聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid irrelevant words (e.g., “pasta”), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Use correct verb forms and linking words (because, so, when). Provide one or two specific reasons and a short example.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me stay connected and practice my English. For example, we often exchange short updates about our day or plan weekend activities, which keeps our friendship strong. When I’m busy, I prefer quick text messages rather than long calls.

建議: Be more concise and specific. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific topics and a brief example. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct grammar (tenses, articles). Avoid repetition like multiple 'moreover's.

範例: I usually talk about our daily routines and any important life updates because I want to keep in touch and offer support when needed. For example, we share news about work, health, or plans for the weekend, and sometimes we coordinate events or trips.

建議: Answer directly and give clear reasons with examples. Use correct prepositions and articles, and avoid awkward phrases. Structure: topic sentence (preference), reason(s) and a brief example showing contrast between group chat and one-to-one calls.

範例: It depends on the situation. For organizing events or coordinating with many people, I prefer group chats because they make planning easier. However, for personal or important conversations I choose a one-to-one call so we can talk privately and in detail.

建議: Keep the answer concise and correct grammar (pronouns, articles, verb forms). State preference, give two clear reasons and a short example. Use linking words (because, so, therefore) for coherence.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read body language and facial expressions, which helps me understand the speaker better. For instance, in meetings I often notice a colleague’s tone and gestures, which clarifies their true opinion.

建議: Provide a direct short answer, then explain reasons with specific examples. Correct grammar (plurals, articles, word choice). Avoid unclear phrases like “centre of attraction” or redundant wording. Offer how you resolve arguments to show maturity.

範例: Yes, occasionally we argue because people have different perspectives and sometimes speak without thinking. For example, a small misunderstanding about plans once turned into a heated discussion, but we resolved it by calmly talking it through and apologizing if needed.

× Definitely this is my favorite pasta.

✓ Definitely this is my favorite past-time.

The student used 'pasta' (a food) incorrectly; context implies 'pastime' (hobby). This is a vocabulary choice error related to pronoun/reference clarity; replace with the correct noun 'pastime' to match intended meaning.

× Moreover, it also establish my connection with them and also help me to master on the language that I can use in articulate way when I do chatting with them and it also helped me to give some life update on them.

✓ Moreover, it also establishes my connection with them and helps me to master the language so I can use it articulately when chatting with them, and it also helps me give them life updates.

Multiple subject-verb agreement and verb form errors: 'it' requires third-person singular verbs 'establishes' and 'helps'. 'Master on' is incorrect; use 'master the language'. 'Use in articulate way' should be 'use it articulately'. Maintain parallel verb forms and consistent tense (present simple) for habitual actions.

× Moreover, when I have haven't time to talk for long on the call, I love to go approach them.

✓ Moreover, when I don't have time to talk for long on the phone, I like to message them or approach them briefly.

The phrase 'have haven't time' is ungrammatical; use 'don't have time'. 'On the call' is better as 'on the phone'. 'Love to go approach them' is awkward; use 'like to message them' or 'approach them briefly'. Maintain present simple for habitual preferences.

× I usually chat about daily routines and life updates so that I get the chance to know them more closely and should be there if I needed the most at that time.

✓ I usually chat about daily routines and life updates so that I get the chance to know them better and can be there if they need me most.

Tense and modal misuse: 'should be there if I needed' mixes modal and past tense incorrectly. Use 'can be there if they need me most' to express present/future readiness. 'Know them more closely' is better as 'know them better'.

× And moreover, it makes me ensure that they are healthy and fit, moreover leading the quality life.

✓ Also, it helps me ensure that they are healthy and fit and are leading a good quality of life.

Awkward phrasing and pronoun use: 'it makes me ensure' is unnatural; use 'helps me ensure'. 'Leading the quality life' should be 'leading a good quality of life'. Keep consistent subject 'they' with corresponding verbs.

× And uh, for the second reason, I chat about if any planning is there.

✓ Also, for another reason, I chat about any plans they may have.

Word order and structure: 'chat about if any planning is there' is ungrammatical. Use 'chat about any plans they may have' to convey the intended meaning with correct word order and modal 'may' for possibility.

× It depends upon the purpose.

✓ It depends on the purpose.

Both 'depend on' and 'depend upon' are possible, but 'depend on' is more natural in conversational English. Use 'depends on' for idiomatic phrasing.

× If I have to organize a party or going for any conference and so many members are there who are managing it, I love to part of a group chat.

✓ If I have to organize a party or go to a conference and many people are managing it, I like to be part of a group chat.

Mixed verb forms: 'have to organize ... or going' mixes infinitive with -ing; use parallel infinitives 'organize' and 'go'. 'So many members are there who are managing it' is awkward; use 'many people are managing it'. 'I love to part of' needs 'be': 'I like to be part of'.

× Otherwise I always love to make a direct call or to individual 1 and I really don't chat with one friend frequently.

✓ Otherwise, I prefer to make a direct call or call an individual, and I don't chat with the same friend frequently.

Awkward phrasing: 'to individual 1' likely means 'an individual'. Use 'call an individual' or 'call one person'. Clarify 'one friend' to 'the same friend' to express frequency.

× Face to face communication is more appropriate for me because I really want to understand the person from his or her body language.

✓ Face-to-face communication is more appropriate for me because I really want to understand the person from their body language.

Hyphenate 'face-to-face' and use singular 'their' as a gender-neutral pronoun instead of 'his or her' for smoother, natural speech. 'From their body language' is idiomatic.

× Moreover, the gesture they are doing when I talk to help them in by being in front of them then I able to analyze the tone as well as facial expression.

✓ Also, their gestures when I talk to them help me; by being in front of them I am able to analyze their tone and facial expressions.

Run-on and incorrect word order: reorganize into two clauses. Use 'their gestures' and 'help me' and 'I am able to analyze their tone and facial expressions' for grammatical clarity and parallel nouns.

× It happens many times because everybody has different perspective.

✓ It happens often because everybody has a different perspective.

Use adverb 'often' rather than 'many times' for natural speech. Include the indefinite article 'a' before 'different perspective' to be grammatically correct.

× Moreover, we always love to be centre of attraction as well as to break the ice.

✓ Also, we often like to be the center of attention and to break the ice.

Use 'the center of attention' (idiomatic) rather than 'centre of attraction'. 'We always love' is too absolute; 'often like' fits better. Maintain consistent noun phrases.

× Sometimes we speak without thinking, so that turned into argument.

✓ Sometimes we speak without thinking, so that turns into an argument.

Tense consistency: 'turned' (past) should be 'turns' (present simple) to match 'Sometimes we speak' which is habitual. Add article 'an' before 'argument'.

× We all have a kind of same kind of nature to keeping.

✓ We all have a similar nature and tendency to do that.

Redundant and ungrammatical phrase 'a kind of same kind of nature to keeping'. Use 'a similar nature and tendency to do that' to convey intended meaning with correct structure and natural collocations.