book' requires an article: 'a book' or 'books'. 'I want to make it easier' is awkward; 'I want it to be easier' is natural. 'Choose the book on paper' should be generalized to 'choose books on paper'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article usage; use natural phrasing for intentions.

× Most of the time I need to do my reading carefully because I think reading is a a long term hobbies and I can know different stories or different styles of the characters in the books so sometimes I can learn from them.

✓ Most of the time I need to read carefully because I think reading is a long-term hobby and I can learn about different stories and the styles of characters in books, so sometimes I can learn from them.

Multiple issues: 'do my reading' is wordy—use 'read'. 'a a' is typo; 'long term' should be hyphenated as 'long-term' when used as an adjective. 'Hobbies' should be singular 'hobby' to match 'a'. 'I can know' is incorrect; use 'I can learn about' or 'I can learn'. Also streamline punctuation with commas. Suggestion: use correct hyphenation, singular/plural consistency, and natural verbs like 'learn'.

× I must reading carefully to know the details.

✓ I must read carefully to know the details.

After modal 'must' the base form 'read' is required, not the '-ing' form. Suggestion: use base verb after modals (must/can/should etc.).

× Detailed reading, absolutely.

✓ Detailed reading, absolutely.

This short answer is acceptable; no grammatical change needed. Keep as is.

× I will choose it because I think the people in the world or even in the book have many styles of life.

✓ I choose it because I think people in the world, and even characters in books, have many different lifestyles.

'The people' is unnecessary; use 'people'. 'In the book' should specify 'characters in books' for clarity. 'Styles of life' is better expressed as 'lifestyles'. Tense: present simple 'I choose' fits general preference. Suggestion: remove unnecessary definite article and use precise nouns.

× I want to know different varieties of them and enjoy the their personality.

✓ I want to learn about their different varieties and enjoy their personalities.

Remove the extra article 'the' before 'their'. 'Personality' should be plural 'personalities' when referring to multiple people or characters. Also 'know' is better as 'learn about'. Suggestion: avoid redundant articles and match noun number to referents.

× So I think in reading detail made me feel more comfortable.

✓ So I think detailed reading makes me feel more comfortable.

The original has incorrect word order and tense: 'in reading detail made me feel' mixes present and past. Use noun phrase 'detailed reading' and present simple 'makes' to express a habitual preference. Suggestion: restructure sentence into subject + verb + complement with consistent tense.