聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition (e.g. "connected together") and correct grammar (possessive/plural: "each other's thoughts").

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay close. For example, when we talk regularly I learn about their opinions and feel more connected to their lives.

建議: Give a clearer topic sentence and organize details with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "some gossip" without context and fix tense/agreement errors. Provide one specific example and link it to an outcome.

範例: We usually talk about daily life and personal problems. For instance, in my freshman year I told a friend about my transfer exam, and they supported me with study tips and encouragement.

建議: Start with a direct preference sentence, then explain reasons clearly using correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases and repetitions, and use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it's more private and we can have deeper conversations. Because I trust that friend, I feel comfortable sharing personal thoughts and experiences.

建議: Good clear preference and reasons. Improve grammar, word choice and fluency: use plural/singular consistently and streamline the second sentence. Use linking words like 'because' and 'whereas'.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see facial expressions and body language. Whereas on social media it's harder to interpret tone, so messages can be misunderstood.

建議: Good content and clear explanation. Make sentences more concise and natural, correct singular/plural forms and use linking words to show contrast (although/however). Add a brief example if possible.

範例: I don't usually argue with friends; instead, we discuss our different views calmly. For example, if we disagree about plans, we listen to each other and explain our reasons until we reach a solution.

× Yes, I'd like to chat with my friends and I think it's a way that we can be connected together and we can learn about how each other's thought.

✓ Yes, I'd like to chat with my friends, and I think it's a way for us to stay connected and to learn about each other's thoughts.

Errors: incorrect use of passive/phrase 'be connected together' and incorrect noun form 'thought'. Type 8 applies because 'connected' here should be part of an active phrase using 'stay' or 'become', and the gerund structure 'learn about' should take a plural noun 'thoughts'. Suggestion: use 'stay connected' for natural phrasing and pluralize 'thought' to 'thoughts' when referring to multiple people's ideas.

× We usually chat about some gossip and of course the question that we have met, For example, when I was in my freshman year, I tell him that I'm going to have my transfer exam and they give me some support.

✓ We usually chat about gossip and, of course, questions we have encountered. For example, when I was a freshman, I told him that I was going to take my transfer exam and they gave me some support.

Errors: tense inconsistency and incorrect expressions. Use past tense 'told' and 'gave' for the event in the past; 'was in my freshman year' is better as 'was a freshman'; 'have met' is incorrect here—use 'have encountered' or 'encountered'; 'going to have my transfer exam' is unnatural—use 'going to take my transfer exam'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent when describing past events and use natural collocations like 'told', 'gave', 'take an exam'.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I will choose the friend that is.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I will choose that friend.

Error: incomplete and awkward clause 'the friend that is.' This is a sentence structure problem (type 26). Suggestion: remove the dangling clause and use 'that friend' or 'the friend who is...' plus a complete relative clause if more detail is needed.

× I think I'm connected with her that much better, so I was taught her some more deep deeply about me.

✓ I think I connect with her much better, so I told her more deeply about myself.

Errors: incorrect adverb/adjective choice and wrong verb 'was taught' used instead of 'told'. 'Connected with her that much better' is awkward—use 'connect with her much better'. 'Was taught her some more deep deeply about me' mixes passive voice and incorrect adverb placement; use 'told her more deeply about myself'. This fits type 13 (adjectives/adverbs) and type 21 (passive misuse). Suggestion: use active voice and correct adverb 'deeply' placed after the verb.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see others expression and the body languages.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see others' expressions and body language.

Errors: possessive missing on 'others' and pluralization/word choice 'body languages' is incorrect. This is type 11. Suggestion: use the possessive form 'others'' and uncountable 'body language' or 'body languages' is rarely used; 'body language' is correct.

× If I communicate through the social medias I need to figure out what does he or she mean when they are talking about.

✓ If I communicate through social media, I need to figure out what he or she means when they are talking about something.

Errors: subject-auxiliary inversion in embedded question and incorrect plural/singular agreement with pronouns. This is type 12. In indirect questions do not use question word order—use 'what he or she means'. Also 'social medias' should be 'social media'. Suggestion: remove inversion and match pronouns; consider using 'they' as singular modern neutral pronoun: 'what they mean'.

× To be honest, I don't argue with my friends, but we will communicate if we have different thoughts and different ideas.

✓ To be honest, I don't argue with my friends, but we do communicate if we have different thoughts or ideas.

Errors: awkward use of future 'will' for habitual or general situations; use present simple 'do communicate'. This fits type 4 (modal/auxiliary usage) and type 6 (present tense issue). Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and combine 'thoughts or ideas' to avoid repetition.

× We will listen to others and know why they think, why their thought is different from mine.

✓ We listen to others and try to understand why they think differently from me.

Errors: tense and pronoun phrasing—'will listen' is unnecessary future for general habit (use present simple). 'Why their thought is different from mine' is wordy; use 'think differently from me'. This is type 12 and type 6. Suggestion: use concise phrasing and present simple for habitual actions.