爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be concise, and add one brief detail. Use a topic sentence and a supporting reason or frequency. For example, say ‘I enjoy watching cricket’ and then add when or why you watch it.

範例: I enjoy watching cricket, especially international matches on weekends, because I find the strategy and teamwork exciting.

建議: Correct grammar and sentence structure: start with a clear topic sentence stating the hobby, then give a specific detail (when, with whom, or why). Avoid errors like ‘I was a hobby’ or repeating words.

範例: Yes, I used to play cricket a lot as a child, usually with friends in the neighborhood after school.

建議: Be direct and confident. Say clearly whether the hobby has continued since childhood, then give a concise supporting detail. Remove fillers (‘uh’) and repetitions, and use a linking word if you add detail (e.g., ‘so’, ‘because’).

範例: Yes, I have continued watching cricket since childhood, so I follow major tournaments and still discuss matches with friends.

建議: Answer directly with correct grammar, then provide a brief specific contrast (who in family has different interests and what they are). Use linking words like ‘but’ or ‘however’ to connect ideas.

範例: No, my family members have different interests; for instance, my father likes gardening while my sister enjoys painting, so we usually pursue hobbies separately.

× Yes, I have a hobbies like watching cricket.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby like watching cricket.

The noun 'hobbies' is plural but the article 'a' requires a singular noun. Use 'a hobby' for singular or remove 'a' and say 'I have hobbies' if plural. Suggestion: 'I have a hobby' or 'I have hobbies.'

× Yes, I was a hobby when I was child is playing cricket.

✓ Yes, my hobby when I was a child was playing cricket.

The original sentence uses incorrect structure and verb 'was' with 'hobby' in a confusing way and misses the article 'a' before 'child.' Use past tense 'was' to describe a childhood hobby and correct noun phrase order: 'my hobby when I was a child was playing cricket.' Also include 'a' before 'child.'

× Yes, uh, there is one habit when I was child and uh, when I was child. Is watching cricket the same thing?

✓ Yes, there was one hobby when I was a child: watching cricket.

Use 'there was' for existence in the past, not 'there is' when referring to childhood. 'Habit' is not the best word here; 'hobby' fits the question. Also include 'a' in 'a child' and simplify sentence structure. If asking confirmation, use a separate question: 'Is watching cricket the same thing?'."

× No uh, there is no same hobbies of my family member.

✓ No, there are no hobbies in common with my family members.

Subject-verb agreement and number: use plural 'hobbies' with plural subject 'family members' and 'there are' for plural existence. The phrase 'same hobbies of my family member' is unnatural; use 'hobbies in common with my family members.' Also include commas for natural speech."}]}