爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural and slightly more detailed: give a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain why you enjoy each hobby using linking words. Avoid generic phrase “improve myself” without specifics and keep within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy playing football because it keeps me fit and lets me socialise with friends. I also study English regularly to build my vocabulary and watch YouTube videos to learn new skills and relax in my free time.

建議: Use past tense consistently and provide one specific memory or detail to enrich the answer. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a linked detail (when/where or what you did) to make it more vivid.

範例: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often played football and rode my bicycle around the neighbourhood with my friends. We would spend entire afternoons racing each other and pretending to be professional players.

建議: Correct grammar and be more specific: use present perfect for long-term activities and explain why you still enjoy it with clear reasons. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

範例: Yes, I have played football since I was a child. I still enjoy it because it keeps me healthy and gives me excitement and a chance to meet friends regularly.

建議: Improve grammar and coherence: state the similarity first, then contrast with your own preference using a linking word such as “but” or “however”. Give a brief reason why you differ to add specificity.

範例: We all enjoy watching movies together, but I spend more time studying English than my family because I want to improve my career prospects and language skills.

× Yes, I have. I like playing football and riding my bicycle with my friends. Yeah, well, we had a lot of fun together.

✓ Yes, I did. I liked playing football and riding my bicycle with my friends. Yeah, well, we had a lot of fun together.

The question 'Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?' is in the past simple. The student used 'I have' (present perfect) which is the wrong tense and auxiliary for a finished past time. Change to 'I did' for the auxiliary and 'liked' for the past simple to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past simple (did / liked) when referring to habits in a finished period (childhood).

× Yes, I have play football since I was high. I still enjoy it because it's keep me healthy and exciting.

✓ Yes, I have played football since I was in high school. I still enjoy it because it keeps me healthy and excited.

Multiple issues: 1) 'I have play' mixes present perfect auxiliary with base form; use past participle 'played' (present perfect). 2) 'since I was high' is incorrect collocation — use 'since I was in high school' or 'since I was a child'. 3) 'it's keep me' is wrong: after 'it' the verb needs third-person singular present 'keeps'. 4) 'exciting' describes something that causes excitement; to say the activity makes the speaker feel excitement use 'excited'. Suggestions: use correct past participle with have/has, use appropriate time expression, and match subject-verb agreement and adjective use ('keeps', 'excited').

× Yes, we are like watching movie, but however, I spend more time studying English than the other members of my family.

✓ Yes, we like watching movies, but I spend more time studying English than the other members of my family.

Problems: 1) 'we are like watching movie' incorrectly uses 'are like' instead of 'like' and 'movie' should be plural 'movies' for general habits. 2) Using both 'but' and 'however' together is redundant; choose one. 3) Removed unnecessary comma and kept comparative phrase. Suggestions: use 'like' for preferences, pluralize countable nouns for general statements, and avoid redundant conjunctions ('but' or 'however', not both).