聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce hesitations and grammar errors, make a clear topic sentence, and add one specific detail. Use correct verb forms and avoid filler words.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I speak with them almost every day because it helps me feel connected and supported. For example, last week we video-called each night while studying, which made the long evenings more enjoyable.

建議: Be more specific and correct repetition/word choice; use linking words to organize ideas and give one concrete example of a topic.

範例: We usually talk about how life is going and what we have been doing. For instance, we recently discussed a popular TikTok dance trend and shared tips on how to learn it, which kept the conversation fun and lively.

建議: Make one clear preference sentence, reduce fillers, fix grammar and contrast with a brief reason using a linking word (e.g., but, while).

範例: I prefer chatting with a single friend because it feels more comfortable and private. While group chats are more fun, one-on-one conversations allow deeper, more honest discussions.

建議: Clarify and correct sentences, avoid vagueness and filler words, and give a specific reason or example for the preference.

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel more relaxed and can reply when it's convenient. For example, I often message a close friend during study breaks, which lets us keep in touch without interrupting our schedules.

建議: Use correct expressions (e.g., 'I don't argue'), reduce hesitation, and give a concise example of how you resolve disagreements using linking words (e.g., therefore, so).

範例: I don't argue with friends very often because I'm not keen on conflict. Instead, I listen carefully and try to talk calmly; for example, when we disagree about plans, I suggest a compromise so everyone feels comfortable.

× Yes definitely, I usually chatting with my friend every single day and I feel it quite uh connected and supported.

✓ Yes, definitely. I usually chat with my friend every single day and I feel quite connected and supported.

The verb 'chatting' was incorrectly used after the adverb 'usually'. With 'usually' we need the base form for habitual actions: 'I usually chat'. Also 'it quite uh connected and supported' lacked the verb 'feel' correctly followed by adjectives; reordering to 'I feel quite connected and supported' is correct. Suggestion: Use base verb after adverbs of frequency (I usually do), and place adjectives after 'feel'.

× Also umm chatting with friend makes like my life become more enjoyable.

✓ Also, chatting with friends makes my life more enjoyable.

'Makes like my life become' is informal and ungrammatical: 'like' is unnecessary and 'become' is redundant. Use plural 'friends' to match general meaning. Correct structure: 'makes my life more enjoyable.' Suggestion: Remove filler words like 'like' and use direct verb structures: 'makes X more Y.'

× I usually chat with my friend about how life is going and what we have been up to.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about how life is going and what we have been up to.

If referring to conversations with multiple friends, use plural 'friends'. If it is one friend, original could stand, but later context mentions multiple topics and trends suggesting plural. Ensure pronoun/ noun number matches intended meaning. Suggestion: Choose singular or plural consistently: 'my friend' vs 'my friends'.

× We also talk about about some rumor in school and the last Tiktok trends because those topics are so entertaining and keep us today.

✓ We also talk about some rumors at school and the latest TikTok trends because those topics are entertaining and keep us up to date.

'About about' is repeated. 'Some rumor' should be plural 'rumors' or 'a rumor'; preposition 'in school' is better as 'at school'. 'The last TikTok trends' -> 'the latest TikTok trends'. 'Keep us today' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'keep us up to date'. Suggestion: Avoid word repetition, use correct prepositions, and common phrases like 'keep us up to date.'

× I will say that I'll be free to chat with, uh, only one friend because, uh, I think that chatting with only one friend will make you feel more comfortable and more reliable with others with also, uh, while chatting with group of people is more funny.

✓ I'd say that I'd prefer to chat with only one friend because chatting one-on-one makes you feel more comfortable and more connected, while chatting in a group is more fun.

Overuse and incorrect choice of modals 'will' and 'will be free to' are inappropriate here. 'I'd say' (I would) is more natural for expressing preference. 'More reliable with others' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'more connected' or 'closer'. 'More funny' should be 'more fun'. Also streamline redundant fillers. Suggestion: Use 'I'd prefer' or 'I'd say' for preferences and use correct adjectives ('fun' not 'funny') and collocations ('one-on-one', 'more connected').

× Well, I prefer to umm, communicate via social media because, umm, I think that I feel more comfortable and relaxed while we're using the, umm, social media console.

✓ Well, I prefer to communicate via social media because I feel more comfortable and relaxed when I'm using social media.

'We're using the ... social media console' is awkward and inconsistent with singular 'I prefer'. Use 'I' consistently. 'Console' is the wrong word; say 'social media' or 'social media platforms'. Replace 'while we're using' with 'when I'm using' to match subject. Suggestion: Keep subject consistent and choose correct vocabulary: 'social media platforms' or simply 'social media.'

× Uh, if you'll be able to myself and a one to one conversations.

✓ Also, I can have one-to-one conversations more easily.

Original fragment is ungrammatical: 'if you'll be able to myself and a one to one conversations' has wrong pronouns and modal usage. Rephrase to a clear statement about ability to have one-to-one conversations. Suggestion: Use concise, grammatical structures: 'I can have one-to-one conversations' or 'It's easier to have one-to-one conversations.'

× I don't agree with friends very often, uh, because I'm not the person who keen on conflict and uh and I prefer to listening and keeping friendly.

✓ I don't argue with friends very often because I'm not the kind of person who is keen on conflict, and I prefer to listen and stay friendly.

'I don't agree with friends' is incorrect collocation; 'argue with friends' fits the question. 'Who keen on' lacks the verb 'is' for third person singular: 'who is keen'. 'Prefer to listening' should be 'prefer to listen' (base form after 'prefer'). 'Keeping friendly' should be 'stay friendly.' Suggestion: Ensure correct verb forms for third person ('is') and use infinitive after 'prefer'.

× So I usually try to talk calmly and resolve some misunderstanding where you didn't start an agreement between each other.

✓ So I usually try to talk calmly and resolve misunderstandings when there is a disagreement between us.

Phrase 'resolve some misunderstanding where you didn't start an agreement between each other' is unclear and ungrammatical. Use plural 'misunderstandings' and standard phrase 'when there is a disagreement between us.' Suggestion: Use clear conjunctions and common collocations: 'resolve misunderstandings' and 'disagreement between us.'