聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct basic grammatical errors (e.g., plural/singular, articles) and use clearer phrasing.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay connected. For example, we often share what happened during our day and discuss different viewpoints, which strengthens our friendship.

建議: Answer directly and fix unclear phrases. Use a topic sentence, then give two specific examples with linking words. Avoid vague words and repetition.

範例: It depends on the friend. If it is a classmate, we usually talk about coursework and upcoming assignments; however, with friends outside class, we chat about hobbies or recent news.

建議: Good clear preference. Improve by using correct plural forms and adding a short supporting detail with a linking word. Keep it to one or two sentences.

範例: I prefer chatting in a group because it allows me to hear many perspectives. For instance, when we discuss a topic, different opinions often help me think more deeply.

建議: Clear reason given but correct grammar and be more concise. Use linking words and give one concrete example of body language or comfort to be specific.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read body language and facial expressions. For example, seeing someone smile or nod makes me feel more comfortable expressing my ideas.

建議: Short direct answer is fine; add a brief explanation and use a linking word to show consequence or result. Provide a brief example of a common disagreement to be specific.

範例: Yes, we sometimes argue because we have different opinions. For example, we often disagree about which movie to watch, but we usually resolve it by taking turns choosing.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friends because I think communicating, communicating, communicating with the other friend is something important.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends because I think communicating with friends is important.

Repetition and awkward phrasing: 'communicating, communicating, communicating' is unnecessary. 'the other friend' is incorrect; use plural 'friends' for general meaning. Also 'is something important' is unnatural; use 'is important'. Use gerund 'communicating' correctly without repetition and match noun number.

× You have to say what happened in your day what's or bring an interesting topic and discuss with them to see different perspective and different forms you can so you can understand different and have more strong relationship between you 2.

✓ You have to say what happened in your day or bring an interesting topic and discuss it with them to see different perspectives and understand them so you can have a stronger relationship between the two of you.

Pronoun and structure errors: 'what's' is wrong here; use 'what happened in your day'. 'Discuss with them' needs an object: 'discuss it with them'. 'Different perspective' should be plural 'different perspectives'. 'Different forms you can' is unclear; replaced with 'understand them'. 'more strong relationship between you 2' should be 'a stronger relationship between the two of you' and use words rather than numeral '2'.

× It depends on the friend and who is hitting me.

✓ It depends on the friend and who is contacting me.

The verb 'hitting' is incorrect in this context; use 'contacting' or 'messaging' to refer to someone initiating a chat. Maintain appropriate verb choice for communication context.

× If it is a person from my class, of course our chat will be about studying will be about what we are having in class today, and if it is someone who is out of the class, I can say any interesting topic or topic we both understand and.

✓ If it is someone from my class, of course our chat will be about studying or what we had in class today; if it is someone outside the class, we can talk about any interesting topic that we both understand.

Run-on and awkward repetition: remove duplicate 'will be about' and correct tense 'are having in class today' to 'had in class today' or 'are having' depending on context; here 'had' fits past reference. End fragment 'and.' incomplete; complete thought with 'that we both understand'. Also use 'someone outside the class' rather than 'out of the class'.

× I do prefer to chat with a group of people because I would love to know a lot of perspective and see the other's opinion about that subject we are discussing.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I would love to know a lot of perspectives and see others' opinions about the subject we are discussing.

Agreement and possessive: 'I do prefer' is acceptable but 'I prefer' is more natural. 'a lot of perspective' should be plural 'a lot of perspectives'. 'the other's opinion' should be plural possessive 'others' opinions' to refer to multiple people.

× I do prefer to communicate face to face because I can't see the body language of the person I'm talking to and also it's it is easier and make me more comfortable to talk with that person because I know him, I know how he reacts to my opinions and exactly.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see the body language of the person I'm talking to, and it's easier and makes me more comfortable to talk with that person because I know them and know how they react to my opinions.

Logical/pronoun errors: Student said 'because I can't see' but intended advantage of face-to-face is that you can see body language; corrected to 'I can see'. 'it's it is' duplicate; remove redundancy. 'make me' should be 'makes me' to agree with subject 'it'. Use gender-neutral 'them'/'they' instead of 'him'/'he' unless gender specified. Remove trailing 'and exactly' as incomplete.

× Yes, I do argue with my friends because sometimes we don't have the same opinion on the same topic.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we do not always share the same opinion on a topic.

Word order and emphasis: 'I do argue' is grammatical but 'I sometimes argue' is more natural. 'we don't have the same opinion on the same topic' is slightly repetitive; use 'we do not always share the same opinion on a topic' for clarity.