聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid awkward phrasing (e.g. "I'm intimate for my nature"), reduce hesitation, and limit to 2–3 sentences. Use linking words only if adding support. Give a short reason and an example to make it specific.

範例: Yes, I do like chatting with friends, though I also value quiet time. For example, after a long day at school I often prefer to unwind alone rather than join long group conversations.

建議: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and specific details. Avoid filler words and grammar mistakes ("I'm obsessed with them"). Use linking words like "mainly" or "for example" to structure the response and give one or two concrete examples.

範例: Mainly we talk about school or everyday topics. For example, we often discuss homework and new films — I'm especially interested in movies, so I like recommending recent releases to my friends.

建議: Make your position clear and use smoother language. Start with a direct statement ("I prefer talking one-on-one") then give one clear reason and an example. Replace awkward phrases ("feel more conscious") with natural words like "more comfortable" or "less pressured."

範例: I prefer talking one-on-one because it's easier to focus and have a deeper conversation. For instance, when I discuss a problem with a single friend I can concentrate on their opinion without interruptions.

建議: Be concise and avoid unnatural wording ("I'll not be so angry"). Use a clear contrast structure: state preference for important matters and for casual topics give a reason. Reduce hesitations and keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: For important matters I prefer face-to-face conversations because they are clearer and more personal. For casual chats I usually use social media since it's faster and more convenient.

建議: Avoid extreme or vague claims and use calmer, natural language. Give a brief explanation and an example of when or why an argument might happen. Keep it to one topic sentence plus one supporting detail, and remove repetition.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends because I'm quick to react when I disagree. For example, we sometimes have heated debates about opinions on films, but we usually calm down and resolve things afterward.

× Most of the time yes, but I'm intimate for my nature so sometimes I just need to rest from the conversations and chatting and just to relax on my own.

✓ Most of the time, yes, but I'm introverted by nature, so sometimes I just need to rest from conversations and chatting and just relax on my own.

Use of preposition 'for' is incorrect with 'my nature'; 'by nature' is the correct idiom. 'Intimate' is the wrong word; 'introverted' fits the intended meaning. Also remove unnecessary 'the' before 'conversations' and the extra 'to' before 'relax' to make the sentence natural and grammatical. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Most of the time we chat about some current problems, umm, maybe about school because I'm at school right now, uh, or just about some casual things like weather, music, uh, films.

✓ Most of the time we chat about current issues, maybe about school because I'm at school right now, or just about casual things like the weather, music, or films.

Use 'current issues' rather than 'some current problems' for natural phrasing. 'The' is required before 'weather' when listing general topics. Remove filler words and unnecessary 'some' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× I like to talk about films because I really, uh, obsessed with them.

✓ I like to talk about films because I am really obsessed with them.

The verb 'am' is missing before 'really obsessed' to form the correct present state. This is an adjective phrase describing the subject; include the linking verb 'am'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I prefer the chat with only one friend because I need to only hear his or her opinion and I need to deal only with that.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because I only need to hear his or her opinion and I only need to deal with that.

Use gerund 'chatting' rather than 'the chat' for natural preference expression. Reorder 'only' for clearer placement: 'only need to hear' and 'only need to deal with' are more natural. Remove extra articles. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× And I feel more conscious when I talk with only one friend and not with a group of people because it's way harder than to talk with one person.

✓ I feel more comfortable when I talk with only one friend rather than a group of people because it's much harder to talk to a group than to one person.

Replace 'conscious' (incorrect meaning) with 'comfortable' or another intended adjective. Fix comparative structure: 'much harder to talk to a group than to one person' is correct. Use 'to' after 'harder' for infinitive form and replace 'way' with 'much' in formal speech. Grammar problem type ID: 20

× If it's something really essential then I would rather to talk face to face, but if it's some casual topic then I'll not be so angry if we will chat, uh, via social media.

✓ If it's something really essential, then I would rather talk face to face, but if it's a casual topic, I won't mind if we chat via social media.

'Would rather' is followed by the base verb without 'to'. Use 'won't mind' instead of 'I'll not be so angry' for natural phrasing. Do not use 'will' after 'if' in this type of conditional; use present simple 'chat'. Grammar problem type ID: 4

× And most of the time I think I use social media for chatting.

✓ Most of the time I think I use social media to chat.

Use 'to chat' rather than 'for chatting' for a more natural infinitive purpose phrase. The present simple 'use' is correct; adjust prepositional choice. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes, I'm so hot tempered so I really like to argue with someone and especially if they know how to communicate with arguing and they know how to express their feelings and their thoughts with really great arguments.

✓ Yes, I'm hot-tempered, so I often like to argue with someone, especially if they know how to argue constructively and express their feelings and thoughts with good arguments.

Hyphenate 'hot-tempered'. Replace 'so I really like' with 'so I often like' for frequency. 'Communicate with arguing' is awkward; use 'argue constructively'. 'Really great arguments' is informal; 'good arguments' is clearer. Adjust word order for natural English. Grammar problem type ID: 13