聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm, uh), correct verb forms and possessives, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Aim for 2–3 sentences and one clear example.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends both by text and in person. Talking with them lifts my mood and helps me keep up with their lives; for example, we often share funny stories and plan weekend activities together.

建議: Give a structured answer: a clear topic sentence listing main topics, then one or two specific examples with linking words. Correct grammar (singular/plural, article use) and avoid vague hyperbole like "anything on Earth." Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: We talk about a wide range of topics. For instance, sometimes we gossip about classmates, and other times we discuss world events like the World Cup or environmental issues. Because we trust each other, I feel comfortable talking about both light-hearted and serious subjects.

建議: Start with a direct statement of preference, then explain reasons with linking words. Remove fillers and unclear phrases (e.g., "big group with popular"). Be specific about what makes group or one-on-one chats preferable.

範例: It depends on the situation: I prefer chatting in a small group of close friends because I feel comfortable and can join the conversation easily. However, for serious or private topics I usually choose one-on-one chats so I can speak more openly.

建議: Good clear structure and reasons. Improve by tightening sentences, correcting tense/word choice, and adding a brief specific example of when you prefer each mode to make it more vivid.

範例: Because I'm introverted, I prefer texting people I don't know well to avoid awkwardness. But with close friends or my friend group I prefer face-to-face meetings since they feel more genuine; for example, we usually meet for coffee to catch up in person.

建議: Clarify and correct grammar (phrases like "I have major enough" are unclear). Give a concise topic sentence then a specific supporting detail about how you resolve conflicts, using linking words. Avoid unnecessary repetition.

範例: I used to argue with friends when I was younger, but not much anymore. Now we usually talk things through calmly and forgive each other quickly; for example, if we disagree about plans we discuss options and compromise.

× chatting and having conversations with my friends soothing my moods and makes me uh stay up to date with their my friends lives.

✓ Chatting and having conversations with my friends soothes my mood and keeps me up to date with their lives.

Subject 'Chatting and having conversations with my friends' is a singular noun phrase; the verb should be singular third-person 'soothes' not 'soothing'. Also 'makes me stay up to date with their my friends lives' is ungrammatical: use 'keeps me up to date with their lives'. Remove redundant 'my friends' and use 'mood' (singular) to match the speaker's general feeling. Suggestion: Use subject-verb agreement for noun phrases acting as a single unit and simplify possessive phrases (their lives).

× Umm, we share a lot of funny stories and plant activities together so I really live my mood.

✓ Umm, we share a lot of funny stories and plan activities together so I really love my mood.

The original has 'plant activities' (wrong word) and 'live my mood' (incorrect verb). 'Plan activities' is intended. 'Love my mood' is odd but likely meant 'lift my mood' or 'enjoy myself'. Correct to 'lift my mood' if meaning improve mood. Here 'love my mood' still unnatural; recommended correction: 'lift my mood'. Suggestion: Use correct lexical items ('plan' not 'plant') and common collocations ('lift my mood').

× Sometimes we gossips about friends at school, sometimes we talk about uh, worlds events such as World Cup and umm, uh, environment issues in general.

✓ Sometimes we gossip about friends at school; sometimes we talk about world events such as the World Cup and environmental issues in general.

Verb 'gossips' should be 'gossip' to agree with plural subject 'we' (subject-verb agreement/third person error). 'worlds events' should be 'world events'; 'World Cup' needs the definite article 'the World Cup' in this context. 'environment issues' should be 'environmental issues' (use adjective form). Suggestion: Ensure verb form matches subject and use correct adjective forms and articles for proper nouns.

× I mean, if it was my friends, I feel like I can talk about anything on Earth with.

✓ I mean, if they were my friends, I feel like I could talk about anything on Earth with them.

Conditional clause requires correct pronouns and verb forms: 'if it was my friends' is ungrammatical. Use 'if they were my friends' (plural pronoun and subjunctive/conditional 'were'). Also the main clause should use 'could' for conditional and end with object pronoun 'with them'. Suggestion: Match pronoun number and use correct conditional verb forms and object pronouns.

× It depends on how close we are actually.

✓ It actually depends on how close we are.

Word order is awkward. 'Actually' is better placed before the verb phrase 'depends' or after subject for natural flow. Rearranging improves clarity. Suggestion: Place adverbs where they naturally modify the verb or sentence meaning.

× Umm, chatting with a group of people is fine, but I would prefer it's uh.

✓ Umm, chatting with a group of people is fine, but I would prefer it if the group were...

'I would prefer it's uh' is ungrammatical. Use 'I would prefer it if' plus clause. For hypothetical preference about a group, use subjunctive 'were' or simple past. The sentence is incomplete; supply structure 'the group were my close friends' to complete meaning. Suggestion: Use 'I would prefer it if' + clause to express preference about specific conditions.

× That group is my uh, safe zone, my close uh friends, my familiar circle, rather than a big group with popular.

✓ That group is my safe zone: my close friends, my familiar circle, rather than a large group of popular people.

'close friends' should be plural noun, not 'close friends' preceded by commas incorrectly. 'a big group with popular' is ungrammatical; use 'a large group of popular people' or 'a large, popular group'. Also punctuation/pauses removed for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct noun phrases ('a large group of popular people') and consistent list punctuation.

× I am an introvert, so if that person is not close to me, I would prefer to text and send them messages.

✓ I am an introvert, so if a person is not close to me, I prefer to text and send them messages.

Mixing 'is' with 'would prefer' creates tense/mood mismatch. For general habitual preference use present simple 'prefer'. Also 'that person' is vague; 'a person' suits general statement. 'Text and send them messages' is redundant; 'text them' or 'send them messages' suffices. Suggestion: Use present simple for general habits and avoid redundancy.

× When I was in middle school and elementary school, yes, but now I feel like I have major enough to avoid conflicts with my friends.

✓ When I was in middle school and elementary school, yes, but now I feel like I have matured enough to avoid conflicts with my friends.

'I have major enough' is incorrect word choice. Likely intended 'matured enough'. Use present perfect 'have matured' to describe change up to now. 'Matured enough' fits meaning. Suggestion: Choose correct verb ('mature') and tense to describe personal development.

× We sort things out together pretty well and we know to we learn to forgive and forget about it.

✓ We sort things out together pretty well, and we have learned to forgive and forget about it.

'we know to we learn to forgive' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use 'we have learned' to indicate experience and ability. 'Forgive and forget about it' is idiomatic; combine with appropriate tense. Suggestion: Use concise verb phrases and correct auxiliary verbs for past learning or present ability.